Author has written 3 stories for Suikoden, and Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney.
Misty night unending
Shadows fade at dawn's advent
Pretense stripped away
The name is Elly. I'm just your average reader and reviewer. And occasional writer.
You are welcome to disagree with my opinions on your stories; furthermore, you are under no obligation to even take my advice (believe it or not, we reviewers aren't always right!). However, if you are seeking to improve, you won't do so by shutting out every word that isn't glowing praise.
Just a thought. :)