Author has written 9 stories for Naruto, Kingdom Hearts, Air Gear, Chronicles of Narnia, Criminal Minds, and How to Train Your Dragon.
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This should pretty much describe my current mood and writing style. It's a review that I submitted about a...well, a ridiculous piece of...stuff. I can't even think of a word to describe it. kind of made me want to light my eyes on fire. Or go cuddle my copy of Watchmen and cry.
Your writing does need some work. Your grammar is a bit shabby, and your spelling is pretty bad. As well as your plot. And your overall idea.
Just keep practicing and you'll get better, dear. I'm sorry if some of us come off as mean. It's just that some people care about timeless works like Watchmen and don't want to see it's characters, who are filled with complexities and beautiful character traits, end up in a rather poorly written Mary-Sue fanfiction.
You don't have to reply to this, even though I doubt you will. I'm just another meanie bashing on a young writer. Even though I doubt I'm that much older than you. It's almost 2 in the morning, and when I spy...something like this, I tend to become overwhelmed by the need to explain myself.
Watchmen fans are very...ehm...specific about what happens to this work on FF.net. I know I speak for mostly all of the Watchmen fans on here when I say that you're gonna need to get out of the Mary-Sue rut and start writing properly. And keep in mind the characters when you write them. And the plot. And the fact that you should probably consider getting a beta reader for your fics. Or you might want to consider actually reading through them before you submit them. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are all key things in a writing.
Yeah, I'm a horrible person. And I'm sorry if I come off as mean. Hell, I AM being mean. But you need to consider these things, dear. Have fun on Quizilla.
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