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Joined 10-24-12, id: 4325312, Profile Updated: 03-13-15
Author has written 4 stories for Grand Fantasia, Pokémon, Persona Series, Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V, and Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei/魔法科高校の劣等生.

Don't look back, for you will fall into the dreads and dreams of the past. Face forward and look up, the future is far more promising.

With a a rash of guest reviews and my editor egging me on, I was inspired to make this.

What I hate about reviews.

1. People telling you what you should have done:

I am amazed that some reviews have gone out and tracked down a writer and reviewed their entire history from birth to the present. These reviewers have taken upon themselves to make absolutely sure the story is going along with the writers thoughts and constantly correct the writer when they go off course. Yeah... not really. I have my own ideas and my reviewers have theirs. I appreciate people giving me another look at things but telling me my story is wrong because your opinion is superior is down right insulting.

2. People telling you what the pairings should be:

Same thing above. I understand people place some characters on pedestals and leave some in the dust. I do the same thing, but unless people specifically state they want suggestions I keep my mouth shut. I am sure the writers can deal with their stories pairings.

3. The generic "flame" review:

I'll be honest, I am human and I make mistakes. When people tell me I screwed up and why I screwed up I go fix the problem and thank the person who told me. What I hate are people who say my work is bad and give clearly bias opinions on why they think I did bad or worst they don't give any reasons at all. I am reasonable, and I can take an insult to my writing. Some reviewers have commented where I was wrong with my story and I have thanked them for pointing it out to me. But if you are going to tell a writer their story is bad because "someone else did it better" then don't waste the writer's time.

4. The "uor tsoyr si bad" review:

I spend a good amount of time correcting my story's grammar. If I have grammar errors someone would make a comment pointing it out. The least you can do for me is tell me what I did wrong in an understandable way. Fanfiction has basic word correction capabilities, please use them. If your vocabulary is so high that Fanfiction does not recognize it, then use word or any online typing tool then copy paste the message to me. If not it becomes a guessing game on what you are trying to say and takes me longer to make the next chapter. That or I will simply ignore your comment and assume that your comment was as useful as your grammar skills.

Sorry...had to get this off my chest. I assure all non-guest reviewers of chapter one, your review were fine. I have left the "guest reviews" up for you guys to see what I am relating too. My editor and I had a laugh on many of them. Go ahead and take a look. Drop a PM if you have similar situations or just want to talk.

If you are willing to help here is the list, of you find someone that fits PM me:

Before I get comment on the following I will say thins now. Just because Miyuki is the lovers social link does not mean she will be Minato's lover. I know this was obvious to most but I know someone will ask/complain anyway.

Fool: “The group”

Magician: Hattori Hanzou

Priestess: Shibata Mizuki

Empress: Fujibayashi Kyouko

Emperor: Juumonji Katsuto

Hierophant: Ichihara Suzune

Lovers: Shiba Miyuki

Chariot: Chiba Erika

Justice: Watanabe Mari

Hermit: Yoshida Mikihiko

Fortune:

Strength: Saijou Leonhart

Hanged man: Mibu Sayaka

Death: Ichijou Masaki

Temperance: Nakajou Azusa

Devil:

Tower: Morisaki Shun

Star: Saegusa Mayumi

Moon: Kichijouji Shinkurou

Sun: Kudou Minoru

Aeon:

The newest chapter will come out later than usual due unforeseen circumstances. See you then.

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Remnants of Standard reviews
A/U They were all that was left after the Fusion dimension attacked. Follow Yuya, the inventor of pendulum summon and Leon, the user of infernoids, as they try and save their dimension and all the others.
Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,099 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 4/13 - Published: 4/9 - OC, Yuya S.
New Beginnings reviews
75 years after Nyx was sealed, Minato wakes up in an unfamiliar era. As Minato starts his new life, he must learn about the magic of the future, all the while trying to decipher the mysterious words told to him by Igor.
Crossover - Persona Series & Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei/魔法科高校の劣等生 - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 26,839 - Reviews: 123 - Favs: 265 - Follows: 302 - Updated: 3/6 - Published: 9/28/2014
Pokemon Revolution reviews
Team Plasma has changed from a small group with a grand idea to an army. Follow the Unova gym leaders as they join together to fight against Team Plasma. But not everything is as it seems. Look closer and try to see the story between the lines.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,326 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 5/28/2014 - Published: 12/9/2013 - Skyla/Fuuro, Elesa/Kamitsure, Drayden/Shaga, OC
Alter Warriors
The cities of Saphael are starting to grow restless. A rouge named Shadow is taking out high officials and has declared war against King of Kaslow. The alters have decided to bestow their power onto an individual to help keep peace within the world. My first fanfic so don't be angry. Please tell me how I can do better.
Grand Fantasia - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,580 - Updated: 12/12/2012 - Published: 10/30/2012