Poll: I've read through 'Ash's Shadow Adventure' and have noticed A LOT of mistakes. So I'm planning on redoing it. What I want to know is if you guys want me to simply fix my mistakes and leave everything as it is, or completely rewrite the story with the same basic plot line and better and possibly longer chapters. Please note that if I do rewrite it, the new story will take the place of the old one. Vote Now!
Author has written 5 stories for Misc. Plays/Musicals, Rise of the Guardians, Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's, and Pokémon.
Username: SpiritBlackPaw - This has been changed as of 10/14/2016 at 11:30 AM. Previous Username: God of Spirits-Spirit Black
Age: Not Given
Location: United States of America
Current Hobbies: Reading (Mostly Fanfiction), writing, and drawing.
For examples of a few of my drawings, head to deviantart.com and search the username Spirit-Black.
REASONS TO JOIN THE DARK SIDE (If you wish to join add this list to your profile):
1. We have cookies (last I checked there was hot chocolate too)
2. Meet the recruitment bunny!
3. You get a cool dark cape that covers your whole body!
4. You get a really cool crazy laugh! Practice with me people: MWAHAHAHAHA *cough* *cough*!
5. You get to walk out of shadows mysteriously and freak out the good guy!
6. One word: UNDERLINGS! Someone to get things for you when you're too lazy to do them yourself... Now that's the life!
7. Money Money Money : Ever notice that we are usually much richer than the good guys?
Neon: For the recruitment bunny and cookies! (And hot chocolate)
Lazer: For the dark cape and the underlings and crazy laugh! MWAHAHAHAHAHA *cough* *cough*
Katyuana: For the mysterious shadow walking, underlings, and moneys! :D Maybe the laugh too... MWAHAHAHAHAHA! *cough* *cough*
God of Spirits-Spirit Black: Everything >:3
A teenage girl about 17 had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away.
As she walked along under the tall elm trees, she asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he were waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her.
When she reached the end of the alley, she walked right past the man and arrived home safely.
The following day, she read in the newspaper that a young girl had been raped in the same alley just twenty minutes after she had been there. Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and the fact that it could have been her, she began to cry. Thanking the Lord for her safety and to help this young woman, she decided to go to the police station.
She felt she could recognize the man, so she told them her story. The police asked her if she would be willing to look at a lineup to see if she could identify him. She agreed and immediately pointed out the man she had seen in the alley the night before. When the man was told he had been identified, he immediately broke down and confessed.
The officer thanked her for her bravery and asked if there was anything they could do for her. She asked if they would ask the man one question. She was curious as to why he had not attacked her.
When the policeman asked him, he answered, "Because she wasn't alone. She had two tall men walking on either side of her."
You're never alone...
93 Percent Of the people who read this won't repost it.
Don't be one of those people.
Believe in God and he'll always be there to protect you.
Notice: To all those who think Homophobia is wrong and want to fight for a better future for our gay and lesbian friends, please repost this into your profile:
I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.
I am the prostitute working the streets because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.
I am the sister who holds her gay brother tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.
We are the parents who buried our daughter long before her time.
I am the man who died alone in the hospital because they would not let my partner of twenty-seven years into the room.
I am the foster child who wakes up with nightmares of being taken away from the two fathers who are the only loving family I have ever had. I wish they could
I am one of the lucky ones, I guess. I survived the attack that left me in a coma for three weeks, and in another year I will probably be able to walk again.
I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed myself just weeks before graduating high school. It was simply too much to bear.
We are the couple who had the realtor hang up on us when she found out we wanted to rent a one-bedroom for two men.
I am the person who never knows which bathroom I should use if I want to avoid getting the management called on me.
I am the mother who is not allowed to even visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised. The court says I am an unfit mother because I now live with another
I am the domestic-violence survivor who found the support system grow suddenly cold and distant when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.
I am the domestic-violence survivor who has no support system to turn to because I am male.
I am the father who has never hugged his son because I grew up afraid to show affection to other men.
I am the home-economics teacher who always wanted to teach gym until someone told me that only lesbians do that.
I am the man who died when the paramedics stopped treating me as soon as they realized I was transsexual.
I am the person who feels guilty because I think I could be a much better person if I did not have to always deal with society hating me.
I am the man who stopped attending church, not because I don't believe, but because they closed their doors to my kind.
I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most, love.
I am the person who is afraid of telling his loving Christian parents she loves another female.
Re-post this if you believe homophobia is wrong. Please do your part to end it.
This is a true story. A girl died in 1933. A man buried her when she was still alive. The murderer chanted, "Toma SOta Balcu", as he buried her.Now that you have read the chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night, she will be on your ceiling. She will suffocate you like she was. If you post this on your profile, she will not bother you. Your kindness will be rewarded.
-If you've been on the computer for hours on end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this onto your profile.(Does the phone count?)
-Recent studies show that 92% of teenagers have moved on to rap. If you're part of the 8% that hasn't, put this in your profile.
-If you took the time to read all of these (and you usually do), copy and paste this onto your profile.
-If you would kill to have wings, post this in your profile.
--There's nothing wrong with arguing with yourself. It's when you argue with yourself and LOSE when it's weird. If you agree, copy this and put it in your profile
-If your friends are WEIRD (But not as weird as you) put this on your profile.
-90 percent of teens today would die if Facebook had a system failure and was completely destroyed. If you are one of the 10 percent that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your Profile
-93 percent of teens would have an emotianal breakdown if someone called them a freak. If you're part of the 7 percent who would say, "What was your first clue?" and/or take it as a compliment, copy and paste this into your profile.
- the number 1 way to annoy Iggy in maximum ride: run back and forth in front of him yelling "Now you see me now you don't!"