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Joined 09-01-14, id: 6066045, Profile Updated: 10-26-15
Author has written 3 stories for Avatar: Last Airbender, and Legend of Korra.

Hi guys I'm Gale, and I write stuff here. Well DUH!!!! Anyway I'm going to be trying to get some fan fics up soon for you to enjoy.

About me:

I'm 18 I do Computer Science at uni I enjoy writing, and coding. My favorite number is 12 My favorite color is orange, or blue.

CURRENT PROJECTS

A Trail of Fire-- In progress //Hiatus// Bedtime stories-- In progress We Will Be Together, For All Of Your Lifetimes-- Hiatus, pending discontinuation and eventual removal

A Word On Character Development.

A lot of fics contain OCs, as part of the variation of canon. Original Characters are the sole creation of the author, and as such, do not benefit from the pre knowledge readers may have about canon characters. This is why developing the character is essential, so that the reader can understand the character.

The first step in developing the character is to first plan the story. Map the plot, and mark where the character will fit in, and what actions they take. Once you have done this, map out your characters, and the relationship they have with the character. Make sure to include any changes that occur during the story.

Next you just need to write a short summary on the characters personality. What are they like?

The next step is to come up with justifications for these relationships as they are at the start. Why does so-and-so hate the character? What did the character do? Develop further. Does the character feel guilty about it? Did they have a crush on another character? The point is to build up a past for the character. Also try to justify the changes in relationships.

Characters are defined by three things:

  1. Personality
  2. Relationships with other characters
  3. Past events (childhood trauma, how they were brought up etc.)

If you can easily talk about each of these three things in reference to the character, than you have a well-developed character. Now you just need to explain it to the readers. Be warned however, for any one of these can affect the other two. (A past event may affect a relationship with a character and affect the personality)

Development techniques.

In writing, there are three commonly used techniques to develop characters.

  1. Flashbacks (not subtle, but good for showing past events or justify a relationship with another character)
  2. Dialogue (and thoughts) (also not that subtle, but can help portray or explain a relationship, define personality, and is often needed to advance the plot)
  3. Actions (subtle, used to define personality in terms of what they think is important, whether they carry grudges etc. often needed to advance the plot.)

Flashbacks can be quite crude, but they are the best way to explain to the reader about the past of the character and how it affects them. Dialogue can be tedious, but is often a subtle (or not) portrayal of relationships. Actions are very subtle, and speak more about the personality than anything else.

An example of the use of flashbacks can be found in Avatar: The Last Airbender. In Book two, flashbacks are used to portray Zuko's relationship with his mother, her disappearance, and his burning and banishment. This was particularly well done, as it raised sympathy for Zuko, portrayed him as the victim, and ultimately meant that most people felt bad for him when he betrayed Aang under Ba Sing Se. It also developed Ozai as a completely ruthless monster of a dictator, raising the viewer's dislike of him.

I do not have any specific example for the other two.

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A Fortune Cookie for You by Darkhymns reviews
"In bed" jokes are the lowest form of comedy. So, of course, Sans and Toriel love them.
Undertale - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,114 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 70 - Follows: 22 - Published: 3/16/2016 - [Sans, Toriel] Papyrus, Undyne - Complete
LOAD STATE THREE by Ysavvryl reviews
never end never end never end will you kill out of frustration never end never end never end never end i just don't want you to leave me alone okay never end never end never end never end cry cry cry die die die never end never end never end never end that's a wonderful idea never end never end never end never end a fractured story from fractured minds never end never end never end
Undertale - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 22 - Words: 116,204 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 45 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 3/5/2016 - Published: 12/21/2015 - Frisk, Chara, Flowey - Complete
Tourmaline by Phantomrose96 reviews
A fight with the Crystal Gems has left Peridot cracked within an inch of her life. Trapped on Earth, with no one and no way to get home, Peridot's all but given up hope. But she doesn't know the lengths Steven is willing to go to in order to keep her alive.
Steven Universe - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 24 - Words: 85,818 - Reviews: 634 - Favs: 1,020 - Follows: 636 - Updated: 8/26/2015 - Published: 7/5/2015 - Complete
Burning Spirit by faithy waithy reviews
Complete! Sequel to Burning Flame: Amber continues to travel with the avatar and her family helping Aang seek an earth bending teacher, while at the same time she discovers why she was given these strange unnatural abilities. Follow her as she learns things about her past and discovers more about herself. Follows tv series. Sister Fic. OCXOC. Read/ Review! All three books complete!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Adventure - Chapters: 21 - Words: 174,505 - Reviews: 116 - Favs: 163 - Follows: 93 - Updated: 8/22/2015 - Published: 6/14/2013 - OC - Complete
The Deepest Shade of Blue by Predominantly Normal reviews
[MISSING: Young boy, 4'3", Brown Hair, Starry-Eyed.] Rescuing Steven after he went missing was Pearl's main target. Falling in love with a former enemy along the way was just the unavoidable collateral damage. MULTICHAP/PEARLAPIS/AU (COMPLETE)
Steven Universe - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,096 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 133 - Follows: 87 - Updated: 5/24/2015 - Published: 4/17/2015 - [Pearl, Lapis Lazuli] Steven U. - Complete
Finding a Way by carolnegate reviews
After Steven's first fusion lesson, the other three Crystal Gems had a heated conversation. As it turned out, fusing with Steven wasn't going to be as easy as they'd originally thought. Dialogue-heavy.
Steven Universe - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,971 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 141 - Follows: 38 - Published: 5/20/2015 - Garnet, Amethyst, Pearl - Complete
Burning Flame by faithy waithy reviews
Revised! Kaya grew up in the south pole with no memory of her past. When Zuko comes to capture the avatar flashes of the past come to her. Kaya soon discovers she's not just any ordinary girl, and that there are many things to learn about herself. Join her on her quest to discover who she is. Follows the tv series. Read and Review. (Sister fic). All three books finished.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 184,554 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 277 - Follows: 168 - Updated: 4/29/2015 - Published: 7/16/2012 - OC - Complete
Guilty Pleasures by Nefer Lio reviews
Korra and Asami have some fun late at night and - of course - get busted.
Legend of Korra - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,512 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 11/11/2014 - Published: 10/13/2014 - Korra, Mako, Asami S. - Complete
Emotional Aftermath by Lady.Sage08 reviews
**This fanfic contains original characters** Katalina, a Fire Nation girl who's always been against the war, found herself living in Ba Sing Se after arriving with the Colonials. Now the war is over, though, yet she quickly finds herself thrown into another war against her own emotions once she reunites with Zuko after three long years. - Cover Image by Ninjatic on deviantArt
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 38 - Words: 45,977 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 10/3/2014 - Published: 8/27/2014 - Zuko, Iroh, Jet, Mai - Complete
Burning Hope by faithy waithy reviews
COMPLETE! This is the last book in my three part sister fic series. I strongly recommend reading "Burning Flame" and "Burning Spirit" first. Join Amber as she continues to fight for her life, her family, and the world she loves. Will she escape the spirit world? Will she stop her father? Will she ever be free? We can only hope. Read/Review. Cannon pairings. OCxOC.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 25 - Words: 255,285 - Reviews: 185 - Favs: 146 - Follows: 80 - Updated: 8/29/2014 - Published: 1/7/2014 - OC - Complete
Of Robots and Women by TheTiller reviews
When Chell discovers that she is the last human on Earth, she goes back to the only one she can talk to. ChellDOS.
Portal - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 51,278 - Reviews: 388 - Favs: 1,074 - Follows: 630 - Updated: 7/16/2014 - Published: 1/10/2013 - Chell, GLaDOS - Complete
On a Cross and Arrow by Terrichance reviews
Twilight and her friends are transported during a botched spell, across dimensions to... Ponyville, Equestria? But not the same one. In a library across town, six stallions join their forces as they try uncover the appearance of their filly look-alikes!
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 86,836 - Reviews: 645 - Favs: 1,283 - Follows: 588 - Updated: 9/11/2011 - Published: 7/23/2011 - Complete
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Bedtime Stories reviews
An old grampa tells his dear grandson stories before bed. Little did the grandson know how relevant they would be to him! Will add more, read and review to see this continue.
Legend of Korra - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,724 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/26/2014 - Published: 10/6/2014
We Will Be Together, For All Of Your Lifetimes
Avatar Wan has died, and like the cycle of the seasons, the Avatar has been reborn anew. Can he restore balance to a world that has changed so much? How will he learn how to become an Avatar? Will anyone believe him? Read on to find out. R/R
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 449 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/14/2014
A Trail of Fire reviews
Four young adults wander the land in the wake of Sozin's comet... One has a secret even he doesn't know, two are in love and the third just wants to find his friend. Please read and review! Note: This is set one hundred years before Aang turned up again, when Sozin's comet showed up the first time. ON HIATUS!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,191 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/12/2014 - Published: 9/25/2014 - OC, Kuzon, Bumi
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