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Author has written 8 stories for Kingdom Hearts, Warcraft, Naruto, Fullmetal Alchemist, Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ, and WildStar.

CURRENT PROJECT: Deepest Descent

Introduction and Description:

Founding is still here, defiantly sticking its fist in the air even though it's been discontinued. I don't really approve of what ultimately became of the Organization, so I'm not -that- embarassed by the concepts presented there (just the writing =P).

I would LIKE to say that my love for Birth By Sleep made me write this fic, and it is true that it provided the impetus for the gears turning in my head. But honestly? This is a labor of rage. I've explained this on the forums below (as this project is half fic, half dissertation about how NOT to make Kingdom Hearts)Dream Drop Distance is the source of the rage, again, more details on the forum. But if there is one thing about D2, it is this:

This story, is how to write the finale of Kingdom Hearts, using all of the loose threads; keeping the other games relevant to the meta-plot, and not creating a macguffin for the final chapter IN the final chapter.

Do I take liberties? Yes. Are there OCs? One. One half. Forums, do it. But there are no Deathly Hallows in this story, as I fully expect will be in KH3, beyond the time traveling Xehanort. This fic adopts the stance that almost every detail of every game has been a Chekov's gun.

Like Founding, this is all based on CURRENT canon information. I am doing extensive research on Wikis to try to keep everything on the level (because I do not currently own a handheld device and cannot play Birth or Days personally). So if my facts regarding information revealed in those games is off, my apologies (I disagree with certain "official" interpretations given regarding information from the games I have played so I'm incredibly wary of this).

Please note that Deepest Descent was started BEFORE Dream Drop Distance. As such, I have only partially incorporated details about the plot from that game into the fic, most noteworthy, there is indeed a revived Organization XIII in D2, but it is a slightly different composition than the one that will feature in KH3.

And remember, the chapters posted on Fanfiction.net are first drafts, with minimal editing (mostly spelling and some grammar). The revised editions will probably be posted on my professional site, but that will probably only be after it is completed, or at the least, nearing completion, and we aren't yet halfway through.

Finally, I am making several choices regarding "uncertain" canon in the KH universe. Do not worry, I will make them apparent, and if they require explanation, it will somehow be provided in the narrative. But, for your own reference, here are a few to follow along with:

-Early on I reference the conversation between Riku and Zexion. In it, Zexion tells Riku that he was the Darkside that destroyed Destiny Islands (hence why Darkside appears immediately after Riku enters the Darkness). Riku seems shocked, even on the verge of crying, before declaring it a lie. Official sources have since presumed that Riku was correct and Zexion was only trying to deceive Riku.

I am not one of these sources.

Personally, I don't see how lying about that to Riku would serve Zexion any purpose. There is no hole in that theory either, we never see Riku and Darkside in the same place. In fact, like I said, Darkside appears IMMEDIATELY after Riku surrenders his heart to Darkness. To me, Riku is in denial when he calls it a lie, like Luke Skywalker's "That's not true, that's impossible!" Just because the hero says it, doesn't make it the truth. So this is one place where I am officially checking off a box the games have not.

-Keyblades have not been described in a meaningful way yet. I have taken the approach of the Trinity that was displayed in Kingdom Hearts Two, with the symbols for the Keyblade, Heartless, and Nobodies all in equal positions. I am deliberately taking the stance that Keyblades are hearts made out of Light, just like Heartless are hearts made out of Darkness, and Nobodies are both and neither at the same time.

I understand this somewhat contradicts established canon, we have already seen several examples of hearts made of pure Light, though in Ventus' instance, his heart did indeed become a keyblade. Sort of. The flip side of this is that we haven't seen a heart DIRECTLY fall to Darkness in a vacuum. I am instead making the assumption that because multiple hearts can be connected, if there are pieces of one's heart in a vicinity, they cannot fall to Heartless or Keyblades. Whereas Heartless multiply by devouring the Light within someone's heart, and the remaining Darkness turns into a Heartless. I imagine a similar process would be needed for keyblades. I am rolling with the idea, that the absence of any light, anywhere, connected to a single heart produces a Heartless, and the reverse is also true (which would explain why Ventus did not transform into a keyblade as his heart was split, the Darkness wasn't "devoured"). On top of this, as an added stipulation, I am making the assumption that Heartless can only be created in the Realm of Light, and Keyblades only in the Realm of Darkness. You are free to correct me if I'm incorrect in this assumption, but I can't recall actually seeing someone become a Heartless in the Realm of Darkness.

"What about the Princesses of Heart?" you ask? Well, let's just say I will remain consistent.

So, there will be places where my lore of Kingdom Hearts may be a little different from what you're used to (in areas beyond those which I have described). I do assure you, each of these interpretations exists for a definite reason. I won't be saying "Oh Riku and Selphie dated when they were 14" just because their childhoods are blank points and it's space to fill. I wish for Deepest Descent to still FEEL like a Kingdom Hearts story, the approach I try to take in all my other fics.

That being said, Deepest Descent is rated Teen for being more dark, more depressing, and less "friendship is magic" than the canonical games. My only criticism of the series as a whole, has been that none of the characters ever seem to bleed (both physically and emotionally).

In Deepest Descent, they do.

I hope you enjoy it.

The story avatar was graciously supplied by RoxasTsuna on deviantart.

Also, Deepest Descent, it is my hope, can be something of a collaborative process. There are details in the writing, that I think of as "cosmetic" details. Things like which Disney worlds the heroes will visit are inconsequential to the real plot, that is of all of the Kingdom Hearts OCs (Kairi, Riku and co.). A wild west showdown between Kairi and Xehanort can take place in the Enchanted Dominion or Agrabah, the Disney world itself is a cosmetic step in the journey. Just as an example. If I am lucky enough that you enjoy the story you've read so far, and would like to see what I do with a specific scenario, please, I invite you to the feedback forum below.

http://www.fanfiction.net/forum/D2_Interactive_forum/115146/

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Grey by Balancingdiet reviews
Homura couldn't see anything, but she could feel Madoka's warmth beside her.
Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/24/2013 - Madoka K., Homura A. - Complete
Dear Fanfiction by C.B. Magique reviews
The Canon of Kingdom Hearts has taken issue with the fans and their fanfiction and is unloading its feelings in letters to us. But that doesn't mean that we don't have anything to say back.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 40 - Words: 6,467 - Reviews: 146 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 4/27/2013 - Published: 12/7/2011 - Complete
Something Within by Vheeri The Succubus reviews
Being a kid going on a grand adventure can leave you feeling a bit weary. Semi-dark drabble.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 548 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/12/2012 - Sora - Complete
Black Rose by BlissyJen reviews
Not a LarXMar okay? It's just Larxene being different and Marluxia pitying her. It's somewhat inspired by sadistickunais awesome fanfic
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 993 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/11/2006 - Larxene, Marluxia - Complete
Withdrawal Syndrome by Wushu reviews
//HarperTrance// Harper is separated from the rest of the crew, while separated he suffers serious withdrawals and is confronted by demons from the past.
Andromeda - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15,226 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/21/2003 - Trance G., S. Harper - Complete
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My Name is My Bond
My name? It wasn't always the one I use. What's in a name? Everything. It is what I am. It is where I'm going.
WildStar - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,851 - Published: 2/20 - Cassian, Draken
Deepest Descent reviews
A vision of Kingdom Hearts 3. Ventus has been freed from Sora, but a sudden betrayal from within and the return of the Unversed herald not only Xehanort's return, but old enemies for the heroes of two eras to overcome. See profile for complete summary.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 95,712 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 7/31/2014 - Published: 12/22/2011 - Sora, Kairi, Riku, Ventus/Ven
Life in the Bunker
Life is good for Moana Ainov. A firm Dominion supporter, she leads a rather comfortable life as a musician, fluent in several instruments and singing, a Cassian lover, everything's turning up roses. At least, before the Fall. But sometimes the happiest are not the most well-adjusted. (A brief narrative of my PC)
WildStar - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,058 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/23/2014
The End of All Things reviews
Just a short flash fic to celebrate the upcoming movie. Told from a Madoka POV. Hope meets Despair.
Puella Magi Madoka Magica/魔法少女まどか★マギカ - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,407 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 6 - Published: 10/24/2013 - Madoka K., Homura A. - Complete
At Long Last reviews
This is the shortest Fullmetal/Flame slash in history. That is all you need to know. Rated T for suggestiveness?
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/17/2012 - Edward E., Roy M. - Complete
The Cat who became the Snake reviews
Poor Hinata, she never seems to learn her lesson! A story about the ever classic Rebound, and how it works, and how sometimes, it won't. Which is this? I'm not telling! KabuHina. Crying. Lots and lots of crying. Discontinued.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,247 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 7/26/2008 - Published: 9/9/2007 - Hinata H., Kabuto Y.
Play, Joy, and Comfort reviews
Two friends find themselves together on a boring night. Based on a real RP event that occurred in World of Warcraft.
Warcraft - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,470 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/27/2006 - Complete
Founding reviews
The Thirteenth Order, and how, just maybe, they influenced Kingdom Hearts more than we know. Begins 9 years prior to KH1, ends at Chain of Memories. DISCONTINUED
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 29 - Words: 31,299 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 12/9/2005 - Published: 3/25/2005