OBITUARY FOR THE LATE MR. COMMON SENSE:

Today we mourn the passing of a beloved old friend, Common Sense, who has been with us for many years. No one knows for sure how old he was since his birth records were long ago lost in bureaucratic red tape.

He will be remembered for having cultivated such valuable lessons as: knowing when to come in out of the rain, why the early bird gets the worm, life isn't always fair, and maybe it was my fault.

Common Sense lived by simple, sound financial policies (don't spend more than you can earn) and reliable strategies (adults, not children, are in charge). His health began to deteriorate rapidly when well-intentioned but overbearing regulations were set in place. Reports of a 6-year-old boy charged with sexual harassment for kissing a classmate, teens suspended from school for using mouthwash after lunch, and a teacher fired for reprimanding an unruly student only worsened his condition.

Common Sense lost ground when parents attacked teachers for doing the job that they themselves had failed to do in disciplining their unruly children. It declined even further when schools were required to get parental consent to administer Calpol, sun lotion, or a band-aid to a student, but could not inform parents when a student became pregnant and wanted to have an abortion.

Common Sense lost the will to live as the Ten Commandments became contraband, churches became businesses, and criminals received better treatment than their victims.

Common Sense took a beating when you couldn't defend yourself from a burglar in your own home and the burglar could sue you for assault.

Common Sense finally gave up the will to live after a woman failed to realize that a steaming cup of coffee was hot. She spilled a little in her lap and was promptly awarded a huge settlement.

Common Sense was preceded in death by his parents Truth and Trust, his wife Discretion, his daughter Responsibility, and his son Reason.

He is survived by his 3 stepbrothers I Know My Rights, Someone Else Is To Blame, and I'm A Victim. Not many attended his funeral because so few realized he was gone. If you still remember him, pass this on. If not, join the majority and do nothing.

Challenges

Naruto of the four Dojutsu

Note: this challenge was inspired by

dracohalo117's

first version of the story Naruto of the four Dojutsu and was given permission to use it as the starting material to this challenge.

Naruto during the battle at the bridge in Wave unlocks the 4 greatest Dojutsu in the world and their secondary forms plus their hidden one if they have it without their harsh downsides something thought impossible. How would the rest of team 7 and the world react?

The rules are the following:

No yaoi

No Genderbending people who could be Naruto's grandparents (age 50) [ exception of bijuus 0-9, Juubi{aka The Shinju} Zetsu{black and white plant thing} and Kaguya]

No Sakura/Naruto pairing

No instant God mode Naruto (example Naruto defeating SWW4 Madura in the 1st chapter by blinking)

This needs to be the beginning of your story as the prologue and to describe the four Dojutsu. It is also partially exscripted from dracohalo117' story.

There are four great dojutsu's…the Sharingan, the Byakugan, the Rinnegan, and the Seishougan. There are several other dojutsu's that are random offshoots of the originals. But none of them can truly compare to the original four. For each of the original four have a second stage, the second stage being the double edged sword. The four great dojutsu's however powerful, are also incapable of blending. No two dojutsu's can create a more powerful hybrid. For when a dojutsu activates, it becomes a permanent part of them, and will be passed onto their offspring. The other dojutsu will remain in the genetic code. But if you activate one dojutsu, you cannot activate the others, even if they are in your genetic code. Each dojutsu has a strength and power that rivals the others.

The Sharingan, dojutsu of the Uchiha clan, capable of copying any Nin- Gen- or Tai-jutsu, predicting movements before they happen, being able to hypnotize ones opponent through mere eye contact, a limited ability to see various chakra types through colors. But its greatest strength lies in its second stage where it gains its four Hijutsu. The Mangekyou Sharingan eye, the epitome of the Sharingan's cycle, capable of using the black flames of Amaterasu, the eternal illusion Tsukuyomi, the Unstoppable warrior Susanoo, and the raging vortex Kamui. But to gain the Mangekyou Sharingan, you must kill the one that means the most to you, whether it is your friend, sibling parent…or lover. But when you gain the Mangekyou, its power will not last forever. Gaining the Mangekyou causes the user to slowly go blind; using the Mangekyou even once will accelerate the process. The only one to ever find a way around this, was Madara Uchiha. So desperate to keep the power of his almighty eyes…he murdered his younger brother and placed his brother's eyes in his own. His power remained, but he never went blind again, becoming the first Uchiha immortal.

The Byakugan, dojutsu of the Hyuuga clan, capable of seeing chakra in all of its forms at a much higher level than the Sharingan, seeing things at a telescopic vision, seeing through solid objects, and seeing around oneself at a "near" full 360 degrees. Like the Sharingan, the Byakugan's greatest strength lies in its second stage. The Reikon Byakugan, the epitome of the Byakugan's cycle, capable of using the heavenly Archangel, the punishing Penance, and the Hellish Wrath. But to obtain the Reikon Byakugan, you must watch as the one closest to you dies, no matter whom it is, you must watch as the life leaves their eyes forever. Controlling the Reikon Byakugan is a difficult endeavor. Your personality becomes split into four, the original personality, the heavenly personality, the punishing personality, and the hellish personality. Allowing any of them to gain control outside of ones consent, would force the original personality to forever wander purgatory. But using the eye slowly causes the four personalities to become one, but becoming one causes the personalities to die, and never be allowed to be reincarnated. The only way to avoid this is to defeat all three of the new personalities in ones own mind. Only one has ever achieved this, her name was lost to history. But she did not want the Hyuuga clan to ever control this power. She made sure that all future generations of Hyuuga were cold and detached to prevent them from ever being close to anyone.

Their is a secret evolutionary form of the Byakugan known as the Tenseigan. The Tenseigan is a fusion of hundreds of Byakugans and the body kekkei genkei of the Kaguya clan known as the Shinotsumyaku the ability to manipulate the bone structure of the body to create weapons or armor out of them. The only known person to have gained The Tenseigan without The need to sacrifice hundreds of Byakugan eyes was The first user of the Tenseigan who was called the Holy Seal and Sword Master. The Tenseigan allows the user to control attractive and repulsive forces, similar to the Rinnegan's Deva Path. With the complete Tenseigan, the user is able to enter Tenseigan Chakra Mode, which grants the user enhanced physical capabilities as well as a number of Truth-Seeking Balls, comprised of all five nature transformations and Yin–Yang Release. By infusing the balls with Tenseigan chakra, it is possible to utilise additional powerful techniques. The Tenseigan is also capable of moving the moon towards the Earth, as well as powering a gigantic golem.

The Rinnegan, dojutsu of the Uzumaki clan, capable of using all of the elements, causing a corpse to be able to move again under the identity of the Rinnegan user, and allows one to create the six paths that are called Preta, Naraka, Human, Deva, Asura, and Animal; each path having his or her (depends on the body that the Rinnegan user uses for those paths) own specialty, can also turn deceased animals into a form of summon, the deceased animal will change and warp to become a better tool for what it was intended for. Like all of the four great dojutsu's, the Rinnegan has a more powerful second stage. The Akuma Rinnegan, the epitome of the Rinnegan's cycle, capable of using the sub elements, including Hyoton, Mokuton, and Yoton, as well as all the other sub elements; one can also actually place the original soul of someone and bring them back to life, whether it be in their old body or a new one. To obtain the Akuma Rinnegan you must kill the person whom who despise the most, no matter who it is. The Akuma Rinnegan's power comes at a price however, by gaining the Akuma Rinnegan you no longer need to eat, drink sleep, or do any other necessities of humans, but if you do not, then you slowly begin to wither away into nothing more than a crippled pile of flesh, waiting for someone to either kill you or await until your imminent demise. The only one to find a way around this was the Sage of Six Paths. When he was near the crippling point, he reabsorbed the power of his six paths, no longer being crippled, but being in the perfect body for one his age. He had only one child, but he wanted to make sure that the knowledge of how to gain the second level was lost to time. He left knowledge of only the Rinnegan, not the Akuma Rinnegan. His last surviving remnants were Kushina Uzumaki, and Nagato Uzumaki.

The Seishougan, dojutsu of the Namikaze clan, capable of using pure chakra to a much higher extent than a regular shinobi, they usually become incapable of using any element outside of their natural affinities, it can force chakra to take different forms, ranging from that of a shield, a sword, or even a seal, a Seishougan is also capable of recognizing and breaking down seals so long as chakra has been applied to said seal. All shinobi are capable of using pure chakra like one would use a sword or kunai, but with the Seishougan it becomes second nature to them. Just like the rest of the four great Dojutsu's, the Seishougan has a second stage, the Kurai Seishougan. The Kurai Seishougan has the ability to instantly cast seals that have been broken down by the eye, can fire raw blasts of pure chakra with little effort, capable of manipulating the chakra within a jutsu that has already been cast, and warp the energy around oneself to a minimal degree. To awaken this stage you must watch the person you despise most die, watch as the last trace of life exits, their body. The curse of this stage is that you are forever condemned to remember the faces of everyone you have killed or seen die, haunting your nightmares forever. To forget these haunting memories, and prevent yourself from going insane, you must learn to let go of the past and find solace. One who succeeded in this endeavor was Minato Namikaze, the last of the Namikaze clan. Minato Namikaze created two extremely destructive techniques thanks to his Seishougan, one that only another Seishougan wielder could hope to use. He created the Hiraishin for his family's personal technique, and the Rasengan, that only his sensei was able to master without the Seishougan.

PS please if you accept this challenge notify dracohalo117 and I so we can read and review it.