ALP113
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Joined 05-30-14, id: 5766003, Profile Updated: 06-23-16
Author has written 7 stories for Naruto, Dragon Ball Z, Star Wars, and One Piece.

I suppose I should start with introductions.

Hello. ALP113 speaking.

I'm here because I love media. I love reading, I love writing, I love movies, I love anime...

But more importantly, I love a good story.

Anyone can tell a good story and I believe that everyone is entitled to tell one.

I look forward to reading some smashing good works.

Favorite Color: Purple

Favorite Sport: Soccer

Favorite Book: Empire of the Sun

Favorite Band: Nightwish

Favorite Song: Depends on the time of day... lol

Favorite Actor: Gary Oldman

Favorite Actress: Meryl Streep

Favorite Movie(s):

Star Wars

Jurassic Park

Lord of the Rings

Favorite Anime:

Cowboy Bebop

The Devil's a Part-Timer

One Punch Man!

Servant X Service

Carried by the Wind

Waiting in the Summer

Baccano!

Cat Planet Cuties

Sekirei

Golden Boy

Dragonball Z

Hyakko

Favorite Show(s):

Game of Thrones

Sherlock

Midsummer Murders

Futurama

Favorite Action Movie: Ghost in the Shell (1995)

Favorite Romantic Comedy: When Harry Met Sally (1989)

Favorite Anime Movie: Laputa: Castle in the Sky

Favorite Movie Hero: Jason Bourne

Favorite Movie Villain: Darth Vader

Favorite Comic Book Hero: Batman

Favorite Comic Book Villain(s): Joker & Doomsday

Favorite Anime Character(s): Spike (Cowboy Bebop), Saitama (One Punch Man) & Revy (Black Lagoon)

Favorite Anime Villain(s): Sara (Samurai Champloo), Luo Lang (Sword of the Stranger) and Cell (Dragonball Z)

Favorite Anime Couple(s): Isaac and Miria (Baccano), Mao and Emilia (The Devil's a Part-Timer) & Gohan and Videl (Dragonball Z)

Favorite Anime Supporting Character(s): Claire Stanfield (Baccano!), Ladd Russo (Baccano!), Shizuo Heiwajima (Durarara) & Urd (Ah My Goddess)

Hottest Anime Guy(s): Haruka (Free! Iwatobi Swim Club), Luck Gandor (Baccano!), Firo Prochainezo (Baccano!), Hei (Darker Than Black) & Edward Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist)

Hottest Anime Girl(s): Saeko Busujima (Highschool of the Dead), Tsukiume (Sekirei), Lucy Heartfilia (Fairy Tale), Nico Robin (One Piece) & Samui (Naruto)

Least Favorite Anime Character(s): Madara Uchiha (Naruto), Nina Einstein (Code Geass), Itagaki (Hajime no Ippo), Sasuke Uchiha (Naruto), Black Beard (One Piece), Akainu (One Piece), Suzaku Kururugi (Code Geass), Shou Tucker (Fullmetal Alchemist) & Kenny Akcerman (Attack on Titan)

Anime Couples I like to read about (or write in the future):

Gohan X Videl

Gohan X Videl X Erasa

Gohan X Videl X Erasa X Zangya

Naruto X (Insert girl(s) names here)

Natsu X (Insert girl(s) names here)

DRAGONBALL Z - LEGACIES:

I'm really hoping that this fic will take off, since it's my number one fan project at the moment. Right now, I'm having a couple of commissions done by AlphaDelta1001, and he's already come up with an awesome cover picture for my story. It looks fantastic. It's inspired from the original Z-fighter group shot, only it's tweaked to suit the new Z-fighter team that I will be having for my story.

If anyone wants to see the full image of my story's cover, follow this link:

Dragonball Z: Legacies Cover Page - AlphaDelta1001 - deviantart

[Competition] Dragonball Z: Legacies Cover (NEW) - AlphaDelta1001 - deviantart

He's also come up with a comic page for me involving a scene I hope will later be in the story. Here you can see all of the girls that will be in Gohan's Harem:

Morning Surprises - AlphaDelta1001 - deviantart

Let me know what you think. :)

Adult-Fanfiction.org

Due to a number of complaints I've been forced to transfer the full copy of some of my stories to another profile. Due to the fact that this website lacks a sufficient MA rating, a lot of readers feel that my stories are too hot for their tastes. And I can understand that since this is a website used by 13 year olds as well as adults. So I'm providing links for my one-shots and other adult related material to my off-site account.

I apologize to any fans of my work for the inconvenience.

(Gohan X Zangya) - COMPLETE - Long Night (Good Copy) - Archiveofourown

Additional Facts:

I enjoy reading good stories; no bashing of characters or anything. I especially like stories that do the characters and the story justice. I also don't mind crossovers and harem stories.

Helpful information:

I've also found some very good informative texts. I'd like to share it not only in a hopes of improving my writing, but to help give other people ideas as well so that they can improve too. I'd like to use the information below as a guideline and the advice in it to aid me in my development.

I got this one from a good site in regards to performance reviews:

What makes Constructive Reviewing

We've listed three of the most important parts to constructive reviewing that are useful to apply to your reviewing:

Step 1 - Say why you think something may work or need development and give examples.

One of the most important part of constructive reviewing is to say why something works or why something may need development in a fellow writer’s story and to give examples. This helps the writer and yourself develop writing.

Imagine the following statement applied to your writing of a fantasy story as an example:

'Your story particularly the action scenes didn’t work for me.’

You probably wouldn’t be impressed by this review comment. This is because the information does not give any helpful opinion on why the reviewer considers action scenes do not work, and does not give examples to help the writer develop their action scenes. Compare this with the following:

‘Your Action Scenes: I thought your action scenes could be improved for the following reasons, when your character sees the creatures, keep the sentences shorter to increase the pace. It’s an exciting, dramatic action scene. How fearful is your character? Perhaps extend the scene a little to increase the drama. For example, he could nearly fall to his death, losing his grasp of the tree and catching hold again just in time. If he is doing this mission despite his deep underlying fears (perhaps of heights) again he will be a more sympathetic character. Concentrate on your main character as much as you do on the creature characters.’

This example, because it says why the reviewer believes the action scenes could be improved, and gives examples, may be of real value to helping the writer develop their writing. Particularly if other reviews make similar points. The above reviewer also makes observations which they can apply to develop their own writing.

Summary:
It is useful to say why you think something may work or need development, and give examples to help develop the writing of another writer and your own writing.

Step 2 - Keep it Positive – Review as you would have yourself Reviewed

It is good practice not to use words or phrases that are too negative or may be taken too personally in reviews.

If words or phrases are used which are too harsh or emotive sounding, then a writer may inevitably view the review as being destructive instead of constructive.

Example: imagine any of the following phrases applied to your own work - “boring, dull, pathetic.” This would immediately set most writers on edge, particularly if not qualified with any reasons why, and probably any other constructive comments that the reviewer may give will be wasted through the ‘red mist’ which the writer sees this phrasing.

It is useful to bear in mind that the vast majority of writers learn and improve on the site through constructive feedback, and are higher rated as a result, so avoid dispiriting reviews which will have the opposite effect.

Constructive and honest criticism to help writers develop is most firmly welcome on YouWriteOn, and do not be afraid of voicing your opinion. For example, if you consider a story really needs work. Anodyne reviews which say nothing, contribute nothing to developing anyone’s writing, whereas forthright and constructive reviews e.g. ones which give a constructive example or two as to why a character, story, etc, may not work, or how they may possibly be improved, can be very beneficial. YouWriteOn's literary professionals, who include published novelists, comment that novels which are 80% there will not make it these days, so honest critical feedback to help writers make the next step is firmly welcome.

Summary: Avoid negative, anodyne, or dispiriting reviewing. Make constructive criticism.

Hopefully the above mentioned info helps. To be continued. :)

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Better Left Unsaid by Kenchi618 reviews
Mizuki never got to shoot his mouth off at Naruto the night he took the Scroll of Seals. Other than skipping a half-manic monologue from him what exactly did this change for everyone's favorite blonde ninja? Who knows? Rated M for language/later events.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 78 - Words: 1,011,175 - Reviews: 9459 - Favs: 13,457 - Follows: 12,707 - Updated: 4/2 - Published: 12/14/2010 - [Naruto U., Ino Y.] Team Ten
Shinobi of the High Seas by Kenchi618 reviews
Naruto's age has passed him by as his time is over. Now he attempts to seek out a place for himself in the new world, and it's bigger than he ever figured it to be! Will be epic in length, NaruHarem
Crossover - Naruto & One Piece - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 53 - Words: 588,009 - Reviews: 9249 - Favs: 10,711 - Follows: 9,569 - Updated: 11/26/2018 - Published: 9/10/2010 - Naruto U.
DBZ Xtreme Beach Battle by Ultimate Lucy Fan reviews
Update 6/22: Sometimes it's a good thing to not pay attention. While Gohan lays out his plans for the night ahead for Videl, the girl can't help staring at the show going on behind him. Erasa is a lot of things, cute, ditsy, and certainly oblivious to anything to do with her figure. A strange wind tugging at her gym shirt, will Videl be able to concentrate on Gohan or Erasa?
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 26 - Words: 193,360 - Reviews: 280 - Favs: 496 - Follows: 430 - Updated: 6/22/2018 - Published: 1/2/2015 - [Gohan, Erasa, Videl] Bulma
Drifting by AlphaDelta1001 reviews
Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next. NarutoHarem
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 52 - Words: 1,101,134 - Reviews: 6293 - Favs: 9,075 - Follows: 8,142 - Updated: 2/16/2018 - Published: 12/25/2012 - Naruto U.
An Unusual Request by lancecomwar reviews
Videl has an unusual request for her boyfriend, one all too pleasurable...
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,229 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 204 - Follows: 64 - Published: 5/26/2014 - [Gohan, Videl, Erasa] - Complete
The Sealed Kunai by Kenchi618 reviews
What if something made Naruto the dead-last that everyone sees him as? What if he really wasn't as weak as he seemed? The true Naruto, unleashed upon the shinobi world! AU Story starts at Invasion of Konoha arc and continues onwards.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 69 - Words: 670,128 - Reviews: 11215 - Favs: 14,924 - Follows: 10,016 - Updated: 8/20/2013 - Published: 6/14/2010 - Naruto U. - Complete
Experimentation of a Special Kind by Lets Random reviews
Videl and Erasa experiment at a party... Lemon. VidelxErasa with a spritz of Gohan. One-shot.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,171 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 19 - Published: 3/10/2012 - Videl, Erasa - Complete
Blindsight by Methinks reviews
When Tsunade had asked him what he was going to do on his vacation he'd just smiled. But of all the things he might have said, caring for a crippled redhead sure as hell wasn't one of them. Isn't it funny the way life works out sometimes? Naruto/Tayuya
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 46,541 - Reviews: 358 - Favs: 817 - Follows: 825 - Updated: 4/2/2010 - Published: 10/9/2009 - Naruto U., Tayuya
How Many by EroSlackerMicha reviews
How Many times can a heart be torn aside before real love is found. this is a one shot where Naruto has ups and downs and finds love and acceptance. Lemon inside don't read if you're not old enough Naruto/Temari
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,334 - Reviews: 180 - Favs: 1,191 - Follows: 389 - Published: 5/28/2009 - Naruto U., Temari - Complete
A Welcomed Change by thatreevesgirl reviews
Anko assumed she was certifiably insane for even considering Naruto, but now she is finding out how sane the idea of being with him actually is. NaruAnko lemon
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,184 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 786 - Follows: 259 - Published: 9/14/2008 - Naruto U., Anko M. - Complete
Joy by demonicnargles reviews
She had never been so happy, as she had been these past few weeks, even though she was still relearning to walk. A fluffy NaruTayu as he helps her walk again. One-shot. M for language.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,506 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 350 - Follows: 83 - Published: 8/21/2008 - Naruto U., Tayuya - Complete
We all want Ice Cream by havelocke reviews
It’s a hot day at Devil May Cry. [lady x dante] post DMC3.
Devil May Cry - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,412 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/4/2007 - Complete
Seduce My Wife! by Narf-for-the-Garthoc reviews
I think the title speaks for itself, don't you? NaruSaku, SasuSaku
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34,830 - Reviews: 308 - Favs: 1,428 - Follows: 262 - Published: 12/24/2006 - Naruto U., Sakura H. - Complete
The Clothes Off Your Back by FateChica reviews
Poor Gohan runs out of regular school clothes and has to go to school in clothes that make him look hot! The Horror! Anyway, can Gohan survive with the entire female student body chasing after him and his clothes while waiting for Chi-Chi to do his laun
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 17,989 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 402 - Follows: 136 - Published: 8/21/2003 - Gohan, Videl
Lightning Passion by DarkHeart81 reviews
Gohan's start at Orange Star High changes his life, and the life if Videl, in a way neither could have forseen until it has already happened.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,045 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 16 - Published: 3/8/2003 - Gohan, Videl
Hybrid Theory EP - Forgotten by The Sh33p reviews
Five months after the events of the Cell Games, three months after the events of Gyoosan Budoukai, a revolt in Hell leads Son Gohan into one busy day he`ll never forget... Continuation from Hybrid Theory. AU, mild violence and cussing.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,368 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 4 - Published: 3/15/2002 - Gohan, Raditz
Hybrid Theory by The Sh33p reviews
A tournament in the aftermath of the Cell Games turns into a fight for survival... Moderate AU, songfic. R for cursing and violence.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,901 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 10 - Published: 2/25/2002 - Gohan - Complete
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Dragonball Z: Legacies reviews
Following that fateful day at the Cell Games, Gohan quickly realizes that the role of earth's protector is filled with many great trials and tribulations. Encountering new enemies and friends along the way, the young half-Saiyan comes to learn that being a hero can be tough, but at the same time... it can be a lot of fun. AU. Gohan/Videl or Gohan/Harem.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 42 - Words: 871,485 - Reviews: 1245 - Favs: 1,674 - Follows: 1,362 - Updated: 9/29/2016 - Published: 8/17/2014 - Gohan - Complete
A Saiyan Odyssey reviews
During Gohan's final battle with the android Cell, the young Saiyan is unexpectedly torn from his world and thrust head first into a new one. Here, in a world of vast oceans and new dangers, the young hero will undertake his next great adventure. Gohan/Harem
Crossover - Dragon Ball Z & One Piece - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 94,370 - Reviews: 203 - Favs: 486 - Follows: 464 - Updated: 7/7/2016 - Published: 5/3/2016 - Gohan
Star Wars: Return of the Jedi Redux reviews
The story of Return of the Jedi, written how it should have been. As the Empire continues construction of their second Death Star, Luke and his friends mount a daring mission to rescue Han from the clutches of the vile gangster Jabba the Hutt. Unbeknownst to them, Lord Vader has dispatched an agent to hunt them down. AU
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,656 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Published: 4/22/2016 - Luke S.
Naruto: The Part-Timer reviews
There is only one thing Naruto dreams of becoming; something he believes will earn him the respect a person of his social standing deserves and something he is willing to give his all to achieve. Employee of the Month! You know... the little things in life. But when you're working for Ichiraku's Ramen in a shinobi world, the universe tends to throw in all sorts of complications.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 67,432 - Reviews: 242 - Favs: 1,147 - Follows: 1,241 - Updated: 1/26/2016 - Published: 5/31/2014 - Naruto U., Samui, Amaru, Ryūzetsu
The Beach reviews
Gohan and his friends go to the beach for their mid-term break, exhausted from all their work and studies. Unbeknownst to the demi-Saiyan, the girls have some special plans in store for him. Gohan/Harem. WARNING: Lemons
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25,843 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 151 - Follows: 136 - Updated: 1/1/2016 - Published: 12/31/2015 - [Gohan, Videl, Zangya, Erasa]
Dragonball Z: Resurgence reviews
A Dragonball Z: Legacies spin-off. A lead-up to the Saiyan Invasion Arc, this story follows the tale of Sandra and Maya growing up, as they make their way across the cosmos, fighting to survive against the worst the universe has to throw at them.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,003 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 12/1/2015 - Published: 3/11/2015 - [Gohan, OC, Videl, Zangya]
Long Night reviews
Waking up one morning, Zangya finds she cannot stop thinking about Gohan. Wanting to clear her head, she decides to go out for some fresh air, but as the day rolls on, she finds it becoming harder and harder to resist the feelings welling up inside of her, especially when the demi-Saiyan gets himself involved. Why does he have to be so stubborn? WARNING: Lemon. GohanXZangya
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,611 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 132 - Follows: 54 - Published: 9/15/2014 - [Gohan, Zangya] - Complete