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Joined 02-13-14, id: 5524862, Profile Updated: 12-31-14
Author has written 8 stories for Divergent Trilogy.

Hello! I'm older (like, a mom) and I live in Las Vegas, Nevada. I've always loved reading, but writing is something new to me. All of you who follow and support me here are nothing short of amazing. I know I'm not the best out there, but with your constant support, you make me want to do this, to be better, and I'm using this platform to gain the practice and skills I need. So really, thank you.

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Something New by inopinion reviews
Breaking up is as quick as shattering glass. Getting back together is like gluing each piece in place with cut fingers. Four, Tris, angst.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 57 - Words: 304,125 - Reviews: 1073 - Favs: 219 - Follows: 305 - Updated: 6/13/2018 - Published: 11/9/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Zeke
Young Volcanoes by DivergentRebel13 reviews
Set one year after Tris' initiation into Dauntless. Tris is now helping Four train the initiates. Will things go as smoothly as her own initiation? Divergent AU *Possible Insurgent/Allegiant spoilers*
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 95,048 - Reviews: 652 - Favs: 1,237 - Follows: 796 - Updated: 11/3/2017 - Published: 10/31/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Selfless Choices by Cordys-Vision reviews
Abnegation contains my father…but abnegation also contains a fourteen year old blonde girl named Beatrice Prior who sparked a little light inside of me yesterday. I drag the knife along the inside of my palm and hold out my hand between the two bowls. Am I dauntless? Am I abnegation?
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 39 - Words: 163,882 - Reviews: 719 - Favs: 288 - Follows: 375 - Updated: 3/18/2016 - Published: 8/26/2014 - Complete
Sixteenth Summer by yabooklover reviews
***ON HIATUS*** Beatrice Prior is a stubborn girl, fresh out of school and living in a small, sleepy Southern town on her family's honeybee farm. It's her sixteenth summer, but she wants nothing more than an opportunity for change and escape. Her family has just employed a new worker to repair the house: Tobias Eaton from the big city. Will he offer her a chance to gain freedom?
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,880 - Reviews: 136 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 147 - Updated: 9/23/2015 - Published: 1/22/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias
Becoming Determinant - Tobias' Story by Windchimed reviews
For a long time, we kiss like that, and I forget that the others are there, forget that there's a war outside the train, forget that we no longer have a home or a position in an uncertain world... Tobias' perspective from before "Divergent" through my "Determinant" alternate 3rd book, with lots of original scenes.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 44 - Words: 144,213 - Reviews: 1165 - Favs: 507 - Follows: 426 - Updated: 8/30/2015 - Published: 9/8/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Peter, Al - Complete
Determinant: One choice will change everything by Windchimed reviews
"Even now, I feel the electrical pull that every touch creates with her. And I know it's unique to her, something I'll never feel with anyone else. I pull away, knowing if I stay any longer I'll never have the strength to do this." Full-length alternate 3rd book with a completely original plot and a very satisfying ending. Works instead of "Allegiant" or after it.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 50 - Words: 172,721 - Reviews: 2314 - Favs: 1,284 - Follows: 925 - Updated: 8/15/2015 - Published: 11/2/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Uriah - Complete
Waiting by Windchimed M-stories reviews
Inspired by Milner's "The First Time" story, this is a modern-day short story about Tris and Tobias meeting for the first time. M rated.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 13 - Words: 31,715 - Reviews: 424 - Favs: 318 - Follows: 217 - Updated: 7/21/2015 - Published: 4/20/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Zeke, Amar - Complete
Bitter Cold by mugglesarah reviews
Modern Day AU. Marcus Eaton is a powerful business tycoon with enough money to feed a small country and enough control to keep his son, Tobias, following in his footsteps. Tris is a girl living on the street who's unintentionally captured Tobias's attention. Will his sympathy outweigh his common sense when it comes to the girl on the street?
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 41 - Words: 144,763 - Reviews: 1400 - Favs: 594 - Follows: 719 - Updated: 7/14/2015 - Published: 9/11/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias
Prior Rings: A Determinant Story by Windchimed reviews
"So, are you nervous?" Zeke asks as he adjusts my bow tie just a touch. "No," I answer simply. And it's true. I have never been more certain of anything than I am about marrying Tris. This story is a sequel of sorts to my "Determinant" fic. It covers Tris & Tobias' year apart plus their reconciliation, engagement, wedding, kids & more. Give it a try! :-)
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 57 - Words: 166,177 - Reviews: 2023 - Favs: 452 - Follows: 348 - Updated: 6/2/2015 - Published: 8/24/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Uriah - Complete
Becoming Ten by PaigeLee1981 reviews
Four/Tris. Rated T/M for language and mild adult themes. Tris has faced her fears and stopped a war, but can she over come the ups and downs of Dauntless life? Six and Four will have to find a way to make it work together, if they are ever going to become Ten.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 34 - Words: 86,751 - Reviews: 317 - Favs: 375 - Follows: 357 - Updated: 9/21/2014 - Published: 4/27/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Christina, Uriah - Complete
Trunk of Secrets by Unfable reviews
This takes place during the time of 'Still' where Daryl and Beth are hiding out in the trunk of the car. Just my take on what could have happened in the hours they spent inside. Rated M for language and mentions of abuse. Smut in later chapters.
Walking Dead - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 17 - Words: 56,237 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 231 - Follows: 364 - Updated: 9/8/2014 - Published: 3/5/2014 - Beth G., Daryl D.
Resurrection: The End by Cordys-Vision reviews
THIS IS A SEQUEL TO RESURRECTION. I hate coming here. " I hate seeing him, but I know it's for the good of Tobias. It's for the good of everyone. Tris Prior was never supposed to be here in the first place. I am just ensuring that her presence doesn't ruin anything, that it doesn't ruin Tobias."
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 37 - Words: 110,401 - Reviews: 465 - Favs: 145 - Follows: 130 - Updated: 8/25/2014 - Published: 6/15/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Caleb P., Cara - Complete
Patterns & Fairytales by LolaBleu reviews
Every conversation they had about kids ended in his saying 'someday, maybe' and really meaning 'no', and her nodding in agreement in a vague sort of way. But Tobias didn't miss the times Tris looked at Zeke's daughter like she was trying to imagine her with deep blue eyes and dirty blonde hair when she thought no one was looking.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 43,103 - Reviews: 321 - Favs: 669 - Follows: 386 - Updated: 8/11/2014 - Published: 1/17/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Resurrection by Cordys-Vision reviews
Why does it have to be her? Because I am selfish. Because I want her here. Because she was the brave one. Because we need Four to be better than he is right now. There are so many reasons, but none of them would convince Cara. "Because she's divergent. And a Prior. Her blood goes back to the beginning. She can fix all this. It has to be her."
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 25 - Words: 64,666 - Reviews: 218 - Favs: 191 - Follows: 136 - Updated: 6/13/2014 - Published: 5/8/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, Cara - Complete
Three Parts Dead by LolaBleu reviews
He kisses my lips and then each of the four birds tattooed under my collarbone, lingering a little longer on the newest one; the one closest to my heart; the one that represents him. Post-Insurgent/Tris' fear of intimacy.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 22 - Words: 107,976 - Reviews: 704 - Favs: 1,465 - Follows: 933 - Updated: 5/3/2014 - Published: 11/12/2012 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Returning by LolaBleu reviews
Coming home to someone is many things. It is a choice, a promise, a declaration. It is a return, not as a person to a place, but as oneself to another. It is one individual saying to another: 'You are the one I choose'. *Allegiant alternate-ending*
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 21,294 - Reviews: 93 - Favs: 163 - Follows: 193 - Updated: 4/27/2014 - Published: 12/7/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias
Appetence by LolaBleu reviews
Blindly, he reaches out for her hand, willing her to come back. For just one more kiss, one more word, one more glance from those eyes were that were always so alive. He doesn't care if she doesn't remember him, he just needs one more second chance. *Allegiant alternative ending - Tris survives the death serum & being shot, but falls victim to the memory serum*
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 29,924 - Reviews: 172 - Favs: 193 - Follows: 275 - Updated: 4/27/2014 - Published: 10/28/2013 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias
You Again by fortresss reviews
Tris and Tobias never beame a couple. They never even became friends. This makes it pretty awkward when they have to start working together. First fanfic...ever.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 28 - Words: 30,804 - Reviews: 395 - Favs: 171 - Follows: 179 - Updated: 2/22/2014 - Published: 1/8/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Killing Four by wee kraken reviews
Four is dead. I've killed him. He was an ideal, a Dauntless prodigy that never really existed. INSURGENT FOUR POV - starting in Candor. Spoilers, obviously.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 31 - Words: 68,908 - Reviews: 689 - Favs: 492 - Follows: 407 - Updated: 10/3/2013 - Published: 5/15/2012 - Four/Tobias, Tris/Beatrice P.
Inked by wee kraken reviews
Four never thought he'd end up with a back that's more ink than skin. But Dauntless initiation changed his mind...and his body...forever.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,789 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 206 - Follows: 63 - Updated: 7/18/2012 - Published: 6/20/2012 - Four/Tobias, Tori - Complete
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Make It Rain reviews
"I know about you, about your Divergence. It's not safe for you anymore." Life is full of choices, and Beatrice Prior must decide what path she will take in a place where power, love, and betrayal come in equal measure, and who you trust can mean life or death. All characters belong to Veronica Roth. *Slow burn.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 37 - Words: 158,796 - Reviews: 778 - Favs: 261 - Follows: 192 - Updated: 2/5/2016 - Published: 10/2/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Love Wins reviews
A one-shot to celebrate marriage equality in all 50 states.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,882 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 19 - Published: 6/27/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias, George W., Amar - Complete
The First Time reviews
Meet-cute prompts. A bunch of one shots done for fun on the different ways Tris and Tobias could possibly meet in the modern day. To be updated in between stories.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,410 - Reviews: 215 - Favs: 185 - Follows: 195 - Updated: 5/7/2015 - Published: 4/7/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias
A Collection of Memories reviews
The sequel to Making a Memory. A complete story presented as a series of one shots that focuses on what happens after Tris and Tobias resume their normal lives and try to make a long distance relationship work.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 67,956 - Reviews: 296 - Favs: 162 - Follows: 102 - Updated: 4/1/2015 - Published: 2/11/2015 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Whatever It Takes reviews
"I make my cut, and hold my hand over the cold gray stones without hesitation. I may have an aptitude for two other factions, but I have to do whatever it takes to stay safe." Beatrice Prior chooses Abnegation, and learns her choice isn't what she thought it would be. All characters belong to Veronica Roth.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 86,210 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 221 - Follows: 141 - Updated: 1/10/2015 - Published: 11/5/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
Making A Memory reviews
"As I look from person to person, taking in small pieces of their happiness, a pair of deep blue eyes catches me off guard. As soon as I see them, they're gone, but the intensity I felt in those few seconds makes me curious." A modern day AU where Tris and Christina take a much needed vacation, meeting some new friends along the way. All characters belong to Veronica Roth.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 33,881 - Reviews: 155 - Favs: 224 - Follows: 139 - Updated: 10/4/2014 - Published: 9/8/2014 - Complete
Four and Six: A Choice reviews
A new program has been initiated to help those make their decisions before choosing day. Beatrice takes a chance on her partner in the program, and a bold move takes her further than she ever expected to go. All ideas and characters from Divergent belong to Veronica Roth!
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 22,875 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 207 - Follows: 119 - Updated: 8/27/2014 - Published: 8/5/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete
You Saved Me reviews
A little pre-Divergent/Divergent story. What if Beatrice and Tobias knew each other in Abnegation? What happens on Tobias' choosing day? Will he choose to stay with Beatrice or go out on his own? Mostly original content. Slightly ooc. All characters belong to Veronica Roth.
Divergent Trilogy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 37 - Words: 92,429 - Reviews: 528 - Favs: 552 - Follows: 425 - Updated: 6/2/2014 - Published: 3/14/2014 - Tris/Beatrice P., Four/Tobias - Complete