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Joined 08-25-12, id: 4221028, Profile Updated: 05-01-16
Author has written 9 stories for Elder Scroll series, Invader Zim, Halo, Star Wars Rebels, Samurai Jack, and Game of Thrones.

Hey fellow writers, observers, and critics. Please feel free to bask in my glow. Just kidding, but seriously, leave some comments on my work so i can better improve.

Update 02 May 2016: Jon Snow's back, and confirmed as Azor Ahai! Read it and weep, haters!


My original characters;

Decius: male Imperial Legate (Commander) of the Ninth Legion. Age: 52.

Anslaf: male Nord Dragonborn. The Blackwolf. Age: 25.

Elerand: male Altmer Inquisitor. Age: 24

Herman Alder: male Second-in-command of the Ninth Legion. Nord Prefect. Age: 64

My sister's OC that I am using with her expressed permission.

Syrenne: female Breton assassin. Age: 22


And finally, a list of things in fiction that I disagree with or do not like:

Mary Sues/Gary Stu's, in the sense of a completely overpowered character that solves everyone's problems by Chapter five, and/or canon characters want to have sex with him/her for no reason whatsoever. They also tend to be poor self inserts.

Self-insert romance fics. Most are very poorly written and the canon character goes completely out of character to fall in love with her (I use her since most romance fics involve a female OC). However, there are exceptions to this, such as "The Stark and His Frey." by jemlou. I recommend anyone who writes a purely romance fiction look at her story first and study it.

Bad grammar/spelling: To be clear, I can handle a missed comma or a misspelled word here or there, as long as the vast majority of the fic is legible and grammatically correct. What I cannot stand are fics that have spelling so poor, it would seem the author skipped grade school altogether. I will not read your work if it honestly looks like a chimp banged on a keyboard and hit the send button by mistake.

incest/pedo/necro/bestiality shipping or any combination thereof. That stuff is beyond mentally disturbing, and I will refuse to read or review any work that contains stuff like that. Example: Jaime Lannister X Arya Stark. Please keep that in your head and out of this site.

Gay fics I couldn't care for one way or the other, but doesn't mean I'll necessary read them.

Character derailment: Please for the love of God, do not create a OC who is well liked and have them do a complete 180 halfway through the story without explaining how or why they had this sudden change in personality. (I'm now looking at you, 343 Industries)

If you spam my stories with shit like "Lol this story sucks my ballz. U r gay!" like you are a gorilla with autism, with leaving no advice or actual criticism, your getting your ass blocked and reported. Actually put some thought into your reviews, and not look like a retarded dog that's eternally satisfied with getting a kick out of licking your own asshole.


About my writing style: I base my writing style off of Matthew J. Stover's style, specifically the style featured in the Revenge of the Sith novelization.


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Forever After by Punderstatement reviews
Some things in life are too cruel to let stand. And so they must be changed, no matter the cost. Story takes place after the end of Samurai Jack for the only reason you would want it to. If you're looking for some sweet, sweet Jack and Ashi end up back together storytelling then Jashi shippers rejoice! Rated M because Jack's not going to be alone anymore.
Samurai Jack - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 36,136 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 8/17 - Published: 5/29
Star Wars: Rebels: Hearts of Warriors by MandoCommander reviews
Fourth installment in my ongoing series. Two years have passed since the Battle of Hutta, with the Galactic Civil War now in full swing as the Rebellion struggles to keep up the fight against the Empire. As a new hope emerges, both Ezra and Sabine are summoned to Mandalorian space at the discretion of Mand'alor himself. As the guns of war intensify, a new set of challenges await.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 6 - Words: 32,816 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 45 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 8/5 - Published: 5/16 - [Ezra B., Sabine W.] [Kanan J., Hera S.]
The New Mand'alor by Specter7 reviews
Finally possessing the Darksaber, Sabine and Ezra travel across the galaxy to recruit the Mandalorians—including the notorious Death Watch. Embroiled in her family's quest for power, Sabine fights for the title of Mand'alor. Yet leading her people comes at a price and Sabine faces problems that no one in the Star Wars universe has ever had to face before…
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 35,549 - Reviews: 88 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 105 - Updated: 7/30 - Published: 2/21 - [Ezra B., Sabine W.] C1-10PR
The Fugitive by ja54591 reviews
Hunted, wounded, and abandoned by her family, Sabine is forced into an uneasy partnership with a team of mysterious rogues in order to escape the clutches of the Empire. When the group uncovers a plot that threatens to unleash calamity on the galaxy, Sabine must choose between running to save herself or fighting for the good of others.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 15,751 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 7/10 - Published: 5/22 - Kanan J., G. Orrelios/Zeb, Sabine W., Hera S.
Invictus - Rome: Total War by Kanuro5 reviews
In 85 B.C, the Senatorial Army of the Republic is being decimated by barbarian hordes and are in dire need of rescue. The Senate dispatched the elite 28th Legion of the Julii family under the leadership of the Heir to the Julii, Lucius Julius, to save the Senatorial Army. Rated M for Graphic war violence, language, and disturbing images.
Total War series - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 44 - Words: 371,836 - Reviews: 153 - Favs: 66 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 7/7 - Published: 10/23/2013 - Complete
Covert Ops by Mach56 reviews
Far after the fall of Atollon Base, the Rebellion continues to grow in spite of the Empire's growing threat and control, with multiple rebel groups beginning to coalesce and coordinate against the Empire's activities. In this tumultuous period, Sabine Wren and Ezra Bridger are sent on a mission to the Mid-Rim world of Shu-Torun to infiltrate an Imperial Conference...
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 36,824 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 75 - Updated: 6/8 - Published: 2/9 - [Ezra B., Sabine W.] Inquisitor
Star Wars: Rebels: The Promised Day by MandoCommander reviews
Final installment in my trilogy. Several months after the mission to the Rakata homeworld, the nemesis of the Ghost crew returns from beyond the Galaxy with his and the Emperor's prize in tow. Ezra & Sabine, Kanan & Hera, and the rest of the Rebellion will stand shoulder to shoulder in the face of the oncoming storm. The question is, will it be enough? Light in Dark, Dark in Light.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 61,068 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 42 - Updated: 5/16 - Published: 1/2 - [Ezra B., Sabine W.] [Kanan J., Hera S.] - Complete
The Sith & The Senator by WrittinInStone reviews
AU. Anakin Skywalker is captured and sold into slavery to Darth Sidious at the tender age of nine. Padmé Amidala, Queen of Naboo, faces the horrors of the Trade Federation's invasion without the help of the Galactic Senate. Both become warped by their experiences; hardened, vicious, cunning. But then they meet their match… in one another. And it changes the Republic for all time.
Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 35 - Words: 223,578 - Reviews: 3090 - Favs: 2,062 - Follows: 2,221 - Updated: 3/12 - Published: 11/1/2011 - Darth Vader, Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan K., Padmé Amidala
The Tempest by ja54591 reviews
Preparing for their mission following "Trials of the Darksaber," a sparring match between Ezra and Sabine escalates from a test of strength to a fight to overcome the weight of Sabine's past.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,217 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 7 - Published: 1/30 - Ezra B., Sabine W. - Complete
Growing Insurgency by ja54591 reviews
Coming of age in the shadow of the Galactic Empire, the youngest members of the Ghost crew must learn how to survive in an intensifying conflict. Along the way, Ezra and Sabine learn hard truths about the value of trust, the nature of war, and the importance of family. Episodic shorts follow their development, from their beginnings on Lothal to the events of Season 3.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,256 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 60 - Updated: 1/22 - Published: 10/16/2016 - Ezra B., Sabine W.
Star Wars: Rebels: Obscured Ambition by MandoCommander reviews
Sequel to The Rising Darkness. Set between the 2nd & 3rd Season. As the Rebellion grows in strength, so do the dangers they face. A mission to a maximum security Imperial prison drives home this reality for Ezra, Sabine, Zeb and Chopper. Meanwhile, Kanan and Hera undertake an assignment alone. Little do the Rebels know the best of the Inquisition has a plan of their own...
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 47,566 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 1/2 - Published: 10/8/2016 - [Ezra B., Sabine W.] [Kanan J., Hera S.] - Complete
Halo 5: Reclamation by Slipspace Anomaly reviews
John-117 has always followed orders. Jameson Locke has always done what is necessary. When an ancient alien menace threatens humanity and their leaders betray them, they are faced with a choice: Will they remain as they were? Or will they reclaim their lost humanity?
Halo - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 40 - Words: 251,564 - Reviews: 265 - Favs: 230 - Follows: 242 - Updated: 12/19/2016 - Published: 10/31/2015 - Master Chief/John-117, C. Halsey, J. Locke - Complete
Halo: Civil War by Cor Tenebrae reviews
The Great War has ended, yet humanity continues to face threats from both within and without. All are mere distractions to the true danger. A young, ambitious ONI officer seeks to plunge the UNSC into the greatest period of internal conflict mankind has ever seen. He will manipulate the Master Chief into helping him do it, even if that means doing a all he can to bring Her back
Halo - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 68 - Words: 205,710 - Reviews: 477 - Favs: 144 - Follows: 136 - Updated: 7/24/2016 - Published: 10/14/2013 - Master Chief/John-117, Cortana
Dragonsoul by Iron Stag reviews
Skyrim is rebuilding after the events of the Draugr war, and everything seems to be improving. But when the Emperor is mysteriously murdered, Lords and Nobles squabble over rule of the Empire and who will sit on the Dragon Throne. Meanwhile, an organization of Elven overlords weave the strings to bring about the fall of the Empire, and a new age. *Sequel to "Dragonfire"*
Elder Scroll series - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 95 - Words: 199,294 - Reviews: 531 - Favs: 123 - Follows: 129 - Updated: 5/17/2016 - Published: 9/15/2013 - [Dragonborn/Dovahkiin, Serana] Miraak, Hermaeus Mora - Complete
What You're Risking Your Life For by MostTulip reviews
Ned Stark does not reach the Tower of Joy before Lyanna Stark gives birth. To protect their future king, the three Kingsguard decide to take Jon Targaryen across the Narrow Sea, so he may be raised with his aunt and uncle. They want to get back. But as they learn, Westeros is not easy to reach. And there are other challenges they must face, if they want to return home.
Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Family/Fantasy - Chapters: 16 - Words: 85,837 - Reviews: 161 - Favs: 748 - Follows: 953 - Updated: 1/24/2016 - Published: 9/20/2014 - [Daenerys T., Jon S.] Lyanna S.
Vengeance and Justice: The Harpy and the Hippogriff by Psykic Ninja reviews
A newly risen Ghiscari Legate finds himself thrust into the chaos of war: His mission; to destroy the enemies of a city that fears him and a people who do not know him. His dream; to bring about a revolution that will topple the corrupt masters of the city and shake the world to it's very core...
Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 28,997 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 1/19/2016 - Published: 9/14/2015 - OC
Frozen Fire by rainonmonday reviews
Eddard Stark offered her a deal. Safe return to the Seven Kingdoms but in exchange she would need to marry his son, to keep her under watch instead of killing her like Robert wanted. She accepted because she believed she could work on her plans from within. She could turn the Young Wolf in her ally. But she wasn't expecting Robb Stark not to be like the men she knew.
Game of Thrones - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 50 - Words: 131,234 - Reviews: 1532 - Favs: 2,862 - Follows: 3,268 - Updated: 1/15/2016 - Published: 6/9/2013 - [Daenerys T., Robb S.]
Thematic Analysis of Halo 5 by Cor Tenebrae reviews
A series of interwoven essays on the underlying themes of Halo 5, focusing heavily on the inherent symbolism of Cortana's rebellion, as well as making tentative predictions on the possible future of Halo's narrative.
Halo - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,660 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 12/2/2015 - Published: 11/21/2015
Prometheus by TheIronSamurai reviews
Four years after the end of the Human-Covenant war, the galaxy has changed. Humanity has taken its rightful place among the stars. Spartans have gone from being silent defenders to the vanguard of humanity's expansion. This role comes at a price, however. As humanity reclaims its ancient birthright, one Spartan team will stand at the center of it all.
Halo - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 33,747 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 10/30/2015 - Published: 12/4/2014 - Serin O./Serin-017, Black-Box/BB, OC
Halo: Rebirth by TRX108 reviews
After Halo 4(SPOILER)-Humanity is saved, the Didact defeated. The future looks bright, but at a terrible cost in John's eyes. While the Master Chief struggles with coming to terms with the loss of his closest companion, old enemies close in. But all is not lost, the Rebirth is at hand. Rated M-Violence, Adult Language, Adult Content. Please review :) Master Chief/John-117 x Cortana
Halo - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 75,878 - Reviews: 268 - Favs: 439 - Follows: 564 - Updated: 10/21/2015 - Published: 12/20/2012 - [Master Chief/John-117, Cortana] OC, S. Palmer
Of Kings, Draugr, and Dragons by DoctorEagle reviews
The Dragonborn, Mjoll, and an assassin from the Dark Brotherhood travel to Westeros after learning that Paarthurnax senses two forces at work. Not only is a large army of ice draugr approaching, but new dragon life has also emerged. The adventurers must enter a foreign land to find out what is happening, stop the draugr, and find the dragons before they become wild and dangerous.
Crossover - Elder Scroll series & Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 42 - Words: 422,577 - Reviews: 484 - Favs: 894 - Follows: 780 - Updated: 8/9/2015 - Published: 5/16/2014 - [Dragonborn/Dovahkiin, Daenerys T.] Mjoll the Lioness, Sansa S. - Complete
Game of Thrones: Vendetta by Snafu the Great reviews
A Lannister always pays their debts, but the House of Maegyr invented vendetta. When word of the Red Wedding reaches Talisa's father, Volantene nobleman/warlord Lucian Maegyr, he sets off for Westeros with his sellsword army, accompanied by the surviving members of House Targaryen. The game of thrones is about to get even more bloody.
Game of Thrones - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 64,258 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 362 - Follows: 155 - Updated: 5/5/2014 - Published: 3/2/2014 - Complete
Dragonfire by Iron Stag reviews
The Draugr have invaded Skyrim led by Konahrik, who has awoken from slumber and seeks to exact revenge upon the bane of his master, while the Dragonborn has been missing for years. Follow as a Legionnaire leads a group of hopeless survivors to Solitude. A Legate is trapped inside a fort with his men, left to starve. And an everlasting search for the Dragonborn commences. (MostlyOC)
Elder Scroll series - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 60 - Words: 124,136 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 168 - Follows: 123 - Updated: 4/3/2014 - Published: 4/3/2013 - Dragonborn/Dovahkiin, Serana, Hermaeus Mora - Complete
One Missed Strike: The New Jedi Order by Davin Sunrider reviews
(NJO AU) The line can no longer be held. Twenty-one years after the historic Treaty of Alderaan, war has come to the galaxy once again...
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 42 - Words: 258,130 - Reviews: 522 - Favs: 290 - Follows: 195 - Updated: 10/7/2013 - Published: 11/11/2011 - Luke S., Darth Vader, Thrawn, Jacen S. - Complete
Halo: Dark Storm Rising by Don113 reviews
This is a crossover of Halo and Star Wars, taking place post-Halo 3 and during the early years of the Galactic Civil War. The UNSC has never been stronger since it's founding, but darkness looms on the horizon as the Empire begins preparations to invade.
Crossover - Star Wars & Halo - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 9 - Words: 48,320 - Reviews: 142 - Favs: 260 - Follows: 196 - Updated: 5/18/2010 - Published: 3/17/2010 - Darth Vader, Master Chief/John-117 - Complete
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A Song of Ghosts and Wolves reviews
When a mysterious man shows up on Lothal decimating Imperial patrols, the Ghost crew is sent to investigate, with the aim of possibly recruiting him into the Rebellion. What they find is nothing short of shocking; a man returned from the dead by the will of the Force itself. A man whose mission is now to show the Emperor the true meaning of his ancient words: Winter is Coming.
Crossover - Star Wars Rebels & Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 21 - Words: 89,343 - Reviews: 124 - Favs: 77 - Follows: 83 - Updated: 7/19 - Published: 10/17/2016 - [Sabine W., Ezra B.] Robb S., Kanan J.
Ice and Fire: Total War reviews
The Others, long thought dead by the races of men, have returned. The Dragonborn hero of Skyrim, Anslaf Delmar, known as the Blackwolf, must now unite the Seven Kingdoms of Westeros, and find and train the 'Azor Ahai' of prophecy. He will need allies from both Tamriel and this new land, for there are those who would love nothing more than total war. (ON HIATUS)
Crossover - Elder Scroll series & Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 30 - Words: 111,006 - Reviews: 247 - Favs: 382 - Follows: 496 - Updated: 7/1 - Published: 3/24/2014 - [Erik the Slayer, Sansa S.] Dragonborn/Dovahkiin, Eddard S.
Lament for Ashi
A poem I composed for Ashi, based on the work of J.R.R Tolkien, "Lament for Boromir".
Samurai Jack - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/27 - Complete
Samurai Jack: The Epilogue reviews
Two thousand years have passed, into our current timeline. The world has changed much since then. New nations have risen, technology has improved, and for a young woman going to college in Montana, life could not get more strange than on the day she meet an old wandering hermit sitting on a bench, who had a grand tale to tell her, one of victory and tragedy.
Samurai Jack - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,259 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 9 - Published: 5/21 - Odin, Ashi - Complete
Kill Them All reviews
Inspired by the Artwork of Meldy-Arts and by Game of Thrones. Oneshot.
Star Wars Rebels - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 633 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/7 - Hera S. - Complete
The Wrong Side of Heaven reviews
There are many worlds besides our own. Some remarkably similar, others utterly alien. When a soldier from our universe lands in that of a popular science fiction franchise, he must use all his wits, his skills, and his luck to survive this hostile world. And with his knowledge of this universe, he can either help save it...or destroy it utterly.
Halo - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,414 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 10 - Published: 11/22/2015
IMPERATRIX MVNDI reviews
Warning: Major Spoilers for Halo 5: Empress of the World. Cortana has claimed the Mantle of Responsibility, and ushered in a new era of peace for the galaxy- by the point of a sword. But what is the price of peace? Is order and stability truly worth giving up one's free will?
Halo - Rated: T - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,679 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 11 - Published: 10/31/2015 - Cortana - Complete
Reclaimers reviews
This is a short little one shot I wrote for my little sister, who is a big IZ fan.
Crossover - Invader Zim & Halo - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 874 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/1/2013 - Zim, Gir, Master Chief/John-117, Librarian - Complete
The Mantra of the First reviews
Miraak's Mantra, as told by himself and his slaves. Two-shot.
Elder Scroll series - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/8/2013 - Miraak