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Joined 08-07-03, id: 434460, Profile Updated: 03-23-14
Author has written 16 stories for Hard Target, Charlie's Angels: The Movie, Van Helsing, Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, Star Wars, Patriot, Wild Hogs, Star Trek: 2009, StarTrek: Enterprise, Teen Wolf, and Avengers.

Being a German who writes her fan fiction in English I naturally prone to mistakes a native speaker would never make, like the misuse of a word. However, I took a long break from writing and for even longer I did not had a beta at all. I especially need help with grammar and punctuation.

Stories I especially like to work on are listed on www.maratofel.net.

UPDATE: Currently working on Always an Alpha

Summaries for Always an Alpha

Since there is always some time that passes between the chapters, I've put a summary on my homepage for each chapter posted so readers can refresh their memories. You also find the chapter headers that I post on A03 along with each summary.

I'm always looking for a beta, for my other stories, especially:

  • Hard Target: The Taking (a rewrite of Beloved Target)
  • A Teen Wolf Dystopian AU Fanfic
  • Matrix of the Dead
  • Dark Matters (only a few chapters left on the first story)
  • The Admiral's Daughter Some Khan/Carol smut
  • Whatever you say (Pydia story based on You keep walkin' on the other side)
  • For more stories based on You keep walkin' on the other side but with Peter/Stiles, Stiles/Isaac, Stiles/Lydia and more Pydia
  • I use gdocs, as this allows for better interaction while sending over docs here just does not work and makes it a pain in the ass to track the changes.

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    The Choices We Make by LadyHorror92 reviews
    Dr. Alice Walsh was a rising psychologist in Starfleet until one mistake leaves her career nearly destroyed. But then she's ordered by Admiral Marcus to take on the most challenging of assignments: evaluating and rehabilitating the awoken Khan. But her orders are an illusion, the truth more sinister, and her loyalties are soon tested, along with Khan's own beliefs ... Khan/OC
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 15 - Words: 90,024 - Reviews: 505 - Favs: 399 - Follows: 742 - Updated: 1/14 - Published: 5/21/2013 - [John Harrison/Khan, OC]
    Keeping The Hound at Bay by Kuklitza reviews
    "Foolish little bird," Sandor rasped. "You don't know what it is you want." But he knew what he wanted, and it took all his strength to keep the Hound inside at bay. SanSan, Sandor POV. Starts in KingsLanding pre-war and follows Sandor's struggles with Sansa's budding womanhood, and himself.
    Game of Thrones - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,907 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 65 - Follows: 155 - Updated: 4/22/2013 - Published: 4/11/2013 - Sandor C., Sansa S.
    Sherlock and Molly That night by Dizzybunny reviews
    Sherlock asked Molly for help. My take on what happened after that scene and after TRF. Rated T to be safe. The odd word of bad language in Chapter 14. thanks for reviews .
    Sherlock - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 25,052 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 176 - Follows: 218 - Updated: 2/4/2013 - Published: 1/22/2012 - Sherlock H., Molly Hooper - Complete
    Dear Muggle: Letters from Hogwarts Students by Hyaroo reviews
    As part of a special school assignment, all Hogwarts students had to write a letter to a Muggle who knows about the wizarding world. Here is a selection of the letters.
    Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,605 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 2/4/2013 - Published: 2/9/2010 - Draco M. - Complete
    51 Tints of Granite by Bristol Fashion reviews
    MAJOR SATIRE! This is a parody of the first book so a sense of humor and/or dislike of the book is needed to enjoy this story!
    Fifty Shades Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 12,458 - Reviews: 172 - Favs: 180 - Follows: 163 - Updated: 8/11/2012 - Published: 5/1/2012 - Anastasia S., Christian G.
    The Pacifist's Daughter by JScorpio reviews
    Colonel Tavington,Captain Bordon,original heroine, Captain Wilkins.Melanie Prescott,from a family of well known pacifists,becomes a pawn between the Redcoats and rebels.A brutal attack on her farm,rumors about her,the chaos of war, and two British officers wreak havoc in her life. Mature content. ENJOY!
    Patriot - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 90 - Words: 352,916 - Reviews: 297 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 8/2/2012 - Published: 6/15/2009 - William T., Bordon - Complete
    The Full House by Emcee Frodis reviews
    When Sherlock asked Molly to help him, she never thought she'd be given a more difficult task. Until what he asked for next. HUGE SPOILERS for Series Two.
    Sherlock - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 50 - Words: 137,038 - Reviews: 1866 - Favs: 1,337 - Follows: 705 - Updated: 7/13/2012 - Published: 3/4/2012 - Sherlock H., Molly Hooper - Complete
    The Scarecrow Letters by The Idiot Alchemist reviews
    The infamous Scarecrow, formerly respected psychiatrist Jonathan Crane, begins a letter exchange with something he thought he left permanently behind years ago in Arlen, Georgia.
    Batman - Rated: T - English - Horror/Family - Chapters: 10 - Words: 13,085 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 3/27/2012 - Published: 2/16/2012 - Johnathan C./Scarecrow - Complete
    The Wrong Victim by IzPerplexing reviews
    Sometimes, you just don't know who you're messing with. Collab entry with Delandora for the "Afraid of the Dark" contest. Dark themes.
    Twilight - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13,738 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 11 - Published: 2/2/2012 - Jasper, Bella - Complete
    Interrogation by the mischievous pixie reviews
    One-shot, PWP. Hoffman needs to interrogate a person who might have some information on the Jigsaw Killer, but what he gets is something more.
    Saw - Rated: M - English - Crime/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,978 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 4 - Published: 7/18/2010 - Hoffman - Complete
    Tantrum and Tenderness by Mona Lisa23 reviews
    Col. Tavington and his Green Dragoons are chasing the colonials with infinite ruthlessness. On that occasion they get hold of Judith, a farm girl of the colonies, and a multitude of emotions is flaring up...
    Patriot - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 18 - Words: 74,399 - Reviews: 98 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 3/11/2009 - Published: 7/12/2005
    Conversations With Smith by Tanathir reviews
    NEW CHAPTER October 2007 Agent Smith is ordered to learn about humanity. SmithOFC A different philosophy of the Matrix. WiP
    Matrix - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 33 - Words: 70,216 - Reviews: 499 - Favs: 180 - Follows: 65 - Updated: 10/2/2007 - Published: 4/13/2002 - Smith, A.
    Fraternité by Gondolier reviews
    Something sinister is stalking Christine, and only one man can save her. As they uncover deadly secrets taken to the grave, they find that the greatest mystery of all is the human heart. A tale of intrigue, love, and redemption.
    Phantom of the Opera - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 42 - Words: 271,539 - Reviews: 1021 - Favs: 533 - Follows: 155 - Updated: 8/27/2006 - Published: 1/27/2005 - Erik, Christine - Complete
    A Mary Sue Parody by ashanta reviews
    A group of Mary Sues enter Hogwarts, but find their typical charms and perfections somehow failing to get the reactions they usually warrant. Harry and Ron finally figure out the Sues weakness, with Special Guest Appearance by Hogwarts' Resident Man-Ho.
    Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 9,014 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 5/18/2005 - Published: 8/27/2004
    GreenEyed Monster by Alexis Katherine reviews
    Van Helsing and Carl travel to the United States to investigate a string of violent, mysterious deaths. As usual, things are much worse than they first believed. Can they stop evil from being unleashed in northern California?
    Van Helsing - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,002 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/30/2005 - Published: 5/26/2004
    A Mary Sue Alphabet by Irony-chan reviews
    A's for Amanda Our hero's twin sister Got lost as a baby and Gosh, how he missed her...
    Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,497 - Reviews: 2548 - Favs: 5,850 - Follows: 341 - Published: 1/12/2005 - Complete
    Beautiful Stranger by Jess J reviews
    Rated for sexual situations. Dylan goes out to a club to forget what day it is, and winds up doing something she does more often than she should - sleeps with the enemy.
    Charlie's Angels: The Movie - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,791 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 6 - Published: 10/26/2004
    Solitary Confinement by Gothic Guardian reviews
    Anamaria ponders her relationship (or lack there of) with the captain. Why is it that what you most want, you can never have? "Sometimes all you can do is dream... Because some things just aren't meant to be..." JA angst Anamaria's PoV
    Pirates of the Caribbean - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 625 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/26/2004 - Anamaria - Complete
    Crossing the Line by kriszo reviews
    Agent Smith was ordered to watch over an informant. But then comes the informant's daughter, he meets his 'father', he has to live with two rebels for a while and it's just the start ...
    Matrix - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 54,497 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/29/2004 - Published: 8/6/2003 - Smith, A.
    JUST THE BEST MARY SUE, EVER! by Bamfwriter reviews
    The Mary Sue Litmus Test taken to the extreme. F words. Mild slash.
    LXG - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,550 - Reviews: 72 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/24/2004
    Look Me in the Eyes by Kushelkitten reviews
    He is a killer who feeds on wants and desires. Can the angels stop him and does Dylan want to? (eventually Dylan ThinMan)
    Charlie's Angels: The Movie - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 21,492 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 2/9/2004 - Published: 1/1/2004
    Ally? by recumbentgoat reviews
    Dylan Thin Man rivalry. The Thin Man becomes entangled in an Angels' case. Can Dylan free the Thin Man? Will he let her? Please leave feedback! It'd be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
    Charlie's Angels: The Movie - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 15 - Words: 24,862 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 11/20/2003 - Published: 9/19/2003
    Burn by Jess J reviews
    LucianSonja one-shot. As the nights fades, a vampire princess ponders over her forbidden lover and the warmth of passion. Please r&r!
    Underworld - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 959 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 4 - Published: 10/13/2003 - Complete
    Weakest Link in the Chain by YunaDax reviews
    Set after Reloaded, Trinity is captured by the Twins who have an agenda all their own.
    Matrix - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,473 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/3/2003 - Trinity, Morpheus
    Charles Lee Ray: Roots by Nathander reviews
    Charles Lee Ray's ORIGIONAL story, told for the first time. JOxER and Candy, this one's for you two!
    Child's Play - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,000 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Published: 10/26/2002
    Beautiful Young Prospect by Furious Angel reviews
    In a moment of weakness, the Abbe de Coulmier succumbs to what he thought he never could. If you don't like slash, then don't read.
    Quills - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,835 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/22/2002
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    Always an Alpha reviews
    A somewhat longish story with the focus on Peter/Lydia told from Lydia's POV. Is set after Lunar Eclipse with a slight time jump to spring break 2012. Beacon Hills has a few supernatural visitors who are stacking up a body count, while Scott and Co. try to figure out who or what is killing people and how to stop the murders, Peter sets his own plans into motion.
    Teen Wolf - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 20 - Words: 123,318 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 49 - Updated: 4/4 - Published: 9/15/2013 - [Lydia M., Peter H.]
    Whatever you say reviews
    [Sequel to "You keep walkin' on the other side"] In the aftermath of the Saphpoa incident, Lydia is sleepwalking - again. In the middle of the storm, she's rescued by Peter - or is she? Peter/Lydia
    Teen Wolf - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15,054 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/21 - Complete
    All there is reviews
    Post-Into Darkness: Believing that Spock killed his entire crew, Khan is awoken by Malek, a ruthless Cardassian, who uses his need for revenge to further his own plans. Khan does not take kindly to being used. A dangerous mind game begins between the two men that eventually draws others into the struggle, like Lea Jagoda, a space travelling doctor with her own secrets.
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 16 - Words: 36,256 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 55 - Updated: 1/8 - Published: 5/15/2013 - John Harrison/Khan - Complete
    Just because I can't get drunk reviews
    When Steve Rogers overhears on that the news that Tony Stark has been killed in an attack on his beach home, he really wishes he could get drunk ...
    Avengers - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,602 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/29/2013 - [Captain America/Steve R., Iron Man/Tony S.] - Complete
    You keep walkin' on the other side reviews
    People are disappearing in Beacon Hills. With Scott and Allison gone, Stiles feels they are running out of options. Deaton has no answer and so with the help of Lydia and Isaac, they seek out the very last person Stiles ever thought he ask for help: Peter Hale.
    Teen Wolf - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33,670 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Published: 12/29/2013 - [Stiles, Peter H.] - Complete
    Emergency reviews
    A young park ranger finds a somewhat agitated Vulcan meditating in an abandoned off-trail cabin. It turns out she can actually help him with his problem ... "Humans are fragile, aggressive mating could seriously injure you." Soval/OFC
    StarTrek: Enterprise - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,012 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Published: 6/12/2013 - Soval - Complete
    With all my heart reviews
    My version of how Verona meet Count Vladislaus Dragulia and ended up being his bride (the lucky girl!). The time period is 1512, the location is Budapest, but might change later ...
    Van Helsing - Rated: M - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,574 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 5/17/2013 - Published: 5/26/2005 - Dracula, Verona
    The Road Taken reviews
    This story focuses on Jack and the Del Fuegos getting caught up in a zombie outbreak. An original character joins them as they face this new situation. Will the gang submit to anarchy and violence or will they keep it together? (story needs a beta)
    Wild Hogs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,315 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/25/2012 - Published: 8/21/2010 - Jack
    Dark matters reviews
    180 years after the movie, Dracula still (weakened by the werewolf venom) comes to future L.A. which is ruled by an evil mage. Will he ever recover from what Van Helsing did to him? And what will happen when they meet again?
    Van Helsing - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 18 - Words: 66,738 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/27/2007 - Published: 6/7/2004
    Nemesis reviews
    Starts on familiar ground by showing events from the movie from the perspective of the Green Dragoons, accompanied by new scenes, until it later ultimately leaves the path and takes on a different direction.
    Patriot - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,737 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/10/2006 - Published: 1/10/2006
    Dangerous Desires reviews
    The story of a girl who meets Darth Maul, who changes her life forever ... (One-shot, reposted, CC welcome)
    Star Wars - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,456 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/25/2005 - Darth Maul - Complete
    Sauron's Zimmermädchen reviews
    Kleine Parodie, beginnend mit Einblicken in Sauron's Privatsphäre, singende Feldherren, schlampige Naz-gul, verfressene Orks und ein rachsüchtiger, reimender Ring ;)
    Lord of the Rings - Rated: T - German - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,068 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/29/2005 - Published: 7/18/2004 - Sauron
    A dream wedding reviews
    Don't miss Draco and Hermione's big day, when they are about to marry ... Draco's POV and now up the revelation - which adds Horror to the genre and a higher rating (just to be sure) as well.
    Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,390 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/24/2004 - Published: 8/21/2004 - Draco M., Hermione G. - Complete
    The darkness within reviews
    Dealing with Anthony's death was hard for Dylan, accepting he came back even harder, but the hardest thing (for both of them) was finding to each other ... focuses on their emotions, but includes also a new case
    Charlie's Angels: The Movie - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 22 - Words: 63,224 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 2/24/2004 - Published: 8/20/2003 - Thin Man/Anthony, Dylan S.
    Because you're so sweet reviews
    Songfic, Set during and after Full throttle, written from Anthony POV - Thin Man Dylan
    Charlie's Angels: The Movie - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,676 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 8 - Published: 11/15/2003 - Thin Man/Anthony, Dylan S. - Complete
    Beloved Target reviews
    This an alternate universe story and deals with the two main villains Fouchon and Van Cleaf . The change happens during the hunt on Roper ... I am thinking about re-writing this one. Was my first one - love some constructive criticism.
    Hard Target - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 35,637 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2003 - Complete
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    1. Vladislaus Dragulia aka Vladislaus Dracula
      Movies Van Helsing