Poll: Spartans X Dragons - John's Harem Vote Now!
Author has written 3 stories for Halo, High School DxD/ハイスクールD×D, and Infinite Stratos/IS<インフィニット・ストラトス>.
Spartans X Dragons: Chapter 6 (May or may not be rewritten)
I currently don't like the quality of the chapter. I am still working on it and depending on how it ends out, I may rewrite it. As on why it's taking so damn long: I got an essay to do on vegetarians and school take priorities over everything else.
Currently, I'm trying to fix John's personality in the story. If people PM me and pension for me to just release the damn thing, I'll do it, but the quality may be bad.
Also, the setting will be slightly altered to what I previously envisioned, it would seem the plot would increase in pace faster than expected.
If you have any questions or suggestions, please PM me.
I may not always answer or do your suggestions or PMs.
Read this during your spare time or time you want to waste because I can easily get carried away.
Name: Not giving -_- (yet)
Hello everyone, this is my third version of my profile. I have just come out of finishing chapter 9 of IDGPE so you know when this was edited.
I'm a significantly more experienced compared to my dreadful attempt at a Fan Fic several years ago on the RuneScape forums. I still suffer from the same disease I always carry, writer's block. Something that spasmodically occurs once every two to three writing sessions.
My grammar is improving, I'm catching my mistakes now but I still use grammar check. My spelling isn't the greatest since spell check is making me rust. I am getting a lot better at describing things and I'm starting to use bigger words...err what? I'm starting to better convey my picture (to myself anyways) to people...I guess.
Overall, I am improving. The things that are still stagnating in progression are how I make my plot flow and how my chapters are written. If you haven't noticed, I tend to enjoy typing longer chapters compared to the average Fic-writer. I write about 8k words and the highest I've ever gotten is 20k words on one chapter. Writing that amount takes dedication, something I'm severely lacking right now. I frequently drop in and out of writers block, I might even take three months to update a story, something I am NOT proud of.
I would like to write more, but the problem occurs when I want to convey something to my audience but I just can't remember or find the right word for it or my fight scenes are too complex for me to write in detail without losing it's feel. I also am DREADFULLY bad at shocking people. My humor is bad as well, I suppose. Most of my more recent chapters have been void of humor since I'm starting to lean more towards angst and dark fics, which shouldn't really be a surprise since two of my fics are Halo crossovers.
I do have the moments where I transition the plot superbly well but might make some mistakes or just get bored of it and run out of fuel, something like my 4th chapter to IDGPE, the rewritten version. The beginning, in my opinion, was slow and great if you enjoy slice of life, then it gets into a more serious mood during the War Games and Ichika fight scene. Then it starts stagnating after the Ichika fight scene where I assume I just tried to type whatever the hell I wanted. Then I cut it off abruptly after running out of fuel. Still, that is my favorite chapter out of all the writings I have created.
As for my fight scenes...
I like blood. And Gore. I watched quite a bit of Happy Tree Friends...
Yeah that's all I have to say about my fight scenes besides that I kind of envy Monty Oum (RWBY and Red VS Blue CGI Animator) since he can create some of the most epic fight scenes in the history of fight scenes. I can do that do, but I just can't put it into words well. A notable example of me not putting it well would be my fight between Gen and the Terrain Karatas Delta Squad Dimension Spanners during the first chapter to High School DxD: Parallel Worlds. Yeah, that was a weird one and was an epic fail on my part since I sucked at making it look cool.
Another problem I have and that I'm trying to fix is the strategy and how I describe my fights. I suck at HUGE amazing strategies. I can't make a good one up without completely throwing out the window variables on how to prevent it, counter strategies that will be created and counter strategies that SHOULDN'T work but did. It's self explanatory. My fight scenes however are...slightly more complicated.
Again, this goes back to Monty Oum's fight scenes since he has the luxury of animating them, he can add in all the crazy ideas that he has in his mind. I, however, don't. I try to emulate that by creating an image in people's minds and without any word on how people are reacting to these fights, I'll just assume that they get the idea. I don't like lazy work...well not entirely. So saying something similar to a DBZ clash just sounds lazy, but it's a lot easier and makes the fight seem longer (not the story) in my mind. However, if I try to be as descriptive as possible, it just gets confusing.
For example, in chapter 2 I believe of Spartans X Dragons, I try to describe a hand lock. I had to put A BLOCK OF TEXT IN BOLD to explain how it worked. Looking back at it, I didn't like it at all. I don't put author's notes in my fics anymore after hearing how much people hated them. So, I have to resort to those DBZ clashes descriptions or just a very lazy and boring description which I loathe. Anyways, those DBZ clashes are cool when done correctly, something I'm trying to implement. When I say "done correctly" I mean something like in the final battle of Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann during the sword clash between (forgot his name) and the Anti-Spiral. That is what I call "cool" and a DBZ clash done "correctly". A DBZ Clash done REALLY correctly would be on, shocker, Dragon Ball Z Battle of Gods, when Goku goes Super Saiyan and "Hero" starts playing.
I think I prolonged this profile for a bit too long and I'll leave you alone for now. The rest, until the line break, is stuff from the first edit.
ZnTXSAO Fan Fiction I highly recommend you reading:
Halkegenia Online: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8903072/1/Halkegenia-Online
I changed this to make it more appealing to the eyes.
"Main" OC Character:
Age: (Several quintillion years old. Or was it several hundred quadrillion?)
OPness Level: Over 9,000
Opness Level compared to canon characters: He will middle finger Type-Moon, kick Goku's ass, annihiliate Superman and Rape (not literally) all BETA.
Combat Level (My ranking): 1,000,000,000 out of 1,000,000,000,000
Appearance: Eh...(yeah, no)
Personality: Talk to me for a bit and that's how he should be. No, I'm not a dick, yes I do troll, no I'm not mean, yes I do want to help people, yes I do try to be a nice guy, no I'm not always a nice guy.
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