Author has written 7 stories for Yu-Gi-Oh, Harry Potter, Nightmare Before Christmas, and Sandman.
okay, someone left a review on my, 'The Queen Of Halloween town' story, with the name, Tough Cookie, on it. It was annonymos, so I am afraid I cant respond to it, but I rEALLY want to, so if anyone who reads this knows this person, pleas relay the message.
Okay, you might want someone to check over your grammar and spelling because there were some things in there that made me go 'Huh?'
In fact, a lot of things were confusing about it. I'm willing to ignore the blatant plotholes such as Sally was able to fall out of a two storey building in the film and survive but falls down a hill and dies and the fact that Jack was originally dead and died again from falling out of a window. God knows there's been more nonsensical things in most TV shows. But, what, the new skeleton girl is meant to be some un-dead prostitute?
Sorry, but if you're going to write a story, cover it from all possible angles or whack an AU label on it.
Woah, I thought I did check it for grammer, guess I missed some things. thanks much for pointing those out to me, I feel so blind.
I must have missed the sally fallling out of a window in the film because I cant seem to remember that. I assure you that if I did, I wouldint have put that in there. oopsies.
second, I gues I didint make this quite as clear as I should have, sure he was dead, but when he fell out, all his bones broked, making it completely impossible for him to be well, the living dead. Without bones that work, you cant be, in the sence of being moving and thinking ect. , alive.
Yes, she was some undead prostitute. I am sick and twisted.
triple hugs* thank you SO much for telling me that, I will try to remember that next time I do a fic.