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Joined 09-12-13, id: 5129513, Profile Updated: 03-22-25
Author has written 3 stories for Naruto.

I started a discord server (Lifetime Promise) with a friend of mine, Yogami Asura. He's the author of a great story "I Promise." The server is for fans of our stories, or really anyone who wants to talk Fanfiction and anime with us and others from the community. I encourage you to join if interested.

Here is the link: https://discord . g g/ z Z G 4 U y p a 2 Y

Just remove the spaces when you go to use it. I hope to see you all there!


Gender: Male

Age: 27

Favorite Manga: Tokyo Ghoul/Tokyo Ghoul :re

Favorite TG Character: Ken

Favorite Anime: Naruto/Naruto Shippuden

Favorite Naruto Character: Jiraiya

Favorite TV Show: House M.D.


A Bet of a Lifetime: (Updated 03/22/25)

There are 4 'Interludes' that aren't numbered as chapters, which is why the Most Recent chapter is three less than what the story shows when you click on it.

(Previous) Chapter 66 - 100% Written (8.0K), 100% Edited (Contemplate Pain) - Released 2/22/2025.

(Current) Chapter 67 - 100% Written (8.4K), 100% Edited (Accept Pain) - Released 3/22/2025 12PM EST.

(Next 1) Chapter 68 - 0% Written (0.0K), 0% Edited (Know Pain) - Tentative Release Date 5/24/25 12-1PM EST.

(Next 2) Chapter 69 - 0% Written (0.0K), 0% Edited (Monsters) - Release Date - TBD.

(Next 3) Chapter 70 - 0% Written (0.0K), 0% Edited (TBD) - Release Date - TBD.

Jiraiya being my favorite character, I wanted to create a story that expanded on the father-son relationship between Jiraiya and Naruto. While the story has evolved well beyond what it was when I thought of it almost 13 years ago, that is still something that I have been able to keep. It will still focus mainly on Naruto and his story, but with Jiraiya having more screen time and playing a more active role in the development of our favorite young blond.


A Bet of a Lifetime Battle Types: Categorizes the different types of abilities prevalent in the Narutoverse. If a character can fall under two categories their primary will be listed first, secondary will be listed second. Example: Ino Yamanaka: Support/Medic. If a character falls under three or more categories, they will be designated as a 'balanced' battle type. Battle types will be included along with character profiles at the end of every chapter starting with Chapter 32: A Rat Hidden Amongst the Leaves.

Combat: Up close and personal.

Excels in one-on-one combat with the use of either Ninjutsu or Taijutsu (or Sharingan Genjutsu). High strength and speed are common attributes in this category. Extremely dangerous to face without back up and can be even further enhanced in tandem with a Support or Strategist type.

Example: Sasuke Uchiha

Support: The help.

Skills, such as Genjutsu or the Nara Clan's Jutsu (among others), that are not best-suited to be on the front lines. Most effectively used to assist and enhance either a Combat or Assault Type.

Example: Kurenai Yuhi

Reconnaissance: Information is key.

Master of infiltration and espionage tactics makes them adept in gathering intelligence. Or, use of the Hyuga's Byakugan to scout ahead and gather intelligence or secure positional advantage. Dangerous when paired with the Strategist type.

Example: Zetsu

Strategist: The battlefield is my Shogi board.

Extremely intelligent, can make effective strategies when given adequate intel. Good friends with the Reconnaissance battle type, and even better friends with Combat and Assault types. A unit that is greater than the sum of its individual parts can thank this genius.

Example: Shikamaru Nara

Medic: I need heals!

Versed in the ways of Medical Ninjutsu. Requires fine chakra control, excellent concentration, and vast knowledge of the human body. Must stay behind the front lines and not engage unless the situation necessitates it.

Example: Shizune

Balanced: Jack of all trades, master of none (usually).

Well rounded Shinobi. Diverse skillset means they fit into at least three of the other categories. Hard to pin them down when you have no clue what they'll pull from their toolbelt.

Example: Kakashi Hatake

*Sensor: You can run but you can't hide.

Special subset of Support. Can distinguish a persons location and strength based on their scent or chakra signature. Similar to the Support type, a sensor is not suited for the front lines. Their talents are best used to relay information during a fight, or in the art of tracking.

Example: Karin

*Assault: Strength in numbers takes on a whole new meaning.

With the force of a wrecking ball, they are the subset of the Combat Battle Type. Unique abilities and Jutsu make this Shinobi perfectly suited to battle several opponents at once. Is also usually skilled in one-on-one situations. Arguably the most dangerous designation.

Example: Naruto Uzumaki

*Combat Medic: I can break all of the rules!

A special subset of Medic Ninja who are not bound by the common practice of staying behind the front lines during a battle. This designation is usually only granted to those who master the 100 Healings Jutsu.

Example (only 2 are known): Tsunade Senju and Sakura Haruno (The latter hasn't quite mastered the technique yet).

* - Indicates a special subset of a main battle type. Fits under the blanket of another, but still has unique abilities that set it apart.


No Such Thing as a Free Lunch (Updated 3/17/2021)

Chapter 1 - 100% Written (5.2K words), 100% Edited (Favors Bind the Soul)

Chapter 2 - 100% Written (5.5K words), 100% Edited (The Fox and the Hawk) Release Date - Friday June 26th at 1-3PM EST

Chapter 3 - TBD Either complete or on hiatus

Consider No Such Thing as a Free Lunch a Two-Shot at the present moment. It's been an idea that has been in my head for a while now, but I won't seriously consider writing more until I'm farther into A Bet of a Lifetime. Unless there is some crazy demand for more chapters (which I doubt there will be). Think of it as a fun experiment for the time being. It's still very much in the planning stage.


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Tale of the Setting Sun by PK Samurai reviews
Naruto was born with hair as red as his mother's, but with a face and intellect that paralleled his father, the Fourth Hokage. Will the revolution he brings be the world's salvation or destruction?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 50 - Words: 203,851 - Reviews: 3868 - Favs: 11,788 - Follows: 12,705 - Updated: 4/2 - Published: 1/30/2013 - Naruto U.
Naruto – Sun and Moon by Salt the Conqueror reviews
After discovering the truth about his parents, Naruto decides to become Hokage and create a world where no one would ever need to suffer like him again. However, the Shinobi World was a grim place that harbored hatred, darkness, and corruption; Naruto would have to face them all on the path to achieve his goal. Obligatory AU.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 24 - Words: 190,985 - Reviews: 165 - Favs: 223 - Follows: 251 - Updated: 3/15 - Published: 8/19/2023 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Hinata H., Team Seven
I Promise by Yogami Asura reviews
Even the smallest promises can lead to the biggest changes. Perhaps he bit off more than he could chew? This was a risk he was willing to take.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 25 - Words: 166,421 - Reviews: 585 - Favs: 1,405 - Follows: 1,730 - Updated: 12/20/2024 - Published: 6/1/2020 - Naruto U.
Generation Lost by paty-san5 reviews
After 3 years training abroad, Naruto now has what it takes to face whatever destiny has in store for him. With Akatsuki and Kyuubi coming after him, and Sasuke becoming an active criminal, Naruto'll have to deal the dangerous lifestyle fit for a ninja. Can his maturity level cope with the stress, while he also tries to unravel the mysteries of the opposite sex?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 248,843 - Reviews: 311 - Favs: 781 - Follows: 940 - Updated: 4/14/2024 - Published: 5/25/2013 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Bringer of Death by npberryhill reviews
During Vegeta's last stand against Frieza, the Prince of Saiyans ascends, becoming the first Super Saiyan of his era. History has been re-written...but to what degree? Edited by Davidstarlingm (Co-author).
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 109 - Words: 1,053,666 - Reviews: 7784 - Favs: 2,299 - Follows: 2,082 - Updated: 11/30/2022 - Published: 5/29/2012 - Vegeta
The Uzumaki Tales: Return of the Whirlpool by jbriz reviews
What if Naruto met the Kyuubi during the Land of Waves? What if it was all a big misunderstanding? Watch as Naruto is able to tap into the power sealed inside of him on the day of his birth and the following events. Starts after the graduation. Better summary inside. Stronger Naruto (but realistic progression). NaruHina and others. Title becomes more apparent later in the story.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 95 - Words: 700,358 - Reviews: 3600 - Favs: 6,401 - Follows: 6,169 - Updated: 8/10/2020 - Published: 9/25/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
War of the Biju: Fourth Shinobi World War by Son Kenshin reviews
Madara has declared War on the nations of the World as Naruto becomes Hokage in the wake of Pain's invasion of Konoha. Naruto has to master the Kyubi to prepare to face him and Akatsuki, which includes his former friend Sasuke Uchiha. Naru/Hina
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 41 - Words: 376,784 - Reviews: 1085 - Favs: 2,577 - Follows: 2,174 - Updated: 3/13/2020 - Published: 10/3/2010 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Team 8 by S'TarKan reviews
What if Naruto had been selected for a different team? What if he'd had a different mentor? Who would guess the consequences would be so large?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 276,868 - Reviews: 16079 - Favs: 25,600 - Follows: 22,344 - Updated: 4/23/2015 - Published: 1/1/2006 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Dawn's Sage by Panory Bro reviews
The toads raise Naruto to replace Minato as their summoner. Trained as a sage, Naruto will strike out to find his fellow jinchuriki. Just not in the way you would expect.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 27 - Words: 176,148 - Reviews: 657 - Favs: 2,902 - Follows: 2,004 - Updated: 10/14/2014 - Published: 9/7/2013 - Naruto U., Akatsuki - Complete
Tale of the Kurai Kitsune by ShadowStar91 reviews
He passed on his first attempt, gained a team that cared, a sensei that taught them, and then almost lost it all. Now being placed on a team once more, how will Konoha's Dark Fox handle a stuck up prick and useless fangirl? Slight NaruOC NaruHina SasuSaku
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 222,560 - Reviews: 1706 - Favs: 3,847 - Follows: 3,714 - Updated: 4/13/2014 - Published: 6/23/2011 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H., Hinata H.
A ninja's life by paty-san5 reviews
Okay Naruto is twelve but he is more mature than the anime, though the story follows its normal path. Naruto will have to make friends and trust them if he wants to survive all the dangers and obstacles that wait for him if he wants to be the greatest Hok
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 33 - Words: 211,529 - Reviews: 451 - Favs: 888 - Follows: 678 - Updated: 3/25/2013 - Published: 4/6/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
New Life, Second Chances by Kiiam reviews
Naruto had died in the final battle against Madara. Fate had seen it fit to give him second chance to do things over. With memories of his past life, people will be surprised by what the new Naruto can do. NaruHina/Possible Harem.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 272,886 - Reviews: 3455 - Favs: 5,755 - Follows: 5,203 - Updated: 9/16/2012 - Published: 8/25/2010 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
A Growing Affection by Xavon Wrentaile reviews
After a misunderstanding reveals hidden emotions, Naruto and Hinata begin training together, getting to know each other. At the same time Sakura finds herself jealous. Takes place in a tangent after the Elemental Training Arc of the Shippuden timeline.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 170 - Words: 686,165 - Reviews: 3238 - Favs: 4,734 - Follows: 2,925 - Updated: 9/25/2011 - Published: 11/27/2007 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Illegitimate Love by Jetslinger reviews
One night of passion can lead to a lifetime of happiness. At least, that's how it is in movies. NarutoxTenten. M for sex and language.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 85,055 - Reviews: 1370 - Favs: 2,598 - Follows: 1,455 - Updated: 3/8/2009 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Naruto U., Tenten - Complete
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A Bet of a Lifetime reviews
A childish challenge between teacher and student triggers a chain of events whose outcomes ripple across the Ninja World. As the dominos fall, crashing on the shoulders of the Child of Prophecy, one question needs to be asked. Will he bear it all, or crumble under the weight of the world? Starts slow paced at training trip. Canon Divergence Fic/w Naruto Character Development.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 67 - Words: 532,231 - Reviews: 1969 - Favs: 3,576 - Follows: 4,071 - Updated: 3/22 - Published: 7/10/2017 - Naruto U.
No Such Thing as a Free Lunch reviews
Pride cometh before the fall. During the bell test, Sasuke and Naruto are unable to see eye to eye. Team 7 fails the bell test and are sent back to the academy for another year. The ramifications? Massive. Naruto-centric. Team 7 Friendship!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 11,252 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 104 - Follows: 152 - Updated: 6/26/2020 - Published: 5/5/2020 - Naruto U., Sasuke U., Sakura H.
Ramen-gate reviews
The clones have decided they have had enough. They are sick and tired of not being apart of the Naruto’s choices. Led by a usurper, they aim to take charge, and control Naruto’s most important decision hes had so far. One-Shot based off of my story ‘A Bet of a Lifetime.’
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,533 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 11 - Published: 7/24/2019 - Naruto U.