Christoph Andretti
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Joined 03-29-13, id: 4630236, Profile Updated: 04-07-20
Author has written 19 stories for Hetalia - Axis Powers, Ouran High School Host Club, Hunger Games, Attack on Titan/進撃の巨人, Yuri!!! on Ice, Harry Potter, and My Hero Academia/僕のヒーローアカデミア.

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Age (probably 15-17 as far as age range)

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Personality (This is the big one. Don't just list adjectives. Give me a feeling of what this character is like as a human being!):

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How do they wear their school uniform:

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Hero costume (no need to be a fashion designer, just a basic rundown.):

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What do they do at this school? Extra activities?:

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Weaknesses (same as above. Include equal or more weaknesses than strengths please):

How do they feel about villains?:

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Reaction to killing someone (if it happens):

What story arc do you envision this character having (if any):

Romance (you up for it? If so, with whom?):Anyway, I believe that one of the best ways to become a better writer is to handle and dish out critique. If there are any stories that are underrated or unappreciated, please let me know. I love all stories, even the ones I hate. I pride myself on being a critic, and I will actually post small snippets detailing reviews of other's stories. It works in a range of four stars. Four stars is excellent. Three and a half is very good. Once in a while, a story will technically be good enough for four, put I'll give it three and a half. Four stars come down to personal preference, not objectivity. Three stars is good. Two and a half is borderline. Two stars and under are not recommended. Some reviews are tentative considering the nature of the updates some authors have in their stories. So here is what I have so far.

Worthless by Minima Italia: While well-intentioned and amicable at best, the story just doesn't wrap in the emotional content it's trying to get across so far. The characters feel flat and stilted, and the jarring tone and role reversal happens much to fast, without any real warning or reason. Regardless, the story grows with you, and potential is now being tapped. This story is on the upside now, so keep at it. 2/4 stars.

Bone Dry by PlanetOfTheWeepingWillow: While at times a bit trite and heavy handed in its drama, it carries a good blend of smart dialogue and characterizations that seem obvious at the start, but plunge into a much more enriching realm. This is certainly underrated. 4/4 stars.

It Takes Two To Heal by Kinta101: While it's certainly not perfect, and readers may not appreciate the slow editing and pacing of many scenes, the unique and realistic take on mental illness and likable characters is more than enough to continue onward. 3/4 stars.

It's Nothing by babbitrulez: With spot-on characterizations of Matthew and Alfred, well-done dialogue, and excellent editing, this story of an ordinary moment flourishes as an excellent portrait of unease and the catharsis following it. 4/4 stars.

Garden Wars by OutToGarden: A unique mixer of melancholy and catharsis, this story leaves a certain feeling of bittersweet mess. Maybe from a time long gone, or one that has yet to occur. 3/4 stars.

Falling In The Ocean by FearIsButFearItself: There is so much more to mention. That is just the tip of the iceberg. This is it. This is the dictionary definition of poetry in motion. The story does what all stories should do fundamentally: give us new and improved insight on places that we can't describe or understand on our own. It is moving, emotional, and hits such a personal mental connection to me that I almost feel jealous. How could i make imagery this understanding? How could i make new emotional connections that can say so little but tell so much? When you hear what the story says, it sounds pretty, but you can't get anywhere in life with just that. When you LISTEN to what the story says, you have one of the most emotional and moving stories I have read so far. 4/4 stars.

The Pain Of A Thousand Days by hetalia13canada: So that's it. We have to go through all of this for what i know is the obligatory ending where Gil and Matthew end up together, overcoming the issues that they never actually face. This story is completely removed from any plane of reality i can think of. Clearly, you don't know what you are talking about, and you just decided to make a story that can give people a quick shock and awe. I guess in that way, it is effective, but there are stories worlds better that are more deserving of time and energy. The story exploits a character pain and suffering of a real issue that affects many people for a popular pairing and views. This story is absolutely reprehensible. 0/4 Stars.

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Your Hero Academia: An American Life reviews
SYOC! As the Symbol Of Peace and the Number 1 Pro-Hero, Izuku Midoriya chases a new dream: teaching the next generation of great heroes in America! But a new school and new students means new challenges; a sinister new Hero Killer. Now Izuku must devise a plan to beat this threat with his new class of students including YOU! SUBMIT NOW! Cover Boi: Abel Chevelle!
My Hero Academia/僕のヒーローアカデミア - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 60 - Words: 328,444 - Reviews: 437 - Favs: 76 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 1/15 - Published: 3/25/2020 - Izuku M., Katsuki B., OC
The Burning Phoenix--An SYOC reviews
Ten years after the events at Hogwarts, things are getting back to normal. Damaged repaired and reputation restored, Hogwarts is thriving with new students. However, when a new powerful and evil force threatens everything, will the students rise up to the challenge? Or become pawns in something more sinister than they could imagine? SYOC! Put your characters in NOW!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 110,571 - Reviews: 260 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 3/25/2020 - Published: 4/11/2018 - Harry P., Minerva M., OC
Delayed reviews
Viktor is a happy man that doesn't let life, or Yuri, get him down! But...he may have met his match when he travels to the United States, but is not allowed to enter! Now, he is forced to stay with Yuri in an airport and must devise a way to enter the country. However, when Viktor meets a timid Japanese man, he may not be so eager to leave. Based on the film "The Terminal"
Yuri!!! on Ice - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,440 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 11 - Published: 8/18/2018 - [Viktor N., Yuuri K.] [Yuri P., OC]
Scenes From The Good Life reviews
Life is a tragedy. Life is a soap opera. But Mostly, Life Is A Sitcom. EPISODE 1: DOPING ANONYMOUS. Russia is banned from the Olympics! Yuri is depressed, Victor is inconsolable, and Yuuri has to pick up the pieces. Sequel to Detroit And The Good Life With You!
Yuri!!! on Ice - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,051 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 1/3/2018 - Published: 12/4/2017 - [Yuuri K., Viktor N.] [Yuri P., OC]
Breaking The Void: The 78th Hunger Games reviews
First, we went to space and lived. Then, we went to space and died. Now, let's see if anyone can survive interstellar travel. After the events of the Doors Of Perception: the 77th Hunger Games, the Capitol is out for blood. These 24 Tributes have no clue what they are in for! Who are they? You decide! It's the Hunger Games...In Space and Beyond! SYOT! SUBMIT NOW!
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,759 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 12/19/2017 - Published: 5/18/2017
Hospital Food reviews
Yuri Plisetsky had it all: looks, money, and the best ice skater in the world. So why did he try to kill himself? Yuri is stuck in a hospital with two lovestruck doctors, annoying Khazaki therapist, and the most clueless group of nurses in the world. Now, he must devise a plan to survive his week under their watch and search for meaning in his life. HOSPITAL AU!
Yuri!!! on Ice - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,926 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 47 - Updated: 8/2/2017 - Published: 4/30/2017 - [Yuuri K., Viktor N.] Yuri P., Otabek A.
Odyssey Of The Stars: The 76th Hunger Games reviews
After the insipid third Quarter Quell, our beloved president has decided to up the ante in the most extreme way possible. By going to the final frontier. It is the Hunger Games...IN SPACE! SYOT. SYOT CLOSED. You can still sponsor. LET THE GAMES BEGIN!
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 58 - Words: 148,101 - Reviews: 520 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 5/18/2017 - Published: 6/5/2014 - OC - Complete
Doors Of Perception: The 77th Hunger Games reviews
After the events of the 76th Hunger Games, the next Rebellion is in full effect. So what better way to test out their objective than in the Games! We are crossing dimensions and Universes! Closed! See Breaking The Void: The 77th Hunger Games for details.
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 32 - Words: 72,891 - Reviews: 210 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 5/18/2017 - Published: 8/10/2014
Detroit and The Good Life With You reviews
It's been two years since Yuuri retired from skating and became engaged to Victor. So, are they going to sit back and enjoy the sunset? Hell, No! Instead, they move to Detroit, USA and take in an annoyed Yuri Plisetsky as their student and train him to win the Grand Prix while teaching him a thing or two about skating, Eros, and possibly love in the Motor City.
Yuri!!! on Ice - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 35 - Words: 128,072 - Reviews: 196 - Favs: 204 - Follows: 171 - Updated: 4/30/2017 - Published: 12/15/2016 - [Yuuri K., Viktor N.] [Yuri P., OC] - Complete
Attack On Titan: The Musical! reviews
Eren Yeager is an angry, neurotic, and somewhat insane teenager living in post-breakup depression and spiraling grades. However, after an untimely death, opportunity comes knocking in the form of the Trost High Drama Club. Thrusted in the Director's chair, he must now write and direct a musical production with roughly ten equally neurotic actors. Or suffer Levi's wrath. AU!
Attack on Titan/進撃の巨人 - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,794 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 2/16/2015 - Published: 10/30/2014 - Eren Y., Mikasa A., Armin A., Annie L.
Sunrise And The Death Of Insanity
Arthur Kirkland is an individual in endless inward turmoil. Now, he is stuck with other scientists in a race to find the cure for a spreading disease. As time and vengeance close in on the group, Arthur and his comrades must band together to survive in this very near-future. CO-WRITTEN BY PLANETOFTHEWEEPINGWILLOW!
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,750 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Published: 10/24/2014 - England/Britain, America, Hungary, Prussia
The League reviews
After a few months of inactivity, Kaoru has had enough of the Host Club ignoring each other. Not only that, but Hikaru has become more depressive from Haruhi's relationship with Tamaki. What can save these relationships from splintering apart? Fantasy Football, of course. However, that is only a catalyst. Can the Club survive in Boston? Pairings Aplenty. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!
Ouran High School Host Club - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,958 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Published: 10/12/2014 - Haruhi F., Tamaki S., Kaoru H., Hikaru H.
The Long Fall Forward reviews
Formerly known as AMERICA And CANADA At Ouran! When America and Canada go to Ouran Academy, they never thought of the seven individuals that would haunt their lives. Now they must concoct a way to survive in this teenage wasteland. Based on the original story by Baileypuppylover.
Crossover - Ouran High School Host Club & Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 17 - Words: 27,561 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 71 - Follows: 98 - Updated: 7/16/2014 - Published: 2/11/2014 - America, Canada
The Vices Of Reality reviews
People claim that their lives are ruined by video games. That they never see the sun. That coffee runs through their veins because of multiple days without sleep. Elizabeta Hedervary knows that these statements are true. She also knows that sometimes these games don't ruin your life, that they can lead to close friendship, and sometimes even more. Co-written by IsThisPhantasy.
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 14 - Words: 20,455 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 6/26/2014 - Published: 5/10/2014 - [Hungary, Prussia] Austria
Last Call To Sunday reviews
Matthew, Eliza, and Gilbert have always been the best of friends. They live in the almost-hood of Los Angeles, making their ways in the world. One day, their lives change forever as a nuclear missile obliterates everything around them. Now they are in a race against time to procure their own slice of peace and sanity in this destructive world.
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,978 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 6/4/2014 - Published: 5/1/2014 - [Hungary, Prussia] Canada
As Good As It Gets reviews
Meet Mark. He is an anal-retentive, selfish, apathetic, and maybe mentally ill young man in Chicago aspiring to be a pilot. After angering the wrong girl after a failed date, he gets sent a Punk!England UNIT, with more to come . Will his life fall apart, or will these people be a welcome addition to a somewhat turbulent life. One thing is for sure. Heads are gonna roll. Buckle up!
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 15 - Words: 26,948 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/2/2014 - Published: 3/30/2013 - England/Britain
The World Divided By Two reviews
The Dakota Twins, Kevin and Thomas Jones, have always lived relatively secluded, yet content, lives from the other states. That all changes when they get the break they need, and they land on the international stage, working with a cynical Brit, egotistic Prussian, flirty Frenchman, a violent Hungarian, and others. The whole world never saw them coming.
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,519 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 4/1/2014 - Published: 5/5/2013 - England/Britain, America, OC
The Fine Line of Excellence reviews
Flynn had been in rough waters the past few years. After getting out of prison, he gets accepted for a job at the prestigious Hetalia Amalgamated Corporation, Inc. With the pressure of redemption from a certain Prussian manager, along with the incorrigible Francis, Alfred, and Elizabeta, he must devise a plan to appease others while finding his own path in life.
Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,987 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/13/2014 - Published: 2/6/2014 - Hungary, Prussia, England/Britain
The Luck Of The Draw reviews
Kaoru Hitachiin has been living a relatively normal live through his high school years. He sees his friends, enjoys club activities, and goes home. One day, an unexpected person comes to him for help on a huge project. Now, Kaoru has to devise a plan to create a work of art and keep his shrinking family together.
Ouran High School Host Club - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,212 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/8/2014 - Kaoru H., Renge H.