Author has written 2 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog.
"Put down everything that comes into your head and then you're a writer. But an author is one who can judge his own stuff's worth, without pity, and destroy most of it."
I would like to thank everyone who continues to read my stories and leave reviews. It is really encouraging to know that there are still people out there that enjoy reading the works I have made.
(12-30-15) Thank you for the wonderful reviews, I am very sorry for taking so many years to update. I have re-read Don't Let Me Fall and I am trying to get into the groove of things. Thankfully I have kept all my documents regarding to the story so I know where things are going. Let's hope this goes well and I can get out a new chapter once and for all! Wish me luck.
(08-04-14) I updated Chapter 5 of Don't Let Me Fall again; I was not satisfied with the final scene, so I changed it somewhat. Chapter 6 is proving to be easier to edit than all the others and hopefully I will be done with it soon. Afterwards, I will work on the new chapter.
(04-06-14) The edited Chapter 4 of Don't Let Me Fall has been updated. It includes new and improved content-- there are some major changes. Also, there was a minor story change overall, as the story now takes place two years after the SA2 events.
(12-27-12) Changed my pen name.
Story News and Updates
Don't Let Me Fall
(08-04-14) Chapter 5 has been revised/updated.
(04-06-14) Chapter 4 has been revised/updated.
(09-24-11) I am trying to finish editing the previous chapters before moving in to the new one because I found some plot holes within the story that need to be filled up. I am also enriching the current chapters with more detail and new dialogue.
Heart in the Darkness
(07-23-11) Revisions for Chapter 4 are being done. Chapter 3 is not up yet. Other than that, it is on hold until I add a new chapter to Don't Let Me Fall.
(03-27-11) I will completely rearrange the story plot line and make it more mature and less melodramatic. I believe this story had a lot of potential... but I was a very inexperienced writer and this caused me to fall into the 'this is too out of character to handle' pit. I will make it better, so look forward to major edits in the current chapters. I believe the biggest changes will be to take out the OC characters and making the story much more in-character. I will announce in my profile when the changes are made.
Don't Let Me Fall is an action/adventure story about a frantic chase issued by G.U.N. to capture and destroy Shadow. The focus of the story is mostly action, although romance is introduced to the mix as the story progresses. This one is my personal favorite and I like it a lot. Currently it is on chapter six and I would like to receive more feedback/reviews. Jazzy B. Real drew a wonderful fan art for the story.
Heart in the Darkness is a ShadAmy fantasy-romance story. Currently it is on hold and being revised. I wrote this story with very little thought about the plot and, sadly, I lost the main idea/motivation for it. Hopefully after the corrections the story will become more reader worthy. I am happy that so many people like the story so far, but I would like to give them something better. I wrote the story because I got inspired by a picture I found on deviantArt. I loved the way it looked and I could not resist writing a story about it. The drawing is titled, "Shall we dance?" and it has Shadow and Amy ready to dance. The story is an AU (alternative universe) story, it takes place in a Victorian Era kind-of time. Lookie, Lookie.
Upcoming / Thinking of
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