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Joined 09-25-04, id: 677262
Author has written 2 stories for Pokémon.
Real Name: Fred Naumann
Stories: The End Days, my first fic (still in progress!) and my newest story, Claws
Age: 14
Favorite Fanfiction Authors: Keleri, Charpal, and Venusaur(on Pokemasters.net)
Favorite Novelists: Orson Scott Card, Stephen King, Frank Herbert, and Ayn Rand.

I'll probably stick with Pokemon fanfics. This is the first thing I've written that I've actually "published." So please, review. Be brutal. I need to know what I'm doing wrong if this sucks.

There's a few things that annoy me about Pokemon fanfiction stories. First of all, when people write about characters from the show. Originality, please! Also, WHAT IS THIS CRAP ABOUT "STARTER POKEMON"? Practically every single Pokemon fic I've read does this. That's not how it happens in the games, and even the show doesn't go to the extremes that these fics do. Be realistic: how likely is it that there are a bunch of people out there who work tirelessly at catching Pokemon, giving hundreds of Charmander, Squirtle, and Bulbasaur to professor Horsechestnut or whatever, and then these people just hand them out for free to every yahoo that graduates from grade school? If that were how it worked, every single trainer would have a Charmeleon or Marshtomp.
And rivals. Why is it that every main character in Pokemon fanfiction has to have a mortal enemy? It doesn't make any sense! There's not a jerk to balance out every hero!

Anyway...I probably just alienated 90 of the fanfiction.net community. But I don't mean to be rude to anyone. The things I mentioned don't ruin a story, but they get tiresome after a while.

I'm new to the site, so if there's something I'm missing or did wrong, let me know.

If you like my story, please tell me! And if not, tell me why.


Nitesco by Charientism reviews
A force has taken the world by the throat - the strange and unknowable Tessalists have crumbled Team Rocket and the power of the Indigo Plateau. Only Seafoam Island and Saffron City, the final Pokemon and human enclaves, stand firm: but for how long more?
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,088 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/14/2004
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Claws reviews
Tess Richards, a starting trainer, is rescued by a stranger with a Pokeball who claims he is not a trainer. The secret past behind this oddity is far more important than either of them guess, and threatens the safety of the entire world.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,417 - Reviews: 9 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/29/2005 - Published: 4/11/2005
The End Days reviews
The End Days of Pokemon training. Pokeballs no longer work, civilization crumbles, and Team Rocket runs rampant. Three people still have the courage to go on a Pokemon journey. But it's nothing like the journeys that have come before... Please R&R.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 29,229 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/13/2004 - Published: 9/28/2004