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Joined 04-06-13, id: 4647526, Profile Updated: 04-09-23
Author has written 8 stories for Naruto, Ranma, Dragon Ball Z, Pokémon, Bleach, Yu Yu Hakusho, and Yakuza.

Tbh, I'm on the verge of retirement from fanfiction. It seems like no matter much I write or how well I write I barely get any reviews. It's frustrating. I put so much of my time, so much of my heart and soul, into making the best stories that I can, ensuring I keep characters in characters and my grammar is mostly readable. Yet I see authors garner 10x the number of reviews, faves and followers my stories get despite having poor grammar, no flow to their stories, horrific characterization and no heart. I won't name names, but this one MHAxNaruto "crossover" has the self-insert MC reincarnating into MHA with Naruto powers. How does that make any sense?

That screams Gary-stu, having his powers run on a system that neither Aizawa nor All for One can affect meaning nothing can inconvenience his stu. My characters may be powerful, but I always try to balance them with some flaws. The self-insert from my deleted MHA story was shy and even easily teased by Mina. Everything didn't involve him and his word wasn't law. Not to mention he wasn't tied to Izuku like the self-insert in the aforementioned MHAxNaruto story who was the brother of Izuku. At least my self-insert had his own place in the story. He had his own friends that weren't Izuku's. Sure, he was nice to Izuku because he's a nice guy, but other than that he left him to his own devices.

I just don't get why people are reading the story. The writing style is average, the story doesn't flow well and feels unfocused with so many time-skips and his character is a boring sideman in his own narrative.

A Naruko story I tried to read has thousands of faves and followers despite being badly written. It's ironic because the author claims he hates badly written stories, then writes a story that's badly written, creating a Naruko that has no individuality from canon Naruto. Sure, I get he wants to keep a fem Naruto close to the original, but that doesn't disregard the butterfly effect being a girl would have on his character. For instance, a girl Naru wouldn't say 'dattebayo' or be a Bart Simpson-like prankster because those are traits a brash boy would have. She likely wouldn't wear his shitty jumpsuit either.

The author moves like a sex-deprived virgin forcing a Yuri harem and turns established straight girls like Ino gay to facilitate it. He claims to hate Mary-stus yet has his Naruto dressed in a Naruko skin get everything she wants and needs handed to her on a silver platter. He also uses fanfic troupes like the civilian council, too

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Extraordinary Times by Kenchi618 reviews
The life of a young mutant is perilous enough on its own. Follow the experiences of a student entering the hallowed halls of the Xavier Institute for Higher Learning, learning just what it takes and what it means to count himself as one of a race that is feared and targeted by many. Welcome to the X-Men, Bellamy Marcher - Hope you survive the experience.
X-Men - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 47 - Words: 513,773 - Reviews: 3517 - Favs: 5,297 - Follows: 5,532 - Updated: 3/11 - Published: 4/1/2016 - OC
Better Left Unsaid by Kenchi618 reviews
Mizuki never got to shoot his mouth off at Naruto the night he took the Scroll of Seals. Other than skipping a half-manic monologue from him, what exactly did this change for everyone's favorite blonde ninja? Who knows? Rated M for language/later events.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 85 - Words: 1,081,945 - Reviews: 11370 - Favs: 19,902 - Follows: 18,945 - Updated: 7/28/2023 - Published: 12/14/2010 - [Naruto U., Ino Y.] Team Ten
Less Than Zero by Kenchi618 reviews
It's one thing to enter the world of heroes and villains, it's another thing entirely to find your way back out again. That's a bitter truth to swallow when you want no part of the life to begin with. A hasty decision from a young man with his back against the wall sends him down a path of which there is no return. OC main character.
DC Superheroes - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 47 - Words: 567,507 - Reviews: 8990 - Favs: 11,821 - Follows: 11,432 - Updated: 8/17/2022 - Published: 5/19/2014 - OC - Complete
My Pride is a Hurricane by NeonZangetsu reviews
Deep in the bowels of Impel Down, the world's most dangerous criminals are jailed and left to rot within six levels of hell. However, housed in the lowest level of hell, HE is set free. Now, the last remnant of an old era has been set loose upon the world...but why is he so fascinated by ramen? Set during Impel Down Arc and beyond. NarutoxHarem! One Piece! Crossover!
Crossover - Naruto & One Piece - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 66,599 - Reviews: 940 - Favs: 3,332 - Follows: 3,269 - Updated: 4/6/2021 - Published: 4/29/2011 - Naruto U.
Higher EDucation by otalku17 reviews
Ed, Edd, and Eddy have been together through many adventures. But what would happen if their parents sent the trio to the toughest school on the face of the planet, Bullworth Academy? Rated T for language and mild violence. No pairings, sorry, but to keep you entertained, I'm throwing in a few go-nowhere romance side stories for the laughs. Here's to hoping this gets over.
Crossover - Ed, Edd n Eddy & Bully - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 17 - Words: 88,572 - Reviews: 207 - Favs: 189 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 10/31/2020 - Published: 6/28/2013 - Eds
Dragon Flight by allhailnarusama reviews
During the fight against Zamasu, the fusion of Goku and Vegeta, Vegito, finds himself in a world of shinobi, and a girl named Sakura offers to help him find his way back to save his world. /see profile for updates /now on AO3 also
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 22,573 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 109 - Updated: 3/17/2019 - Published: 6/19/2017 - Vegito, Sakura H.
The Sun And The Moon by dirtyShoes reviews
A random shift of events results in Kara Zor-El accidentally ripping into the DBZ Mirai timeline. Surviving Trunks' dystopian reality is merely the first leg of a long journey of self-discovery, love, and hardship. As new bonds are forged and old ones get tested, intersecting worlds will come to respect (or fear) the might of a Saiyan and a Kryptonian standing in unity.
Crossover - Justice League & Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 9 - Words: 62,032 - Reviews: 114 - Favs: 137 - Follows: 162 - Updated: 3/15/2018 - Published: 9/15/2014 - Bulma, M. Trunks, Bruce W./Batman, Linda L./Kara Zor-El/Supergirl
Naruto: Soldiers of Fortune by Kenchi618 reviews
AU in a more modern urban setting. Will be EPIC in length. Things aren't as they appear in this world. With a normal life out of reach, can Naruto figure out the mysteries that surround his existence and survive long enough to cash in on the potentially lucrative (and dangerous) career path of the mercenary? ...Either way it beats actually working for a living. NarutoxFem. Kyuubi
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 52 - Words: 424,252 - Reviews: 1747 - Favs: 2,941 - Follows: 2,569 - Updated: 12/29/2017 - Published: 3/17/2010 - Naruto U., Kyuubi/Kurama
Maelstrom Blade Dancer! by 0 Jordinio 0 reviews
Through willpower alone, he gained power. Everyone else exposed to the powerful energy of Solomon died violently, but not him. He took that power, he dominated it even as it tore his body apart from the inside out, and he made it his. He was an artificial Elementalist, the number two assassin in the entire institute, destined for greatness...He'd do things his own way though.
Crossover - Naruto & Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance/精霊使いの剣舞 - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,647 - Reviews: 134 - Favs: 471 - Follows: 507 - Updated: 4/9/2017 - Published: 1/26/2016 - Naruto U., K. Kamito, Ellis F., Est
Ascension! by 0 Jordinio 0 reviews
His planet was lost, his people were few. His uncle was murdered by the only blood kin he had left. Predators stalked from all corners - he had no choice, but to grow. No choice, but to ascend. (Title/Summary - Pending)
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,564 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 188 - Follows: 208 - Updated: 3/20/2017 - Published: 10/17/2016 - Gohan, Naruto U., Kyuubi/Kurama
The Salad in my Ramen by Akatsuki King reviews
While on the mission to find her father, Sarada gets separated from Naruto and is attacked by Shin. A mess-up in his space-time ninjutsu sends her hurtling back in time to before Naruto was Hokage. Uchiha Sarada, meet Uzumaki Naruto, genin of team 7! Spoilers for those who haven't read past chapter 700. Pairing is Sarada x Naruto. Will be epic in length. Chapter 5 posted!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 18,664 - Reviews: 560 - Favs: 1,264 - Follows: 1,705 - Updated: 2/12/2017 - Published: 9/10/2015 - [Naruto U., Sarada U.]
Legendary Warrior by Psudocode Samurai reviews
It was myth, legend. The one that had trained the Sage of Six Paths...It was worth the risk, he had to see if it was true... A Naruto/DBZ Abridged story! Humor, smack talking, and a pecking order.
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 11,888 - Reviews: 204 - Favs: 755 - Follows: 695 - Updated: 2/1/2016 - Published: 5/6/2013 - Mister Popo, Naruto U.
Narutoverse vs Dragon Ball Z Universe (The REAL STATS SHEET) by wizardkoli1 reviews
People think the Narutoverse is stronger than DBZ and that's laughable. I'm going to show exactly WHY the Narutoverse pales in comparison. Apparently, if you write a stats sheet with a one-shot at the end, it's not going against the rules so that's exactly what I'm going to do. Enjoy the REAL stats sheet.
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 48,065 - Reviews: 3563 - Favs: 148 - Follows: 108 - Updated: 10/28/2015 - Published: 4/5/2015
A Black Heart by Sedor reviews
Ichigo lost more than just his mother at the age of nine. Now seven years later, he is no longer the smiling, naive boy he once was, but is in fact something far, far darker. Warnings in Chapter 1. Villain!Ichigo
Bleach - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 22 - Words: 84,487 - Reviews: 729 - Favs: 1,234 - Follows: 1,252 - Updated: 6/28/2015 - Published: 2/7/2013 - Ichigo K.
Change of Guard by Super Oahu reviews
Gid knew that when the reigns of power shifted over to Rito that the boy would need his own right hand man. Seeing how the boy's usual friends are far from reliable, he decides to hold an audition for the future aide. But much like how he favors Rito to marry Lala, Gid also has a favored choice for Rito's support. That person being a retired domestic terrorist with really big hair.
Crossover - Boondocks & To Love-Ru - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 21,225 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 45 - Updated: 1/17/2015 - Published: 8/18/2014 - Huey F., Jazmine D., Gid L. D., Mikan Y.
The Sealed King by Ryujin Zangetsu 17 reviews
A thousand years ago, he swore to them that he would rise and strike his revenge. After 900 years, he would regain his pulse. After another 90 years, he would regain his intellect; and after another 9 more years, the destruction of the Shinobi World will began, and the entire world engulfed in darkness once again. Dark Quincy Ichigo. Please Review and enjoy!
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,114 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 155 - Follows: 153 - Published: 1/4/2015 - Jiraiya, Minato N., Ichigo K., Juhabach
Goku (Picollo Jr Saga) vs Madara Uchiha by Eu sunt Dracul 1 reviews
Telepoted to another dimension , Goku find himself in world where Ninja live . The world where Ki doesn't exist. But that won't stop his lust for battle and soul purpose to protect innocent. But what will happen when our hero go one-on-one with almighty Madara ? Lets find out.
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,193 - Reviews: 98 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 12/28/2014 - Published: 7/14/2014 - Goku, Naruto U. - Complete
The Prankster God of Huecco Mundo by AnisoulJ93 reviews
Ichigo and Rukia have a run in with what is quite possibly the weirdest Hollow ever. The problem? It won't leave them alone! Rated T just to be safe.
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 63,615 - Reviews: 1527 - Favs: 6,408 - Follows: 6,416 - Updated: 5/2/2014 - Published: 7/19/2013 - Naruto U., Ichigo K., Rukia K.
The Guardian and the Maelstrom by HellkingUzumaki reviews
There have always been legends of swordsmen of immense power who could do extraordinary things. What many people don't realize is that those swordsmen all belonged to the same clan. A clan that now only has two living members. Two brothers living in Konoha. What happens when they awaken those powers? M for blood Gore and Language.
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,563 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 75 - Follows: 91 - Published: 4/8/2014 - Naruto U., Ichigo K.
Ichigo Uzumaki by Zanka no Tachi 31 reviews
Will be continuing as of some time in the future (Needs editing as well as rewrite of chap 5 6). I kinda forgot what the summary was before I took it down so if your game come and take a look. ABANDONED
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,123 - Reviews: 128 - Favs: 214 - Follows: 230 - Updated: 11/8/2013 - Published: 7/4/2013 - Ichigo K.
Twist of Fate by yotuine reviews
Falling in love with the most dangerous gang leader in Japan was not on Sakura's to do list. -AU.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,697 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 7/29/2013 - Published: 7/23/2013 - Sasuke U., Sakura H.
Ninja of the Kais by DragonMasterFlex reviews
After making the ultimate sacrifice to save the ninja world, Naruto is rescued from certain death by the Supreme Kai. Now the greatest ninja from the hidden leaf village has a new mission, protect the earth.
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 115,190 - Reviews: 1197 - Favs: 2,705 - Follows: 2,192 - Updated: 9/29/2011 - Published: 2/12/2010 - Android 18, Naruto U.
Gossip Is Your Friend by cutecrazyice reviews
"Did you hear? Sakura got laid last night. Big time." In which rumors circulate, Sakura gets laid, and Sasuke is not happy. At all. SasuSaku
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,861 - Reviews: 211 - Favs: 1,145 - Follows: 185 - Published: 7/22/2011 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
AU: The Prince of Fire by DragonMasterFlex reviews
When Naruto goes 4 tails on the training trip with Jiraiya, instead of loosing control a transformation occurs and the prince of fire country is reborn. A Naruto modeled after Vegeta. NarutoXInoXSakura
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 29,014 - Reviews: 236 - Favs: 861 - Follows: 815 - Updated: 3/15/2011 - Published: 1/11/2010 - Naruto U., Ino Y.
Nine Months by SwagSammich78 reviews
Drabble series! Sometimes, dreams change and plans are altered. Can they both handle it? Is a stroller really THAT expensive? And who the hell needs a Prada diaper bag? Pairing: Who do you THINK?
Boondocks - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 32 - Words: 124,728 - Reviews: 350 - Favs: 169 - Follows: 109 - Updated: 8/27/2010 - Published: 2/8/2010 - Huey F., Jazmine D.
Tale of the Demon Fox by RogueRoguePhoenix reviews
After years of planning, Uzumaki Naruto had razed Konoha to the ground and slaughtered his enemies. With the shinobi world dying, the demon ninja decided to seek peace in a new one. His arrival will spark a new revolution to all Yokais. -Dark Naruto-
Crossover - Naruto & Rosario + Vampire - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 58,952 - Reviews: 655 - Favs: 2,098 - Follows: 1,817 - Updated: 3/20/2010 - Published: 10/31/2009 - Naruto U., Moka A.
The Desire Doll by Depravity reviews
Shampoo takes Ranma on a trip to the future with the help of a magical doll to show him that he can be happy with her. Things don't quite go as planned. Mild Ranma bashing in early chapters.
Ranma - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 43,165 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 32 - Updated: 11/20/2007 - Published: 2/16/2005 - Ranma, Ryoga
Happily Married by Kirinin reviews
Ranma wakes one day to find that a couple of things are different. Nothing major, just a new life complete with child, dojo to run, and, most importantly, a spouse. Problem is, the last thing Ranma recalls is being sixteen... COMPLETE! Now in Italian too.
Ranma - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 110,798 - Reviews: 484 - Favs: 790 - Follows: 227 - Updated: 7/17/2007 - Published: 12/7/2004 - Ranma, Ryoga - Complete
Piece by Piece by Goku's Daughter reviews
When I became a shinigami, I joined the 13th Division where I met my ViceCaptain Kurosaki Rukia. Then I met her husband, and slowly I learned their story piece by piece. IchiRuki. An onlooker observes Soul Society’s most famous couple in the afterlife.
Bleach - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,355 - Reviews: 180 - Favs: 688 - Follows: 101 - Published: 7/2/2007 - Ichigo K., Rukia K. - Complete
Worlds Fall Apart by CreamSoda1382 reviews
You mean Ranma's really a...girl? o.O How will everyone react when they find out that Ranma, man among men, is actually a girl who was turned into a boy with a Jusenkyo curse after Soun accidentally makes a deal with a demon? How will Ranma react?
Ranma - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 28 - Words: 103,601 - Reviews: 520 - Favs: 578 - Follows: 268 - Updated: 1/1/2007 - Published: 5/5/2006 - Ranma, Ryoga - Complete
Can You Keep A Secret? by Sailor Billion Dollar Princess reviews
It's Natsumi's birthday, and the guys are out on a job. She's depressed that a certain GetBacker didn't wish her a happy birthday. NatsumiGinji
Get Backers - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,676 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 5 - Published: 10/3/2006 - Natsumi, Ginji - Complete
Vault by Elric-Chan reviews
She felt like a vault that had been broken into, with all of its contents stolen. And the thief was Sasuke. [SasuSaku rape]
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,176 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 16 - Published: 9/22/2006 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
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The Fractured Timeline reviews
In the rhythm of an upward swing in life—shedding pounds, carving out a career, and nurturing a budding romance—the abrupt intrusion of chaos shattered the harmony. A random act of violence severed the thread of my existence, leaving me in a void where the familiar gave way to an unsettling unknown. Tokyo's Demon Gorilla REWRITTEN.
Crossover - Bleach & Yakuza - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 12,741 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 1/26 - Published: 12/17/2023 - Yuzu K., OC
A Library of Ideas reviews
Hey, ever think to yourself, 'Man. I can't think of an idea for a story, but I want to write one so badly' Then come on in to the Thugs Bunny store. He has a myriad of your anime needs from Naruto, to Bleach, to Ranma, to Ryoga, to fem Naruto and even the occasional Naruto/Bleach crossover, but of course I have them otherwise this wouldn't be in this section. Grab yourself a fic!
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 95 - Words: 644,661 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 124 - Follows: 103 - Updated: 3/12/2023 - Published: 1/19/2014 - Naruto U., Ichigo K.
Konoha's Duracell Bunnies reviews
Reborn in the Naruto world with inextinguishable energy to rival Naruto, Ito Daichi links up with his favourite ramen-loving Jinchuuriki in a way he really wasn't expecting, with the two becoming the living incarnations of Duracell's mascot. Self-insert. OP!Naru.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 20,794 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 136 - Follows: 180 - Updated: 3/12/2023 - Published: 11/27/2022 - Naruko U., OC
Winning In Another Life reviews
I thought I would just fade out of existence when I died, maybe get an invitation into Tom & Jerry's version of heaven if I was lucky, yet when I reopened my eyes I found a creature that could only belong to one franchise. Suddenly, I felt as though I had already won in another life, if only for the fact I could get that Raichu I always wanted growing up.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 30,937 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 78 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 2/16/2023 - Published: 1/17/2023 - Ash K./Satoshi, Pikachu, Raichu, OC
New Kids on the Block reviews
Buu didn't just accidentally tunnel an exit to the outside world from the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. He accidentally DESTROYED the training dimension itself, sending each of them away to new realities.
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 118,951 - Reviews: 394 - Favs: 332 - Follows: 385 - Updated: 10/5/2020 - Published: 9/10/2017 - Trunks, Goten, Naruto U.
Coasting Through Life reviews
Left without a purpose since his removal from Spirit World ranks, the human world's strongest warrior wanders, searching every nook and cranny of the lands that could give him that sense of meaning once again. Fortunately, a little neighbourhood block in his hometown of Tokyo has no shortage of things to do. Yusukexfem!Ranma
Crossover - Ranma & Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 59,640 - Reviews: 96 - Favs: 317 - Follows: 353 - Updated: 3/8/2020 - Published: 4/14/2017 - [Yusuke U., Ranma]
The City of Insanity reviews
To think he wanted to be an upstanding shinigami and scout out a city not named Karakura for once. Gah. He set foot in quite possibly the City for Escapees from the asylum and now he has a redhead girl on his ass hounding him to teach her his abilities. Fuck his life. IchigoXfem!Ranma
Crossover - Ranma & Bleach - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 150,244 - Reviews: 198 - Favs: 459 - Follows: 494 - Updated: 9/30/2018 - Published: 7/28/2015 - [Ranma, Ichigo K.]
The World's Strongest Man reviews
Bummed to be left alone the ancestral son of the most powerful demon to ever grace the worlds sets off on a new journey, allowing his senses to lead him to quite possibly the looniest city ever. Now he has to whip out the imaginary belt to show these nut-cases just what a real man is before he loses his goddamned marbles. DISCONTINUED! Being rewritten as Coasting Through Life.
Crossover - Ranma & Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 167,702 - Reviews: 151 - Favs: 248 - Follows: 225 - Updated: 4/16/2017 - Published: 1/28/2014 - Yusuke U. - Complete