Ah Hael
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Joined 08-05-03, id: 432691, Profile Updated: 05-27-12
Author has written 18 stories for Gundam Wing/AC, Shaman King, Avatar: Last Airbender, and Gakuen Alice.

Okay I admit it. I am a very picky reader. I can’t help it. It probably comes from being older and having more life experience than most FF writers. So if any one has received a critique from me that they feel unsettled about, I can only say don’t let it get to you. If anything, it is meant to be a good thing.

You see, I’m notoriously lazy about reviewing. So if you have a story that gets me to put forth the effort and offer constructive criticism, it means I think you have potential and I’m trying to encourage that by pointing out parts that need improvement. Honestly, if it was crap I wouldn’t even bother with a review. Heck, if it’s crap I won’t even get past the first chapter. I also don’t blow sunshine up peoples’ butts so if I say your story is good, it’s good even if I don’t go into long expositions about it. If you want some tips on what I like to see, or hate seeing in stories:

Tips for story writing:

1) BETA READER! I can’t stress this one enough. Especially if English is not your primary language. The greatest idea will easily go down the toilet with bad grammar/spelling/word usage/format. GET A BETA READER!

2) If you are writing cannon (a story that happens in the same time and place of the original) please be respectful of the original creator’s vision.

3) Research

4) Beware of Homonyms waist/waste, through/threw, Knew/new, to/too, heir/air too many to count.


Hmmm... What to tell you? I'm Canadian, I'm in my thirties, happily married, with two children. Sound boring? Well it probably is, but I'm happy and that's what matters I guess. I have a great job that I will not name because it always make people go 'EWWW! Really?' I will say it involves protecting the environment, technical engineering skills, and sometimes some serious physical labor. Well okay the 12 hr shifts kinda suck.

My pen name is derived from a small joke about my typing skills. With two kids I try to keep my swearing down to a minimum, but I suck at typing. Hence the name. Say "Oh Hell" with an over-exagerrated hill-billy/southern drawl. Okay, so usually my swearing isn't this tame when I spot typos, but this is supposed to be 'G' rated.

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My Gundam/Psionic stories can also be found there as well as:

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Living Shinigami by Coffeetailor reviews
In the Ministry of Hades, one must die before becoming a Shinigami, with a single exception: one violet eyed boy with a braid. TsuzukixHisoka, 03x04, 1xR, 5xM New: Sequel Now up, "The Clock Moves Backwards."
Crossover - Gundam Wing/AC & Yami no Matsuei - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 35,815 - Reviews: 251 - Favs: 154 - Follows: 115 - Updated: 4/30/2009 - Published: 9/12/2005 - Duo M., A. Tsuzuki - Complete
Bonded by archdemonlord reviews
The academy’s finally getting serious about dealing with Mikan’s alices, and the Dangerous Ability Class is getting a new teacher in the bargain. What’s going to happen next? Read and find out…
Gakuen Alice - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 52 - Words: 168,710 - Reviews: 2183 - Favs: 1,184 - Follows: 325 - Updated: 4/18/2008 - Published: 6/24/2007 - Mikan S., Natsume H. - Complete
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A Dragon's Heart reviews
AU. He is a powerful red air dragon who has become tired of his own existence until he meets a spunky sea dragon.
Gakuen Alice - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 141,918 - Reviews: 500 - Favs: 291 - Follows: 267 - Updated: 5/27/2012 - Published: 11/5/2009 - Natsume H., Mikan S.
Plain White Underwear reviews
Mikan gets her first bra but is not very impressed with it or the event. Meanwhile, Natsume is obsessed with seeing it. Light humor and fluff.
Gakuen Alice - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,764 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 117 - Follows: 14 - Published: 7/21/2010 - Mikan S., Natsume H. - Complete
Dear Dad and Aoi reviews
Natsume gets the chance to write his first letter home. Lots of sap and fluff. Might even give you cavities because it is so sweet. Manga spoiler alert.
Gakuen Alice - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,489 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/4/2010 - Natsume H. - Complete
Mind, Body and Spirit reviews
Wufei has a promising future as a priest of the Trinity until he encounters strange forest creatures. 5X3X2 and 1x4
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 38,486 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 110 - Updated: 11/5/2009 - Published: 4/22/2006 - Wufei C., Duo M.
Fractured reviews
Innocence can be a burden and a curse disguised as a blessing. It is up to someone to break that innocence. *Warning: Spoilers for current chapters and dark themes*
Gakuen Alice - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,511 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/16/2009 - Complete
The Best Laid Plans reviews
Aang has been waiting four long years to be old enough to propose to Katara. So how did he end up married to Toph? Taang, Soki, eventual Zutara.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 37,131 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 354 - Follows: 193 - Updated: 7/12/2009 - Published: 10/13/2007 - Aang, Toph - Complete
Nullification Chocolate reviews
Mikan creates a Valentine's Day chocolate she is sure every boy wants. NxM
Gakuen Alice - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,215 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 7 - Published: 2/14/2009 - Mikan S., Natsume H. - Complete
Boxers or Briefs? reviews
Ah the age old question. This story is actually based on a very real conversation among a bunch of guys I know.
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,627 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 4 - Published: 5/13/2008 - Complete
His Mother's Son reviews
Zuko reflects on the real reason for is supposed betrayal in the crystal catacombs.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,032 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/19/2007 - Zuko - Complete
Possession reviews
Hao is long gone and Lyserg has moved on with his life. A shaman of all people should know life doesn’t end at death. Yaoi HaoxLyserg
Shaman King - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 33,100 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 8/1/2007 - Published: 11/13/2005 - Hao A., Lyserg D. - Complete
Soul Mates reviews
Everyone hopes for that special someone that will be their “soul mate” and Duo meets his. Only he doesn’t live in the same city, country or time? 5x2 unfulfilled 5XM 2X4
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 29,301 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 5/21/2007 - Published: 1/16/2006 - Duo M., Wufei C. - Complete
Psionic Revolution reviews
Part4 from Woman Called Deathscythe The augments want to dominate, psionics just want to live in peace. What kind of help can the guys be in such a battle with no powers of thier own? Rated for sexual content 3XOC
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 34,890 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 4/22/2006 - Published: 12/29/2003 - Trowa B./No-Name
Taming Your Warrior reviews
Be wary of self help books. What does Heero do when Relena dumps him after some not so good advice? ?X1 Yaoi alert
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,523 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/16/2006 - Heero Y., Zechs M. - Complete
Accidents reviews
Wufei and Heero are killed in an accident and are brought back to life with some minor complications. 25, 13, 14 Warnings: Gender switching
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,890 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 9/9/2004 - Published: 8/29/2004 - Wufei C., Duo M. - Complete
Geeks reviews
Revamped and epilogue added! He works at a software company nicknamed geek central but there's a guy there who is definitly not a geek that keeps drawing his attention. This is my first yaoi please be nice. Mainly 2X5 mention of 1X4 3X6
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 8 - Words: 12,717 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 2/1/2004 - Published: 1/3/2004 - Duo M., Wufei C. - Complete
Preventers, Psionics, and Bad Guys OH My! reviews
Wufei is torn between his duty as a preventer and as a friend. WCxOC pairing. Rated for sex & language. Part3 from Woman Called Deathscythe
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 18,721 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/10/2003 - Published: 9/7/2003 - Wufei C. - Complete
She's Sandrock reviews
What happens when Quatre comes face to face with the living, breathing soul that lived in his beloved Sandrock? Sequel to Woman Called Deathscythe. 4xOC
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 14,833 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/15/2003 - Published: 8/13/2003 - Quatre W. - Complete
A Woman Called Deathscythe reviews
Duo meets a woman he is drawn to like a magnet. Problem is she keeps running away! What secrets does she hold? 2xOC
Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 15,145 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/8/2003 - Duo M. - Complete