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"Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, because you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup."
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Muchas gracias to everyone who has left reviews. I love my story, and I will continue writing because I love it, but we all need encouragement from time to time. I am thankful for the time you took to read the story and especially for any reviews. Something as small as a 'thanks' or 'good chapter' means a lot to me.
Updates and In Progress News:
Since I'm now on AO3, (huzza!) I'll be posting there as well.
For the art critics out there, my deviant art page is under "usernamesaresilly" because user names are indeed silly. You'll see some odd Easter eggs I made a while back and a few tarots of Rav. No great art there, but so what. I enjoyed myself.
4/20- happy 420 to those who enjoy such things. Chapter is mostly done and has been sent to beta. Beta hasn't responded yet, but as soon as the chapter is cleaned up, I'll publish.
And this will be the last chapter for Eyes of Wolves! Out of all the sections, this one certainly took the longest to write. I had a lot of difficulty, not just with real life distractions, but just getting this bugger down. The only other section that will give me this much trouble will be Orzammar. I have very little written for that part, and there's quite a bit I'm struggling with. Unlike the rest of these that seem to be on the word count level of War and Peace, I might end up with an abbreviated version just to get it down.
At least Orzammar isn't happening soon. As is, I'm looking forward to a sexy assassin joining in the fun. ;)
10/9 - Oh wow. I can't believe how long it's been since I've been able to work on this! For anyone who likes this story, I am terribly sorry!
So, news. The first chapter in this section, and in fact, about 30k of words, I wrote over five years ago. I looked at that first chapter and threw up my hands. i can't i just can't.
It is crap and going to take some major work/rewriting. I whinned to my beta who told me to just rewrite or look at the next chapter. Next chapter isn't nearly as bad! I just need to make time to sit down with this sucker.
No, story isn't abandoned. You're just stuck with an author who had a difficult to work with brain.
I've got a poll open in case anyone is interested in giving feedback. Your thoughts and feels are appreciated. Of course, you can always PM me if you want personal warnings or have input. If non-con or violence (or anything, really) are triggers for you, I don't mind sending you a personal warning when those chapters are posted. I'm a pretty nice person most of the time. Just ask my enemies.
After discussions with some ridiculously awesome DA fanfic writers and reviewing to poll results thus far, I'm going to stop putting up individual chapter warnings aside from a little NSFW for sexually explicit chapters. Just beware that this is a dark fantasy. Very, very heavy themes. Violence, torture, character death, psychological issues--you name it. I also write the gamut of sexual situations from full consenting partners, dub-con, non-con, rape, m/f, m/m, maybe some f/f, threesomes, kinks, and there's a whole lot of sex in this story. Be prepared for what you're getting into.
About this fanfic:
I started this after Awakenings came out but before Witch Hunt or DA2 was announced. This series began weaving itself during a night of insomnia, which I have often, when I let my characters' lives continue after the game. Part 3 (which takes place after the Fifth Blight) was actually what I started writing first then worked back to fill out the characters' history. I don’t own a copy of Awakenings, so everything after Origins is my own imaginings with some inspiration taken from the Dragon Age wiki site.
There have been a considerable number of changes to canon since Origins came out. Well, some of those can be worked in, but for the most part, I write with what interested me about Origins and expand on that. There are some hints and plot reference (and perhaps a character or two) from DA II, but otherwise this is the story of 'The Warden'.
The story is divided into sections, some of which are book length. With that in mind, you can view this fic more as a series of books than as one single story.
Married Life - Covers the few months of marriage between Raviathan and Nesiara.
Strange Bedfellows - Duncan and Raviathan travel to Ostagar.
Plans and Tactics - Events at Ostagar.
Crossroads - Lothering
Eyes of Wolves - Nature of the Beast quest.
Burn and Fade - The Broken Circle quest.
Interlude - One chapter of the characters discussing life and love.
Ashes to Ashes - Redcliffe and Eamon's quest
Honor the Stone - (not sure if I like that title) Orzammar
Home Again - Denerim and the Landsmeet
The Final Road - Post-Landsmeet and the Final Battle
Goodbyes - Last three chapters of this story.
About writing this sucker:
This is my very first fanfic, and indeed, one of my first creative writing projects aside from two short stories I wrote almost a decade ago (a decade ago at the first posting of this story, and crap I'm getting old). I did not intend to recount the Origins tale, but as the expression often goes concerning one night stands, one thing led to another. Now I feel like I have a sixteen year old asking for the car keys. So be it.
In any case, despite my failings as a writer, I hope you enjoy the story. Thank you for taking the time to check my story out, and special thanks to everyone who leaves feedback. Love to you.
A Note on Mary Sue and other Avatars:
There's that moment of dread when a writer first learns of the Mary Sue (or Gary Stu or Marty Stu or whatevers). Dear God, I have done a thing! At first I was paranoid about it, but as the years have gone by and I've had a chance to read more and reflect, it's not something I concern myself with anymore.
First issue is "The Perfect Person". To me, a character isn't a list of traits just like people aren't a list of traits. Certainly there's a matter of degree, and our personalities do have an ebb and flow with what we're feeling at a particular moment, but we're more than just 'stubborn' or 'secretive'. We are experiences, feelings, products of culture, the age we live in, technology, social and economic class, and so on.
Also, the issue of assigning traits (make sure your OC has flaws!) is very problematic. Stubborn can get you through tough situations that others would fail at, or it could make you insufferable and unreasonable. Secretive lends an air of mystery, but how many of us were frustrated to angry with Duncan for holding back information on the archdemon? Secretive can also be counterproductive an unnecessary. Miserly or thrifty, brash or brave: it's all in perception and situation.
Secondly, the application of Mary Sue is arbitrary at best and is often destructive. Tony Stark and Bruce Wayne both completely fit the bill for Gary Studom: rich, genius levels of intelligence, *almost* super human physical abilities, handsome, tortured pasts, faithful sidekicks, a constant stream of new love interests begging to have the hero's love child. Yet... I can't remember ever hearing them called Sues. Hmm. How strange.
Yet fanfic writers are shamed or scared of the mention of Sue, so they create convoluted, unlikable characters to avoid this. Hence the birth of the Anti-Sue, which is still a veiled Mary Sue. Enough with the shaming. If a character is shallow, call the character shallow. If the character is taking up too much of the story and becomes the hub of every other character's universe, call it bad writing if you'd like, but that seems to be most published novels in existence.
Which brings me to another point: Just because I write something doesn't mean I agree with it.
I write about murder, violence, and rape. Do I need to say I don't endorse any of those things in real life? If I write something about religion, class, race, or any other subject, please don't think that's my opinion. My characters' actions and opinions are not mine. I happen to agree with some, but I also absolutely disagree with others. What I write is not what I personally believe.
These are characters, not avatars or my own personal mouthpieces.