Author has written 6 stories for Naruto.
Education: College (Graduate)
Writing Style: I usually mix information together from both Manga and Anime, English or not. My main style leans towards character development more than anything else since I want to try and make my characters more understood compared to the dominant 'Instant God' versions of a character. That being said, I'm not perfect and tend to leave a lot of information out at times.
My rules to making a chapter and a story.
1. Write chapter 1 to the best of your ability but don't use all of your talents.
2. Check the word count at the end of Ch. 1. Make word count be your average.
3. Write each chapter to the same length of Ch. 1 or 10% above or below the word count. If needed, take out what you think is useless information. Ex: Dress code that hasn't changed since the last ten chapters.
4. Originality or not make a simple plot. There are many neglection-fics, Harem-fics, God-like fics and more so don't be shy to copy the plot*.
5. Think of the many POV's and their reactions to the current moment. Ex: Sasuke punched a weak Naruto...what should Naruto do in response? Naruto was impaled in the arm...what are his movements limited to? Naruto is told he is an heir...should he be shocked or something else?
6. Do you feel satisfied with the chapter? If not change some words around.
7. Post the first chapter and look over the reviews. Take suggestions and improvise the plot.
8. You are god in your story. Show that power but don't abuse it.
Copy as in use the formula or plot not take a chapter word for word unless granted permission.
Need inspiration? Check out "Plot Bunnies" down below for some inspiration.
Annoyances: These are things that I can't stand on this site but still deal with.
'Critics' : I like criticism and encourage people to list off things that might have been off or doesn't make as much sense in a story. But the one thing I don't like is when people act as critics and label off everything wrong with a story before saying that it was bad. Most times these people are one who don't have a story on their page or have various unfinished work. I will respect everyone when they have a problem with my stories but I'm not going to do anything about it just because one person hates it. That being said, it leads me to my other one...
Anonymous 'Critics': Just as above, but these people aren't signed in and have their names in normal text. I have a tendency to delete these guys since nothing is restricting me from doing so but still, I have the same problem with them.
Grammar Nazis : Man these people piss me off to no end. It's not the fact that they complain about a story's grammar it's the fact that they complain about every single little detail around the word they're complaining about. Like I said, I can tolerate them, but these guys are everywhere...and sometimes have the same problem as 'Critics'
I know that none of these are really justifiable to get mad over by any means but I feel like I should get them off my chest.
Your One and Only Wish
Do it one by one, don't look ahead!
1. Write the name of a person of the opposite sex.
2. Which is your favorite color out of red, black, blue, green and yellow.
3. Your first initial?
4. Your month of birth?
5. Which color do you like more, black or white?
6. Name of a person of the same sex as yours.
7. Your favorite number?
8. Do you like California of Florida more?
9. Do you like the lake or ocean more?
10. Write down a wish (a realistic one.)
Are you done? If so, scroll down
1. You are completely in love with this person.
2. If you choose:
Red: You are alert and you life is full of love.
Black: You are conservative and aggressive.
Green: Your soul is relaxed and you are laid back.
Blue: you are spontaneous and love kisses and affection from the one you love.
Yellow: You are a very happy person and give good advice to those who are down.
3. If you're initial is:
A-K: You have a lot of love and friendships in your life.
L-R: You try to enjoy life to the maximum and you love life is soon to blossom
S-Z: You like to help others and your future love life looks very good.
4. If You were born in:
Jan-Mar: The year will for very well for you and you will discover the you fall in love with someone totally unexpected.
Apr-June: you will have a strong love relationship that will no long but the memories will last forever
July-Sept: You will have a great year and will experience a major life changing experience for the good.
Oct-Dec: Your love life will not be too great, but eventually you will find your soul mate.
5. If you choose...
Black: your life will take on a different direction; it will seem hard at the time but will be the best thing for you and you will be glad for the change.
white: You will have a friend who completely confides in you and would do anything for you but you may not realize it.
6. This person is your best friend.
7. This is how many close friends you have in a lifetime.
8. If you choose...
California: You like adventure.
Florida: You are a laid back person.
9. If you choose...
Lake: You are loyal to you friends and you love. And you are very reserved.
Ocean: You are spontaneous and like to please people.
10. This wish will come true only if you Re-post this bulletin in one hour and it will come true before your next birthday!
And now for the Second one
I like to call this... the soundtrack for a movie about your life. Copy it to your profiles...
1. Open your Music library
2. Put it on shuffle
3. Press play
4. For every situation, type the song that's playing. (See Below 1-18)
5. When you go to a new question, press the next button
6. Be honest.
As soon as you're done, post your results.
1) Opening Credits – Get Clean by Anarchy Club
2) Waking Up – Loneliness by Naruto OST
3) First Day of School – Hand that Feeds by Nine Inch Nails
4) Falling in Love –Toxicity by System of a Down
5) Fight Song –3 Libras by A Perfect Circle
6) Breaking Up – Sadness and Sorrow by Youtube Cover artist
7) Prom – Little Musical Box by Yamy (Jamendo Artist. Look him up)
8) Life is just...OK –Click Click Boom by Saliva
9) Mental Breakdown –Widowmaker by DJ Zany (Look up on Youtube)
10) Driving – Feel Good Inc. by Gorillaz
11) Flashback –Angry Again by Megadeth
12) Getting Back Together – O Green World by Gorillaz
13) Birth of Child – Kill the King by Megadeth (My kid is going to be a badass.)
14) Wedding –United Abominations by Megadeth (This says a lot about us.)
15) Final Battle – Demons by Darkest Hour
16) Death Scene – Bad Company by Five Finger Death Punch
17) Funeral Song – Cara Mia Addio by Portal 2 Ending Song
18) End Credits – Count Bodies like sheep the Rhythm of the War Drums by A Perfect Circle
Challenges and/or Future Stories:
Summaries of stories for basic ideas followed by the other guidelines.
1) Whirlpool Protection: The one she loved died to protect a village they both hated. He entrusted her with their child and his dream. Now, she'll fulfill that dream. Kushina Uzumaki will raise her son to save Konoha...by controlling it from Uzushiogakure.
- Kushina must live through Naruto's birth while Minato dies entrusting her with their son's future.
- When Kushina is healthy enough, she must decide to leave Konoha with Naruto and everything she and Minato owned.
- While Kushina is telling Hiruzen why she is leaving, Mikoto, and Kakashi, must overhear it and decide to leave with Kushina. (Optional: Itachi and/or Sasuke can be brought along or left with Fugaku)
- On their way to Uzushio, Kushina and group must encounter Tsunade and Orochimaru in separate occasions. Regardless if the Sennin join or not, they must send their appreciates along with Kushina.
- Kakashi, growing up in Uzushio, must take missions that have Fu and/or Tayuya come to Uzushio. (Optional: Naruto can be paired with both and form a Harem but no one from Konoha.)
- In Konoha, the Uchiha Coup must happen, but Fugaku must not partake in. (Optional: If Sasuke or Itachi stay, he must not do so for their sake and a promise to Mikoto.)
- Most pairings are okay as long as Kushina isn't with anyone; exceptions can be made if discussed.
PM if accepted.
2) Team Uzumaki: After the Fourth Shinobi War Kushina, Mito, and Mikoto are brought to Kami, Yami and Shinigami and offered their the chance to return back to life... as Naruto's lovers.
- Kushina, Mito and Mikokto must meet Kami, Yami, and the Shinigami and be showed everything before they are reincarnated as kids with their memories wiped.
- Mikoto must have Uzumaki blood, thus not have the Sharingan. (Optional: Her appearance can be changed or kept the same.)
- Who ever the main love interest, of the three, must live and grow up with Naruto. They must share the same fate in a way.
- First love interest must develop feelings for Naruto during the academy and the other two girls must be introduced in the same time frame, Academy Arc.
- Naruto, or one of the girls, must be tricked by Mizuki during the scroll incident and must be told of Naruto's burden with Naruto' also listening.
- With the scroll recovered, Naruto must demand to know his heritage and his placement withing the CRA
- During team placement all four 'Uzumaki' must be placed on a team. Any sensei is fine.
- During first C-ranked mission, Naruto must protect first love interest and have them confess. Others must eventually do the same on other missions.
- Since it is Harem based, no more than 5 girls and Hinata and Sakura are forbidden! too much of them really.
From there have fun and NO god-like team. Will add more if I think of anything. PM if accepted.
3) Naruto:New Vegas: Naruto Uzumaki...also known as Courier 6 never thought that delivering a package would've made him a target. Now the Second Battle of Hover Dam is on the raise and Naruto will forever change the Mojave Wasteland.
- Fallout: New Vegas...Naruto style! Obviously Naruto must be Courier 6.
- The Companions must at least talk to Naruto (Optional: Naruto can recruit them; up to two Companions)
- At least 3 companions must be Naruto characters; Ex: Tayuya = Cass, Kakashi = Boone, or Fu = Veronica
- DLC Areas must be mentioned but do not have to be included.
- The Kyubi must be the reason for V.A.T.S.; Your choice on how and when Naruto gained it.
- 3 Factions and/or Casinos in the New Vegas Game must be clans from the Naruto series.
PM if accepted.
5) Legend of the Uzumaki Clan: The Kyubi's attack was avoided...changed from what it was. Who was that strange man? And why did he brand Naruto with a Seal that blinded him? Only those of the Uzumaki Lineage will be able to unveil the answers.
- Kushina must have triplets born, Naruto must be the oldest of the three. Kushina must already have an older child like Itachi is to Sasuke.
- A mysterious shinobi must appear and Seal the Kyubi back into Kushina, making a seal to siphon it into Naruto.
- The seal Naruto has must take away his sight. (Optional: Can exchange sight loss for another sense)
- Naruto twin siblings must give him a hard time, but not be completely against him.
- Naruto and Kushina must be kidnapped to have their seals modified; Naruto must be at least 4 years old.
- Minato and Kushina must pick up their children's training. Kushina must also give Naruto a summoning contract on the side as well.
- Genin teams must not have any of the siblings on the same team.
- Naruto's brother, or sister, must be branded with the Curse Seal during the Exams instead of Sasuke.
PM if accepted.
See and Speak no Evil: Naruto wasn't born alone, no he had a twin with him. They both were seal but both lost the way to communicate...with each other
- While the sealing of the Kyubi, Minato must decide to seal both halves of into his twin children. With Kushina's suggestion, he must also seal part of himself and Kushina into their kids with Naruto getting his Kushina and his daughter getting him.
- Do to the sealing, Naruto must be blinded and his sister must be mute or vice versa.
- If Naruto and sister are kicked from orphanage, they must move into their parent's home. If not, they must move in after they finish the academy.
- Canon events and timeline are still the same.
- Mikoto, knowing of the kids heritage, must either keep Sasuke away or try to change him, through force or not.
- If Sasuke is paired with Naruto's sister, he must be changed by Mikoto.
PM if Accepted
To Cross Blades: "You know Kaa-chan...there was once something sensei told my constantly until I learned it."
"What's that Sochi?"
- Minato must be able to seal all of Kurama into Naruto while his sister gets nothing.
- Kushina must tell Naruto about his Jinchuriki status when he is four and Naruto's status must not be revealed to anyone else.
- Naruto must meet Yoshimitsu when he is attacked and decide to train with him until he finishes the Academy.
- Naruto must drop out of the Academy before the final exam to continue to his training. Naruto must tell his parents his reason for dropping out just before the exam.
- Minato and Kushina must meet with Yoshimitsu before Kushina challenges his for rights to train Naruto.
- Naruto's sister, not wanting to lose her brother, must interfere with Naruto and cause Kushina to lose and cut Naruto's arm off.
- After Naruto's arm is treated, he must leave with Yoshimitsu after he gets a prosthetic arm.
- After a month, Kushina be reinstated, on her choice, and must start to train and as a result starts to neglect her family.
- While assigned to watch over her daughter's team in Wave, Kushina must encounter Naruto like Haku but with a mask and a different hairstyle. The two must then encounter each other on the bridge and fight.
- Whether one of the two dies, both die or neither die; the loser accepts their fate.
The Art of Life and Death: Getting exiled from his village is one ordeal, but by his own family is another and now Naruto Uzumaki had unlocked a forbidden art lost to his mother's clan. Will a princess from Rice Country help him control it? or will he be lost in the dark, seeking revenge.
- Naruto can be any age as long as he has at least an older and younger sibling. Twin is also acceptable for one of these.
- Naruto must be exiled from Konoha by Minato, or Kushina from Uzushio, and be branded with a tattoo to show this.
- Naruto, because of the events, must break a little and, through this, unlocks his ability to steal/give life from/to others and resolve to kill his family. (Optional: Naruto can have a pupil if wanted but only one.)
- Orochimaru must be apart of Konoha and thus, is not evil or create Oto.
- Kin, Tayuya or Sasame can be the 'Princess' of Rice Country but it can't be a harem.
- The princess must be heading to Konoha, or Uzushio, in order to be wed to one of Naruto's siblings but is attacked.
- Naruto saves the princess and, as a result, is tasked with taking her to her destination but must find ways to be distracted.
- During an ambush, Naruto must be wounded and use his ability to steal life from one of his attackers. The princess must then be told everything and the reason why Naruto is finding distractions.
- As the two travel Naruto must be hunted down by shinobi on his family's orders for any reason of your choice, be it murder or retrieval. No Council Choice, Danzo or ROOT reason is accepted, no exceptions.
- Whether Naruto changes his resolve or not is your choice but the princess must be the reason.
Origami of the Uzumaki: Life was hard for Konan. She lost Yohiko in Ame before she lost Kushina and Minato to the Nine-Tails. Seeing Naruto as her last bit of light in the word, Konan will give her life in order to protect his.
- Konan must leave Ame and the Akatsuki after Yahiko is killed. Eventually she must come to Konoha and meet Minato and Kushina.
- After the Nine-Tails is sealed, Konan must promise to take care of Naruto.
- Naruto must learn some of her techniques if not all of them. Konan must also try to teach Naruto his parent's jutsu.
- Konan must save some Uchiha from Itachi and Obito, Mikoto and Sasuke are optional.
- Konan must start looking into what the Akatsuki have become in her absence.
Uzumaki Mafia: Naruto used to live the life, he was rich, loved and cared for. When he's taken from his family's name, Naruto is left with nothing. Having nothing to lose, Naruto turns to the Mafia for work and finds the only person he can count on...his Grandmother Mito.
- Naruto must be thrown out of the Namikaze/Uzumaki home and stripped of his name.
- Naruto must find a place for him to stay for a bit, whether with a friend or on his own.
- Naruto must run into his Mito, his grandmother, who offers him some work to do in order to get back onto his feet.
- Naruto must find out that his grandmother runs the largest Mafia in Konoha and start to work for her.
- Naruto's family must find out about it and try to get Naruto back.
Sasuke and Nine Kings: His Clan killed before him, Sasuke Uchiha's life is changed as he sets out to kill the man responsible. "Naruto Uzumaki and the rest of the nine kings will pay for what they've done."
- In a modern world, 16 yr old Sasuke must have the typical boring life.
- Just like in the Anime, Sauske must come home to witness his clan being killed and must see Naruto standing over his dead mother.
- Sasuke must attack Naruto but is stopped by the other 'Kings'; them being the Jinchuriki.
- Sasuke must set out to kill the Nine Kings to avenge his clan with a group that he creates; Can be anyone from those in Taka to the Rookies.
- Sasuke must kill the Nine Kings starting with Gaara and work his way to Naruto.
- Whether Sasuke succeeds or not is your choice.
- Any Pairing is okay.
Naruto: Konoha's Greatest Artist: Born without chakra, Naruto embraces his chakraless life and instead focuses on a dream that he knows he can reach...becoming the greatest artist in Konoha.
- Naruto must be born without chakra; or at the very least not have access to it.
- Naruto must be pushed away from the family but not completely left alone; his family must be protective of him and keep him from shinobi related things.
- Naruto uses the free time he has to tryout at different jobs in Konoha. (Any job from Blacksmith to even Ice shaving.)
- Naruto must use the skills he picks up to create his own art. (Optional: Naruto can ask Minato if he can own a shop.)
- Any pairing.
Two more that were given to me by Twelve Tailed Wolf Dragon (not an actual author); No actual Titles
Pairing: Any combination of Fu, Yugito, and Koyuki with Naruto
1. Naruto leaves village at a young age deciding to travel the elemental countries.
2. Naruto is taught by Itachi and Sasori and eventually Fu starts traveling with him
3. Summoner of the Wolf contract
4. God like with wind, Anbu, or higher, level water and lightning, kage for any combinations of them (Hyoton for example)
5. Has to have 4. done at the age of 12-14.
6. Naruto joins Kuma and is apart of a genin squad with Yugito
7. Naruto has to return to Konoha for the Chunin exams with the Sand Siblings and Konoha 12.
8. If Koyuki is in the pairing, Naruto interferes with team Kakashi's mission, to help the Land of Snow.
1. Naruto is Kushina's twin/younger brother, and was separated when Kushina goes to Konoha
2. Only person to have an SS rank and flee on sight warning other then Minato. Got by defending Uzushiogakure from thousands of Kiri, Kumo, and Iwa ninja alone with ease.
3. Goes to visit Kushina after the Kyuubi attack to learn that she, Minato, and their child (male or female, I don't care, just come up with a somewhat origina name) were killed during the attack.
4. Returns to Uzushiogakure from grief of his sister's death
5. About eight years later, he goes to Konoha to renew a treaty on October 10th and comes across a massive mob attacking a child.
6. After he slaughters them all, he talks to the chid, finding out that it's his nephew/niece.
7. Naruto goes to Uzushiogakure, reports about what happened in Konoha, and returns to Konoha to secretly watch over his nephew/niece.
8. While there, he visits him/her at night and trains him/her in their mind, using a technique like the Yamanaka.
9. The night where Mizuki tricks the child will start like cannon, with Naruto having him/her fail on purpose to make Mizuki and the other teachers, except Iruka, think their sabotage is working, but after he throws the first fuma shuriken, Naruto steps in, putting up a barrier to protect them, and kills Mizuki
10. Naruto returns to Uzushiogakure, gets a genin team, made up of Fu, Tayuya, and Karin.
Rest is up to author, just make sure Naruto visits Konoha a bit.
1. Naruto in this will have a Necromancer and a shapeshifter kekkai genkai.
2. The shapeshifter kekkai genkai will be based on their personality and/or abilities, so Naruto will be able to turn into things like a wraith, vampire, lich, and so on.
3. Naruto can only truly bring people back to life (as if they hadn't died) by when someone else brings the person back (*Cough* *cough* Edo tensei Kushina during chunin exams *cough *cough*).
4. Has wolf summon, with a multitaied wolf made up of shadows as his main summon.
5. Also has Rinnegan, 'cause why the fuck not.
6. Duel wields, in one hand a scythe, the other being a sword with a long chain that wraps around his arm (use to increase range)
1. Basically like Nagato except paler, has hair a few shades darker, and a darker look.
2. Wears a large, black, cloak, with a mask (Darth Revan's), and will only take it off around a handful of people when not in Uzushiogakure.
These two were given so I don't really know the details.
Story References: Picture to show what I mean. Copy and Paste in address bar
Nine Beasts Clan:
- Elemental Nations Map - (naruto(.)wikia(.)com(/)wiki(/)Geography)
- Naruto's Appearance (Part 3) - (vignette3(.)wikia(.)nocookie(.)net(/)naruto(/)images(/)5(/)54(/)Dokonj(%)C5(%)8D(_)Ninden(_)Protagonist(.)png(/)revision/)latest?)cb(=)20100420002102)
My Blood-lines: Thing I have/will use in Future Stories.
Sējigan: Predecessor to the Rinnegan, the Sējigan is the very first dōjutsu created by the Sage of Six Paths as a test of creating Blood-lines. Grants Ability to master all types of elemental chakra as well as Yin and Yang Chakra. Has six separate 'modes' that make up the ability. Able to copy and even recreate existing blood-lines that the wielder doesn't originally have. Can also grant ability of sub-elements.
Ex: Mei's Lava Style and Corrosion Style, Kimimaro's bone Blood-line, Sharingan ability, Byakugan ability, Hashirama's Wood Style, etc.
Broken Way: Allows user to disperse their body into atoms that make them untraceable to all forms of chakra. Can not be hurt by any Jutsu while in this state.
Shadow Fighter: Allows one to become intangable while in use and has their shadow attack for them while they distract the opponent. Can summon more shadows and still use Fuinjutsu and Ninjutsu. (Think Noob Saibot or Madara's Shadow.)