Author has written 4 stories for Grand Fantasia, Pokémon, Persona Series, Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V, and Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei/魔法科高校の劣等生.
Don't look back, for you will fall into the dreads and dreams of the past. Face forward and look up, the future is far more promising.
With a a rash of guest reviews and my editor egging me on, I was inspired to make this.
What I hate about reviews.
1. People telling you what you should have done:
I am amazed that some reviews have gone out and tracked down a writer and reviewed their entire history from birth to the present. These reviewers have taken upon themselves to make absolutely sure the story is going along with the writers thoughts and constantly correct the writer when they go off course. Yeah... not really. I have my own ideas and my reviewers have theirs. I appreciate people giving me another look at things but telling me my story is wrong because your opinion is superior is down right insulting.
2. People telling you what the pairings should be:
Same thing above. I understand people place some characters on pedestals and leave some in the dust. I do the same thing, but unless people specifically state they want suggestions I keep my mouth shut. I am sure the writers can deal with their stories pairings.
3. The generic "flame" review:
I'll be honest, I am human and I make mistakes. When people tell me I screwed up and why I screwed up I go fix the problem and thank the person who told me. What I hate are people who say my work is bad and give clearly bias opinions on why they think I did bad or worst they don't give any reasons at all. I am reasonable, and I can take an insult to my writing. Some reviewers have commented where I was wrong with my story and I have thanked them for pointing it out to me. But if you are going to tell a writer their story is bad because "someone else did it better" then don't waste the writer's time.
4. The "uor tsoyr si bad" review:
I spend a good amount of time correcting my story's grammar. If I have grammar errors someone would make a comment pointing it out. The least you can do for me is tell me what I did wrong in an understandable way. Fanfiction has basic word correction capabilities, please use them. If your vocabulary is so high that Fanfiction does not recognize it, then use word or any online typing tool then copy paste the message to me. If not it becomes a guessing game on what you are trying to say and takes me longer to make the next chapter. That or I will simply ignore your comment and assume that your comment was as useful as your grammar skills.
Sorry...had to get this off my chest. I assure all non-guest reviewers of chapter one, your review were fine. I have left the "guest reviews" up for you guys to see what I am relating too. My editor and I had a laugh on many of them. Go ahead and take a look. Drop a PM if you have similar situations or just want to talk.
I am writing on a new profile with a group of friends. The name of the group is Vocaloid Group.
My first story, a cross between ff8 and sword art online, is up. Give it a view if you have some time.
If you are wondering when the next chapter for New Beginnings will be out:
Mental layout of next chapter: 85%
Typing of next chapter : 20%
Total percent: 35%
Planned release date: November 28th
I plan to release every two weeks. Unforeseen circumstances may speed up or slow down production.
Before I get comment on the following I will say thins now. Just because Miyuki is the lovers social link does not mean she will be Minato's lover. I know this was obvious to most but I know someone will ask/complain anyway. I will keep the ranks unchanged from the newest chapter for 2 days to avoid spoilers.
Fool: “The group” lvl 3
Magician: Hattori Hanzou lvl 0
Priestess: Shibata Mizuki lvl 1
Empress: Fujibayashi Kyouko lvl 1
Emperor: Juumonji Katsuto lvl 0
Hierophant: Ichihara Suzune lvl 0
Lovers: Shiba Miyuki lvl 1
Chariot: Chiba Erika lvl 0
Justice: Watanabe Mari lvl 0
Hermit: Yoshida Mikihiko lvl 0
Strength: Saijou Leonhart lvl 0
Hanged man: Mibu Sayaka lvl 2
Death: Ichijou Masaki lvl 1
Temperance: Nakajou Azusa lvl 0
Devil: Maya Yotsuba lvl 0
Tower: Morisaki Shun lvl 2
Star: Saegusa Mayumi lvl 1
Moon: Kichijouji Shinkurou lvl 0
Sun: Kudou Minoru lvl 0
Aeon: Shiba Tatsuya lvl 1