Author has written 15 stories for Rise of the Guardians, Wolf Children/おおかみこどもの雨と雪, X-Men: The Movie, Misc. Movies, Lion King, and Frozen.
The real Cheshire Cat
Is a Proud Member of Critics United!
I enjoy some Video games, writing, roleplaying and I really enjoy a good story.
I've been informed that I come off as strange, odd or just plain scary. That's not my intention. I'm actually a nice person. Just don't annoy me. You follow the rules and guidelines and there will no issues.
I don't waste my time with anything unless I think that it's necessary. So if I ever leave a review or a comment, count yourself lucky.
I tend to gravite towards the Darker themes, so I assure you that if you write a story that breaks any rules, I will probably find you. Also on I feel that I must add, that I'm picking up on some of my old favorites, so those fandoms in which you thought would be ignored are no longer going to be. (See list below, and more will be added randomly.)
Also, and recently, I've decided to get back into roleplaying agian. So as a result, I've finally opened up my forum, Ace Nine. You're welcome to check it out.
Now on to the hard core...
Reviews. When I tell you of a rule break/violation, or I give you a suggestion, I strongly recommend that you take it as constructive criticism. If you do, I will be more than happy to help you out. But if not, then you will only get back a cold reply. I will only be honest with you, with the intention of helping you. I may be harsh at times, but I still informed you to help.
Flames- I laugh at any attempt to flame me. You will not get the reaction that you want. All you will have is an embarrassing track record of whatever you used to flame me. I will make it public, and I will use it to show as an example of how not to review. Also I will announce to the world that you are a Flamer. So you are warned, don't even try to attack me. It will get you nowhere fast.
Crossover stories. Lately, I've been writing some crossovers. So I have chosen to accept to read certain stories. I won't read many of the crossovers. I think that it should flow with the canons if each story. For example, I have crossed Peter Pan with Rise of the Guardians using one of my Original Character Story. It went with the Pan story, as he was the Pixie King in a Human form. So when I read a crossover, I expect it to bring a fresh look to both stories. Each story has its own feel, like a musical note, so if you can't make your story sing I'm not going to finish it.
Script/chat stories. I will not read a script story. If you write this type of story (and like it,) then don't bother me. I personally think that it is lazy writing. If you are not interested in writing detail, then I'm not interested in reading it. Also it's against the rules. So please take the time to flesh out your story.
Songfics. Not allowed at all, unless it's a parody. You risk losing your story.
Real People- You absolutely can't use real people. This is EVERYONE living within the last eighty years. And I really recommend that you don't use anyone who died in the last eighty years either.
Question and Answer stories. You can have them, but only if you take the question by forum or via pm. If you were told that you are breaking a rule, and you continue to break the rules, then you risk losing it.
MA. When and if I find this kind of story or chapter, I will inform you one time that it's against the rules and what you can do to fix it. Fanfiction's rating system is very clear to what is M rated and MA rated. To clarify, MA is smut, lemons and any graphic sexual descriptions of anything between the neck and legs. So when you are told of the rule break, fix it, or you will meet my teeth as I will report your story (into oblivion) until you either change- or lose it.
Trolls and Flamers. Trolls are merely a footnote. I will ignore you. Flamers, I know or will know, who you are and may give you a single warning, if our paths cross. Then, if you want to consider taking me on, I will squash you like the bug you are.
Repeat Violators. I've left you a review, informing you of your story breaking a rule. So what if you change it or it was deleted. I don't care, you are still violating the rules. So I might give you a final warning to read the rules and guidelines, after that if you still persist in breaking the rules, I will report every single rule violating story. You have your warning.
Profiles. Please keep your profile simple. I believe that a profile must be about you, your stories or about whatever forum you are a part of. When I look at your profile, it's to find out about you. I'm tired of seeing stupid junk that you can easily share on facebook. I can assure you that if I do find it full of the same crap that I see on other sites, you can be sure that I won't be reading anything more. It won't matter if your stories are the Holy Grail of Fanfiction, your profile is full of crap, and I've lost my interest.
Like I mentioned at the top of my profile, I'm a member of CU.
Allow me to inform you of some things.
As much negativity that it thrown about at them, they are actually some cool people. They might be a little rough around the edges, but who's perfect. So before you get your panties in a bunch over a review left by them, please remember to take a step back and ask yourself, is this person trying to help me. I would strongly recommend that you pay a visit to the forum before you decide to throw more negativity and have a look around. Maybe school yourself.
I have to point this out. If you think that there is a story that you want for us to look at, that you believe to be breaking the rules, please remember to check to see if its a 2015 story. If it's not, then please do what is best-hit the report button. As a note- I'm only going to review a story that been updated/written from June 26th 2014 onward. Any story before that time, I won't review.
When any member of CU tells you that you that you are breaking a rule, please listen. We are trying to help you. Otherwise you will risk losing your story, and trust me when I say that. We stick to the rules like the picture you superglued to your wall. So the excuses like "everyone is doing it," "I've been doing it for so long-that it's okay," and "If you got a problem with it, then why'd you even read it," aren't going to fly. Your luck has run out and it's time to learn and change, or face the music.
Also playing the pity card, will just tick me off. Trying to incite your readers into a frenzy will also get you nowhere. You try it, and I will guarantee you that you will lose. This isn't a threat or a joke. You don't read the rules and guidelines, and you decide to listen to the masses telling you to ignore the warning reviews, your story will continue to be reported and sooner or later the Administration will remove the story. So any and all excuses are a waste of time, and trust me, I don't think that you want to waste your time whining.
I think that I'm going to stress on this. If you get a review from a Member of Critics United, it will always be signed as such, and you will be able to check out the profile of the member. So if you can't click on the name to see the profile, then I can bet you a thousand dollars that whomever it is, isn't with CU (and I would win the money every time.) If you want to know who is a Critics United member then check here.
I've noticed a very big issue for me. I try to be courteous and I check the reviews in case another member of a critique group (or a member of CU) has already posted. So for another group to step in and "claim" something that they have not found first, I consider offensive. That's like slapping a random person. So to the people who have done it, you've lost any respect that I had for you. Consider yourself warned.
I frequently hang out in the following fandoms;
Movies- Rise of the Guardians, How to Train your Dragon, X-Men, Wolf Children, Alice in Wonderland, Frozen, Planet of the Apes, Into the Storm
TV Shows- Attack on Titan, Hellsing, InuYasha, Black Butler, Once Upon a Time, Archer, Ben 10 universe, Tenchi Universe
Games- Pokemon, Final Fantasy 7 through 10, Bravely Default
Books- Warriors, Ender's Games series, Lord Of The Rings, Narnia, Terry Brooks, Sleepy Hollow, Robin Hood, World War Z, Watership Down,
Various- Peter Pan, Guardians of Childhood, Resident Evil, Batman
Crossovers- Peter Pan and RoTG,
I will also randomly visit a fandom, so I hope that you are following the established rules.
I've opened up my forum to the public. So any hardcore role players are welcomed.
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