![]() Author has written 6 stories for Adventure Time with Finn and Jake, Frozen, Winx Club, and My Little Pony. "Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited, whereas imagination embraces the entire world, stimulating progress, giving birth to evolution." - Albert Einstein *7-8-20 (MAJOR UPDATE): Hello my fellow readers and writers. To anyone who has been wondering where I've been these past few years, or perhaps even eagerly awaiting my return, I sincerely appreciate the continued interest. I am here to assure you that my passion for fanfiction has not fizzled out. Not only have I been reading fanfics constantly, I have been trying to improve my skills and boost my confidence enough to finally post again. As a matter of fact, I made a promise to myself that I was going to publish at least one fanfic this year...and I'm almost there. Stay tuned everyone ;)* Welcome to my account! ABOUT ME Gender: Female Age: 19 Lives in: USA Zodiac Sign: Pisces Sexuality: Straight (I think) Aspirations: Advertising copywriter Zodiac Sign: Pisces MBTI Personality: INFP STUFF I LIKE - Art - Fanfiction - Reading - Writing - Aesthetics - Cats - Maroon 5 - Selena Gomez - Pop Music - Country - R&B - Hip Hop - Rap - Gospel - Chocolate - Steven Universe - Undertale - Regular Show - Adventure Time - Winx Club - Amazing World of Gumball - Teen Titans Go! - My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic - Henry Danger - The Thundermans - A bunch of old cartoons and TV shows - LoliRock - Tumblr If Fanfiction is your way of escaping reality and the rest of the boring people in the world and truly "unleashing your imagination" then paste this in your profile and add your name: Emerald Princess 14, StardustFromThePlanetGallifrey, NarnianLady, KingdomHeartsNerd, Lady Alice101, Emily Ebriection, TheCursedOne, SilverPharaoh, Seastar529, MarcelineFan, For people that hate stereotypes: If you think people should just shut up and stop, put this on your profile. (BOLD the ones you are and add a stereotype to the list.) I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic. I'm EMO, so I MUST cut my wrists. I'm BLACK so I MUST carry a gun. (I might be mixed tho...) I'm BLOND, so I MUST be a ditz. I'm JAMAICAN so I MUST smoke weed. I'm HAITIAN so I MUST eat cat. I'm ASIAN, so I MUST be sexy. I'm JEWISH, so I MUST be greedy. I'm GAY, so I MUST have AIDS. I'm a LESBIAN, so I MUST have a sex-tape. I'm ARAB, so I MUST be a terrorist. I SPEAK MY MIND, so I MUST be a bitch. I'm a GAY RIGHTS SUPPORTER, so I WILL go to hell. (I can't really agree with or understand the Christian belief that gay people are bad.) I'm a CHRISTAN, so I MUST think gay people should go to hell. I'm RELIGIOUS, so I MUST shove my beliefs down your throat. I don't believe in God so I MUST be evil and should be ashamed. I'm REPUBLICAN, so I MUST not care about poor people. I'm DEMOCRAT, so I MUST not believe in being responsible. (I think I am?) I am LIBERAL, so I MUST be gay. I'm SOUTHERN, so I MUST be white trash. (I'm not even white haha) I TAKE (or used to take) ANTI-DEPRESSANTS, so I MUST be crazy. I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants. I'm IRISH, so I MUST have a bad drinking problem. I'm INDIAN, so I MUST own a convenient store or a petrol station. I'm NATIVE AMERICAN, so I MUST dance around a fire screaming like a savage. I'm a CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be a whore... I'm a DANCER, So I must be stupid, stuck up, and a whore. I wear SKIRTS a lot, so I MUST be a slut. I'm a PUNK, so I MUST do drugs. I'm RICH, so I MUST be a conceited snob. I WEAR SOME BLACK, so I MUST be a goth or emo. I'm a WHITE GIRL, so I MUST be a nagging, steal-your-money kind of girlfriend. I'm CUBAN, so I MUST spend my spare time rolling cigars. I'm NOT A VIRGIN, so I MUST be easy. I FELL IN LOVE WITH A MARRIED MAN, so I MUST be a home-wrecking whore. I'm a TEENAGE MOM, so I MUST be an irresponsible slut. I'm POLISH, so I MUST wear my socks with my sandals. I'm ITALIAN, so I must have a "big one". I'm EGYPTIAN, so I must be a TERRORIST! I'm PRETTY, so I MUST not be a virgin. (This one's more of a self-image problem...) I HAVE STRAIGHT A'S, so I MUST have no social life. (Most of the time I don't have a social life actually...) I DYE MY HAIR CRAZY COLORS, so I MUST be looking for attention. I DRESS IN UNUSUAL WAYS so I MUST be looking for attention. I'm INTO THEATER & ART, so I MUST be a homosexual. (mainly art) I'm a VEGETARIAN, so I MUST be a crazy political activist. I HAVE A BUNCH OF GUY FRIENDS, so I MUST be fucking them all. I HAVE A BUNCH OF GIRLS WHO ARE FRIENDS, so I MUST be a player. I have Big BOOBS, so I MUST be a hoe. I'm COLOMBIAN, so I MUST be a drug dealer. I WEAR WHAT I WANT, so I MUST be a poser. (I mean I can't wear anything I want to school so...) I'm RUSSIAN, so I MUST be cool and thats how Russians roll. I'm GERMAN, so I must be a Nazi. I hang out with GAYS, so i must be GAY TOO. I'm BRAZILIAN, so I MUST have a BIG BUTT. I'm PUERTO RICAN, so I MUST look good and be conceited. I'm SALVADORIAN, so I MUST be in MS 13. I'm POLISH, so I MUST be greedy. I'm HAWAIIAN, so I MUST be lazy. I'm PERUVIAN, so I MUST like llamas. I'm a STONER so I MUST be going in the wrong direction. I'm a VIRGIN, so I MUST be prude. I'm STRAIGHT EDGE, so I must be violent. I'm a FEMALE GAMER, so I MUST be ugly. I'm BLACK, so I MUST love fried chicken and kool-aid. I'm a GIRL who actually EATS LUNCH, so I MUST be fat. I'm SINGLE so I MUST be ugly. I'm a SKATER so I MUST do weed and steal stuff. I'm a PUNK so I must only wear black and date only other punks. I'm ASIAN so I must be a NERD that does HOMEWORK 24/7! I'm CHRISTIAN so I MUST hate homosexuals. I'm MIXED so I must be screwed up(Still a bit uunsure) I'm MUSLIM so I MUST be a terrorist. I'm in BAND, so I MUST be a dork. I'm BLACK so I MUST believe JESUS WUZ A BROTHA. I'm MORMON so I MUST be perfect. I'm WHITE and have black friends so I MUST think I'm black. I'm GOTH so I MUST worship the devil. I'm HISPANIC, so I MUST be dirty. I'm NOT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE, so I MUST be a loser. (I guess my way of thinking would be considered weird to others) I'm OVERWEIGHT, so I MUST have a problem with self control. I'm PREPPY, so I MUST shun those who don't wear Abercrombie & Hollister. I'm on a DANCE team, so I must be stupid, stuck up, and a whore. (praise dance) I'm YOUNG, so I MUST be naive. I'm MEXICAN, so I MUST have hopped the border. I GOT A CAR FOR MY BIRTHDAY, so I MUST be a spoiled brat. I'm BLACK, so I MUST love watermelon. I'm BI, so I MUST think every person I see is hot. I'm an ASIAN GUY, so I MUST have a small penis. I'm a GUY CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be gay. I'm a PREP, so I MUST be rich. I don't like the SUN, so I MUST be an albino. I have a lot of FRIENDS, so I MUST love to drink and party. I wear tight PANTS and I'm a guy, so I MUST be emo. I couldn't hurt a FLY, So I MUST be a pussy. I support GAY RIGHTS, so I MUST fit in with everyone. I hang out with teenage drinkers and smokers, so I MUST smoke and drink too. I have ARTISTIC TALENT, so I MUST think little of those who don't. (if writing counts as art, but I do dabble a little in drawing) I don't like to be in a BIG GROUP, so I MUST be anti-social. (This depends on the size of the group) I have a DIFFERENT sense of HUMOR, so I MUST be crazy. I tell people OFF, so I MUST be an over controlling bitch. My hair gets GREASY a lot, so I MUST have no hygiene skills. I'm DEFENSIVE, so I MUST be over controlling and a bitch. I'm a NUDIST, so I MUST want everyone to see my boobs. I read Comics, so I MUST be a loser. I hang out with a FORMER PROSTITUTE.. So I MUST be a whore myself. I'm TEXAN so I MUST ride a horse. I'm a GOTH, so I MUST be a Satanist. I'm a CROSS DRESSER, so I must be homosexual. I draw ANIME, so I MUST be a freak. I am a FANGIRL so I MUST be a crazy, obsessed stalker. I'm an ONLY CHILD so I MUST be spoiled. I'm INTELLIGENT so I MUST be weak. I am AMERICAN so I MUST be obese, loud-mouthed and arrogant. I'm WELSH so I MUST love sheep. I'm a YOUNG WRITER, so I MUST be emo. I'm CANADIAN, so I MUST talk with a funny accent. I'm a GUY, so I MUST ditch my pregnant girlfriend. I'm CANADIAN, so I MUST love hockey and beavers. I'm DISABLED, so I MUST be on Welfare. I'm a FEMINIST, so I MUST have a problem with sexuality and I want to castrate every man on the earth. I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE. I WEAR A BIG SUNHAT when I go outside, so I MUST be stupid. I like BLOOD, so I must be a VAMPIRE. I'm an ALBINO, so I MUST be an evil person with mental abilities and is A MURDERER! I'm ENGLISH, so I MUST speak with either a cockney or a posh accent, love tea and cricket, and have bad teeth. I'm WHITE, so I MUST be responsible for everything going wrong on the planet: past, present, and future. I don't like YAOI or YURI, so I must be a HOMOPHOBE. I'm not the most POPULAR person in school, so I MUST be a loser. I care about the ENVIRONMENT...I MUST be a tree hugging hippy. I have a FAN CHARACTER, so I MUST be an annoying Mary-sue. I CHAT, I MUST be having cyber sex. (Sometimes I chat) I'm PAGAN so I MUST sacrifice babies and drink the blood of virgins. I'm PAGAN so I MUST worship Satan. I'm CONSERVATIVE, so I MUST be against Abortion. I'm SWEDISH so I MUST be a tall blond blue-eyed lesbian. I'm a LESBIAN so I MUST want to get with every single girl that I see. I like CARTOONS, so I MUST be IRRESPONSIBLE. I like READING, so I MUST be a LONER. I have my OWN spiritual ideology; therefore I MUST be WRONG or MISGUIDED. I am WICCAN, so I MUST be a SATANIST. I DISAGREE with my government, so I MUST be a TERRORIST. I am a WITCH, so I MUST be and OLD HAG and fly on a broomstick. I love YAOI, so I MUST be GAY. I'm a PERSON, so I MUST be LABELED. I DON'T CURSE, so I MUST be an outcast. I like GAMES, ANIME and COMICS, so I MUST be childish. I'm SWEDISH, therefore I MUST be WHITE. I SPOT GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, so I MUST be a pedantic bastard. I'm GOTHIC, so I MUST be mean. I'm STRONG so I MUST be stupid. I'm Australian so I MUST hunt crocodiles and talk to kangaroos. I go to RENFAIRES, so I MUST talk weird, be a loser, and not be up with the times. I'm GAY so I'm after EVERY straight guy around. I don't want a BOYFRIEND so I MUST be Lesbian. (Kinda got mixed feelings here) I'm NOT CHRISTIAN so I MUST just need converting. I love marching band, so I MUST be a friendless freak. (Well I like listening to and watching them) I DRINK and SMOKE, so I MUST have no life. I write Fanfics, so I MUST be a freak. I want a husband who can SUPPORT A FAMILY, so I MUST be a gold digger. (this is one I wrote) Soundtrack of Your Life: Here's how you play. 1. Open your library (iTunes, Winamp, Media Player, iPod, etc) (I'm using Pandora.) Opening Credits: Sexy Love by Ne-Yo Waking Up: Our Song by Taylor Swift First Day of School: Stay by Rihanna Falling in Love: Miss Movin' On by Fifth Harmony (that's the exact OPPOSITE) Fight Song: You & I by One Direction (that's more like it) Breaking Up: Crazy Beautiful Life by Ke$ha Prom: The Boys by Nicki Minaj feat. Cassie Life's OK: White Horse by Taylor Swift (would it be funny if the next song was Dark Horse by Katy Perry?) Mental Breakdown: Bleeding Love by Leona Lewis (darn...still fitting, though) Driving: Take It Off by Ke$ha Flashback: Lollipop by Lil Wayne (um...) Getting Back Together: Confessions Part II by Usher (maybe part one would've worked better...) Wedding: Titanium by Madilyn Bailey (not fitting at all; I think it's just a cover, or not; it comes from an album called The Covers, Vol. 2) Birth of Child: The One That Got Away by Katy Perry (now this just doesn't make sense) Final Battle: No BS by Chris Brown (are you serious?) Death Scene: Telephone by Lady Gaga possibly feat. Beyonce (I was wrong before; this doesn't make sense; I mean, unless you look at the music video) Funeral Song: Rehab by Rihanna (this is only 25% relevant) End Credits: I Love It by Icona Pop (a great ending to a crappy soundtrack) Why do people even do these things!? HOW TO WRITE CRITIQUES FOR BEGINNERS So, you're reading a fanfiction, and you are captivated in the sheer awesomeness of the story. When you finish, you feel like you've just read a high quality story, and you think to yourself: OMG! This person needs to know how awesome their story is! You go to the review section and try to think of something thoughtful to type. After a few minutes, you decide that writing a detailed review about the story takes way too long. So, you simply put 'Awesome! XD' or something and leave it at that. Well, not anymore! If you want to know how to write a simple yet well-written critique to express your thoughts, just follow the guidelines below! Grammar: Think about sentence structure and other basic rules of grammar. Tell the author if their sentences were written correctly, and remember the C.U.P.S. (Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, Spelling) rule. Plot: The basic idea behind the story, and how well they executed the parts of a plot (exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution). Though I guess they don't have to follow that exact formula to a T... Pace: How fast or how slow the story progresses, to put it simply. Realism: Think about if every situation was handled as realistically as it would've been in real life/the canon universe. Originality: Think about any other time that you've read a fanfic for that fandom that had an idea similar to/the same as the idea for the story you just read. If you can't think of any, the story is original. If they handled the idea differently from what you would typically read, the story is original. Detail: Quality descriptions and explanations are essential for a good story that catches your attention. Characterization: If you've ever heard of OOC (Out Of Character), then you already have a good idea of what to look for in characterization. But if not, then make sure that the character(s) is acting like themselves, and if they aren't, make sure it's for a good reason. Believability: Think about if the story could've actually happened in the canon universe (not neccesarily if it could've been an actual episode or things like that). Overall Stars: Based on your personal grading scale, I would recommend a rating of no more than 5 or 10 stars. And, the number one rule... BE HONEST! Don't be afraid to tell the truth, but do it in a nice, subtle way! I promise that if you follow these guidelines, you'll be on your way to becoming a good critic in no time! - MarcelineFan |