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Things to know about me as a reviewer:

I love reading and as a graduate of literature I have very high standards. If I think your story is bad, I will tell you. If you have spelling, grammatical errors or typos, I will tell you. If I think there are ways for you to improve, I will tell you. Despite what people may think, these are what make good reviews.

If you don't like constructive criticism, you won't like me but I don't care. I'm not here to make friends. I'm here to help you write better stories. If you're just looking for someone to pat you on the back and give you another review, then you need to go looking for a popularity contest.

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Basic Life Support by Greysouthpaw reviews
Jeff and the gang are doing a first aid course for extra credit over the summer, when the Dean arrives with an idea to save the life of Greendale Community College. With an opportunity to help revive their school and earn a few credits in the process, why wouldn't the group sign up to the new course? A bit of humor, a bit of romance, something to hold us all over until next season.
Community - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 41,349 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 65 - Updated: 1/23 - Published: 7/4/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
Introduction to Proxy Warfare by Major Wes Janson reviews
It's year four at Greendale, and life is back to relative normal. Pierce and Shirley have a sandwich shop together. Britta is working on her Psych major. Abed has a therapist. Troy is a first year AC messiah. Jeff is searching for his father. And finally, Annie is trying to figure out what she really wants from life. But one little change can easily disrupt the fragile balance...
Community - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 84,015 - Reviews: 81 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 5/20/2014 - Published: 8/25/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E.
guess what we'll discover by shannanagin reviews
Jeff gets a new roommate.
Community - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 12 - Words: 77,370 - Reviews: 189 - Favs: 352 - Follows: 259 - Updated: 12/20/2013 - Published: 2/13/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
At Least It Was Here by nyclove3 reviews
Post Season 3 finale. What happens when Jeff and Annie meet unexpectedly while on vacation in Europe? Nothing. Right? *three chapters rated M*
Community - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 59,694 - Reviews: 134 - Favs: 136 - Follows: 188 - Updated: 1/27/2013 - Published: 6/8/2012 - Annie E., Jeff W.
I Don't Love You, But I Always Will by LoveOutLoud11 reviews
Four years ago, Meredith left needing to find inspiration. And she did. Derek was left heartbroken and hopeful, waiting for her return. Now four years after Derek kissed some nurse in the scrub room, she's back for her fellowship. And she's not alone. Is Derek ready for what's to come? Is Meredith ready? Slightly AU.
Grey's Anatomy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 46,502 - Reviews: 137 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 126 - Updated: 12/3/2012 - Published: 6/6/2012 - Derek S., Meredith G.
What the Heart Wants by LittleMender reviews
He had used the phrase so often, flippantly as it applied to others. Now they stood forehead to forehead, eyes closed. He infused the words with everything he felt for her . . .
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 34,916 - Reviews: 135 - Favs: 127 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 8/24/2012 - Published: 7/9/2012 - Teresa L., Patrick J. - Complete
The Five Stages Of Break Up Grief by Carly-M reviews
The study group think Jeff & Annie are on the verge of another break-up - are they prepared to face the five stages of grief all over again?
Community - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,274 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 4 - Published: 7/26/2012 - Annie E., Jeff W. - Complete
It's Always Open Season On Princesses by Elsiesnuffin reviews
Annie is given the opportunity to do some travelling over the summer after her second year at Greendale. Title is in reference to the film 'Roman Holiday'.
Community - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 32 - Words: 121,863 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 44 - Updated: 7/9/2012 - Published: 4/25/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
If That Mockingbird Don't Sing by SSAEmilyHotchner reviews
Just when it seems as if nothing could go wrong in the lives of Emily and Aaron Hotchner, everything does. When they are forced to suffer the loss of a precious baby boy, how will they possibly cope? Will love persevere, or come to an unfortunate end? NOW COMPLETE.
Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 24 - Words: 70,937 - Reviews: 437 - Favs: 57 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 6/24/2012 - Published: 2/14/2012 - E. Prentiss, A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete
Working out the Kinks by Crittab reviews
Jeff and Annie enter into a purely sexual relationship, in which they explore one another's dirtiest and most scandalous kinks. Very NC-17!
Community - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 22,119 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 5/13/2012 - Published: 5/1/2012 - Annie E., Jeff W. - Complete
The Final Year by nyclove3 reviews
A series of moments in Jeff and Annie's relationship starting in the summer before their final year at Greendale, leading all the way to Graduation.
Community - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 60,819 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 164 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 5/6/2012 - Published: 3/2/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
Moments by Crittab reviews
A series of disconnected moments in Jeff and Annie's romantic relationship. Future fic.
Community - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 32,112 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 4/14/2012 - Published: 1/10/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
5 Times Jeff Said Yes And 1 Time Annie Did by Elsiesnuffin reviews
Written for teruel a witch over at M/M last year.
Community - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,552 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/13/2012 - Jeff W., Annie E. - Complete
Evolved by shannanagin reviews
Jeff and Annie spend the summer together.
Community - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,824 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 4 - Published: 2/13/2012 - Annie E., Jeff W. - Complete
Riding it Out by nyclove3 reviews
Jeff is forced to evaluate his feelings when Annie runs into the Black Rider. *final chapter rated M*
Community - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,294 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 2/11/2012 - Published: 1/24/2012 - Annie E., Jeff W. - Complete