Author has written 1 story for Familiar of Zero. Been on FF for a while but I've finally started writing. Things I absolutely hate on FF (to be updated): WITH VERY FEW EXCEPTIONS, I absolutely hate 1st person stories. I absolutely hate poor grammar. If it's not your forte, get a Beta writer. I absolutely hate stories with no development and shitty pacing. I absolutely hate it when authors stop writing for a story with no explanation, then proceed to take up another. Come on guys, at least update it saying it's on HIATUS or CANCELLED! Don't leave us hanging! This is pretty specific but when it comes to Halo x Mass Effect crossovers, I absolutely hate it when authors put TWO human cultures in the same galaxy. I'm not buying the fact that there is an IDENTICAL Earth with the Systems Alliance. I'll forgive crossovers than involve inter-galactic travel (as in travel between the Milky Way and say, Andromeda) but I absolutely REFUSE to believe that the Forerunners or the Precursors created an IDENTICAL Earth. Crossovers involving inter-dimensional travel are of course excluded from my hate, per the multiverse theoryThings I would like to see more of on FF: A Star Fox story where they come into contact with the more advanced humans and don't immediately blow each other to bits. A Halo story where the Humans are actually advanced enough to fight the Covenant on even ground (as in Humans have energy shields, plasma weapons, advanced slipspace, etc...). I don't care how the Humans get this advanced tech (either they find Forerunner ruins or they develop it on their own) but, yeah... A Star Fox story where the Lylatians are more or less similar looking... I can buy two subspecies (Canidae [wolves, dogs, racoons, foxes] and simians), but come on... Frogs? Walking birds? Snakes? From an evolutionary standpoint, it'd be ridiculous. More same-galaxy Halo x Mass Effect crossovers"I promise to review (kindly) every fanfic I read whether it be fantastic, useless, or anywhere in between. I make this pledge because I know how frustrating it is for an author to have hundreds (or thousands) of hits and only a handful of reviews." Copy and paste this onto your profile if you promise to do the same. Convergence (REDUX) Characters: Here I will post links to pictures of the characters in my story. They will be updated as the story progresses. COPY PASTE THE LINK, don't click on the link. It just hyperlinks back here. I DON'T OWN ANY OF THE IMAGES. ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE AUTHORS. Prologue: Dr. Robert Dreyfus: /art/Walter-Bishop-137806557 (yes he's based on Walter Bishop from Fringe) Dr. Nathan Scott: /uploads/chars/5688-1855662373.jpg SWORD Director Nick Reynolds: /uploads/scale_small/5/56213/1389115-phillip_broyles.jpg Ch. 1 Giovanni Sforza: /highschooldxd/images/3/3f/HS_DxD_New_-Valper_img.1.png Victor "Vic" de la Fuente: /image/photos/34400000/takishi-and-arisu-takashi-komuro-34431859-500-283.jpg Ch. 2 Saito: /user/Vestal08/media/Quality/Akatsuki_ADuni.png.html Louise: /user/javichuelas/media/Convergence/Screen-05-14.11.05_zpsvunzbbt4.png.html Tiffania: /cityofthedead/images/d/d5/Marikawa.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20120913010238 Ch. 3 Captain Frank Rollins: /user/javichuelas/media/Convergence/Screen-05-30.53.52_zpszezco77c.png.html First Officer Seth Lapidus: /user/javichuelas/media/Convergence/Screen-05-30.54.00_zpsxnso8wzy.png.html Agent Hansen: /gate-thus-the-jsdf-fought-there/images/6/68/Itami_Youji.png/revision/latest?cb=20150720114224 Ch. 8 An example of the window generator in action: youtube.com/watch?v=z2XZs-CDARE |