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Joined 05-20-16, id: 7866257, Profile Updated: 02-28-17
Author has written 5 stories for Star Wars, Les Miserables, Bible, and Count of Monte Cristo.

I started on this site with an idea for Star Wars Episode VIII back in Feb 2016. Since then I've caught the writing bug.

I have been heavily influenced by the literature that I love... namely Jane Austen, Dickens, Dostoyevsky, Charlotte Bronte, Tolkien, Lewis, et al. I was also influenced by Chris Stuckmann's analysis of action movies and I think as you read you will see how that affected the story. The crafting of a good story involves being purposeful in character arcs. Each character had to be different at the end of the story from the beginning. The story has to have an introduction, escalation, climax, and resolution; both in the main story arc and in the personal character arcs. Added to this, each of these arcs needed to be contained to each story, a concept that modern movie makers are abandoning as they are making more and more sequel-driven films. I hope that the readers can see this. If not, please PM me your thoughts. And my favorite point is that the external conflict and the internal conflict for the characters ought to reflect each other. That makes for a very satisfying read. Check out my Dark Bounty series where I really hit that hard.

As for what I like. My favorite literature happens to be in the 1800's. Perhaps this is because I appreciate Christian themes and in the 1800's there was good writing and redemptive story lines drawing from the true redemptive story, Christ.

I love stories that are real, and fan fiction need not be excluded from that. Themes of the human condition: love--lost and gained, hope, despair, guilt, redemption... these things are true to us all and the best stories capture that.

I love reviewing and reading. A review from me means that you have a good grasp of the original source material, that you give me vivid access to your world with detail, that you have realistic and natural dialogue with an understanding of how relationships work, and most importantly that you grab hold of something true to our human condition. I know that I am not perfect and my writing has much to criticize; and for that reason, I will not withhold a review from anyone that falls short of perfect. There is always something to admire and encourage.

If you would like me to review your work, PM me. I would be happy to. I do not write heavily critical reviews. If I see a problem with your story I will offer advice by PM only--I think it is shortsighted to criticize a work in a review--these stories are works-in-progress and are subject to change anytime. Why would I put a permanent critique on a temporary work? I can't find every story, so if you think I would like your work, let me know. I am having fun reading similar story lines to mine. But please don't PM me for "World Building." I will read your story, but I won't help you make up a story. Your story must be yours. Finish it and I will read it.

As for future works: Disney has slated Rogue One, Episode VIII, A Han Solo spin-off, Episode IX, and a Boba Fett spin-off.

Seeing how I have three of these five movies written. I am definitely attracted to the idea of writing the other two. So below is the list of my stories, their genre influences, and possible future releases.

Star Wars fictions

Dark Jedi: a two-part series with Episode VIII and Episode IX:

Episode VIII Rise of the Dark Jedi. A tribute to Empire Strikes Back. Released Feb. 2016.

Episode IX The Legacy of the Sith. A tribute to Dark Disciple. Released April 2016.

Dark Bounty. A Boba Fett spin-off in a two-part series.

Dark Bounty: A tribute to Zane Gray's westerns. Released Sept. 2016.

The Final Bounty. I'll let you figure out what tribute that is to. Released Dec. 2016.

Han Solo prequel. Dark Smuggler. Tribute to C. S. Forrester's Horatio Hornblower novels. Status: In Production.

Rogue One style fiction. Dark Rogue--title pending. Heist style genre. Status: Pre-production.

Non-Star Wars fictions.

The Count and the Convict. 1800's French Literature genre. Released Aug. 2016

The Barren Tree. My personal devotions, drawing from the book, The Practice of the Presence of God, by the monk Brother Lawrence in the 1600's. Status: In Production.

Chronicles of Narnia fiction. Pre-production.

Thanks for reading and God bless.

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The Skies Are Ablaze by figbassist75 reviews
In an alternate timeline, where Palaptine is dead and Supreme Leader Snoke came unto his own, the return of a lost Imperial fleet leads General Hux to assign Captain Phasma as their liaison to draw them into joining the First Order. However, a past connection between Phasma and the Imperial Admiral may undermine Hux's plans to gain a strategic advantage against the New Republic.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Adventure - Chapters: 16 - Words: 43,255 - Reviews: 303 - Favs: 93 - Follows: 115 - Updated: 12/5/2022 - Published: 1/11/2016 - Captain Phasma, General Hux, Kylo Ren/Ben Solo, OC
Star Wars: Legacy of the Force by Movie guy 94 reviews
Ben Skywalker has been stuck with his father on Ahch-to for his entire life. He wants to be a Jedi like his father and grandfather, but Luke isn't ready to lose his only child. But, unfortunate circumstances arise, leading Ben on an adventure that will change the galaxy as we know it, forever.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 13 - Words: 20,042 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 2/25/2022 - Published: 7/24/2016 - [Finn, Rey] Ben Skywalker, Kyle Katarn
Monthly Flash Fictions (Star Wars) by Gray Jedi 4000 reviews
I will post my flash fictions here - at least once a month. If a new month has started and I haven't posted anything yet, feel free to yell at me. Summaries and ratings inside. Crossposted on Ao3.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 30 - Words: 8,118 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/31/2021 - Published: 9/3/2016 - Complete
The Grey Warlord by Sebias of Redwall reviews
A band of shrews are thrust into a harsh world when their clan is attacked by corsairs. Meanwhile, a wolverine emperor makes an alliance with the king of Terramort to help him raze the mountain fortress of Salamandastron to the ground.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 66 - Words: 200,657 - Reviews: 558 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 7/22/2020 - Published: 12/20/2018 - Complete
The Knight of the First Order by Drauken reviews
Kylo Ren embarks on the darkness of space to destroy the New Jedi Order. At the peak of the assault, Gray Jedi Mira Wess finds herself in a desperate situation.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 26,810 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 10/28/2018 - Published: 2/19/2017 - Luke S., Thrawn, Ahsoka T., Kylo Ren/Ben Solo - Complete
Wrath by Drauken reviews
After the devastating Battle of Jakku, a new threat emerges from the Unknown Regions, preparing to strike at the heart of the galaxy. Three heroes decide to do everything they can in order to stop them. The first one tries to gather allies for the upcoming invasion. The second leads an armada to certain doom, in hope of delaying the inevitable. The third remains to be forgotten.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 33,739 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/30/2018 - Published: 9/11/2017 - Complete
Till We Have Faces by notdarthvader reviews
When Luke rejects Darth Vader's offer of a chance to rule by his side on Bespin, he sets into motion a long series of struggles between sacred and profane love, as Vader learns that we cannot truly care for a person "till we have faces", and sincerity in our souls and selves.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 27 - Words: 84,927 - Reviews: 331 - Favs: 277 - Follows: 341 - Updated: 2/20/2018 - Published: 4/22/2013 - Luke S., Leia O., Darth Vader
Empire Day by SapphireAlena reviews
1ST PLACE—Star Wars Fanfiction Awards on Wattpad! Luke turns 8 on Empire Day. The Empire ordered a galaxy-wide census on that day. Instead of the pod races, the Lars family heads to Mos Eisley for the census. Complications ensue when Luke runs in front of a speeder. The Emperor's henchman, Darth Vader, is not pleased with the disturbance, taking matters into his own hands. COMPLETE
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 51 - Words: 85,047 - Reviews: 252 - Favs: 493 - Follows: 432 - Updated: 12/27/2017 - Published: 11/5/2016 - [Anakin Skywalker, Padmé Amidala] Luke S., Obi-Wan K. - Complete
A Warrior's tale: Proud to serve by Cowboy-4-Christ reviews
When a young man is transported to Narnia and has no clue of his past life. He must learn who and what he is before it's too late.
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 24 - Words: 20,703 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/10/2017 - Published: 1/3/2017 - Complete
Demiprimal by Gray Jedi 4000 reviews
The Force was not Anakin's father. Anakin's father is much, much more dangerous. It is the same with the others... DISCONTINUED. Will become 'Children of Power.'
Crossover - Percy Jackson and the Olympians & Star Wars: The Clone Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 7 - Words: 4,693 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 4/5/2017 - Published: 12/24/2015
The Last Jedi by Bobby Maler's khakis reviews
The Resistance has succeeded in blowing up Starkiller Base, and Rey has embarked on her mission to find and help "save" the legendary Jedi Luke Skywalker. General Leia Organa delves deeper and deeper into her mission to defeat the First Order and redeem her son as the new Galactic Civil War rages. Read along as characters both old and new fight for the light... and the dark.. side.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,265 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 3/19/2017 - Published: 2/13/2017 - Luke S., Leia O., Rey, Kylo Ren/Ben Solo
These Small Hours by Arana Antonia reviews
Small scenes and one shots depicting the friendship between Luke, Han, and Leia. Take place during and in between the original movies
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,766 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 1/10/2017 - Published: 1/6/2017 - Luke S., Leia O., Han S.
Moments of Breathless Delight by Broadwaykid1832 reviews
A breathless delight in which Enjolras' sister capture everyone's hearts with just the bat of her eyelashes. Les Miserables one shots to be specific.
Les Miserables - Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,553 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 12/20/2016 - Published: 11/24/2016 - Enjolras, Combeferre, Courfeyrac, OC
I am no man by Saluzozette reviews
It's movie night. Enjolras say something that Grantaire and Courfeyrac simply can't stand. Enjoltaire, Courferre, Marisette, FeuillyxBahorel and Joly/Bossuet/Musichetta
Les Miserables - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,080 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/10/2016 - Enjolras, Grantaire, Courfeyrac - Complete
Across The Stars by SpeechBubbleMe reviews
My first real fanfic, don't judge - AU slow-burn Obi-Wan x OC. Planning to span from the prequels to the new movie, but we'll see how far it goes. Rhys Talik Naberrie is chosen to be a Jedi and is brought to the Jedi Temple to be the padawan of Master Yoda. Along the way she falls in with a certain group of friends - particularly my favorite ginger padawan!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 32 - Words: 53,088 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 11/1/2016 - Published: 8/3/2016 - Complete
Known by Gray Jedi 4000 reviews
He knew. Somehow, he knew. DISCONTINUED/UP FOR ADOPTION
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,253 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 10/29/2016 - Published: 4/2/2016 - Luke S., Leia O., Darth Vader
I Am a Slave by SapphireAlena reviews
Rey in the hands of Unkar Plutt calls out in the Force for her mommy. Anakin hears his granddaughter's call and becomes her protector and trainer in all that he knows. [HIATUS: I will be changing the ending at some point. Other books taken down for editing and Wattys on Wattpad.]
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 82 - Words: 97,068 - Reviews: 400 - Favs: 237 - Follows: 266 - Updated: 10/25/2016 - Published: 7/9/2016 - Luke S., Anakin Skywalker, Rey, Kylo Ren/Ben Solo
The Giant of Germany by Firetoast312 reviews
An ole' tale of a hero aiding a Germanic tribe from certain death by the hands of a beast far greater than what they can deal with. With winter on the approach they call for a renown Geat to come to their aid!
Beowulf - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 699 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/2/2016 - Beowulf - Complete
10 facts about,Marauders edition by thechosenbibliophile reviews
10 facts about Marauders Era characters, their friends, their family, from birth until death. It's going to be a bumpy ride!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,223 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/1/2016 - Published: 1/22/2016 - Sirius B., Lily Evans P., Marauders
The Horns of Ylmir by 16-horses reviews
In which Tuor Ulmondil writes a song, marries Idril, and faces off with Maeglin, and we learn a little of the secret personalities of the lords of Gondolin. Rated for some violence and kissing and creepiness. Cover art is by me. DISCLAIMER: The song is by J.R.R. Tolkien.
Silmarillion - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,873 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/12/2016 - Idril C., Maeglin, Tuor - Complete
The fall of a noble soul by Drauken reviews
Luke Skywalker is haunted by visions of a strange woman who claims to be the end of him and everything he loved, unless he kills her. Driven by his emotions, he decides to find her on the scarred planet of Malachor, but he runs into a small army of clones instead, trapping him in the power play between Emperor Snoke and his right hand, Grand Admiral Thrawn.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,879 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/15/2016 - Published: 6/28/2016 - Luke S., Thrawn, Ahsoka T., Supreme Leader Snoke - Complete
Rise of the Second Empire by PhynxLegion reviews
Vader senses the force awakening within a diplomat's preteen daughter. After the High Chancellor orders him to keep away, Vader is forced to make plans which will drastically affect the course of history that his master has planned. Due to work constraints, I had to bring this to a fitting end. Thank you to all you brave readers and reviewers.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 17 - Words: 43,344 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 7/20/2016 - Published: 5/6/2016 - Luke S., Leia O., Darth Vader, OC - Complete
God's Journal by 6CCRider6 reviews
I have been writing poems for over 20 years but I have always felt that God has inspired them. I have never really tried to write a poem the words just kind of flow in my head. At the beginning of last year I prayed about hearing from God with poems again but instead of a poem the words were more like God talking so I wrote in a journal for 80 days and this is 40 of those days.
Bible - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,067 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/12/2016 - Published: 4/30/2016 - Complete
The Red Book by Juliana Brandagamba reviews
[COMPLETE] In which Frodo implores Sam to finish his book for him, and Sam does his best.
Lord of the Rings - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 788 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/23/2016 - Samwise G. - Complete
The Battle of Coruscant by Kelleher reviews
Mostly Han & Leia but all the usual OT suspects. Set immediately after the end of the original theatrical version of ROTJ (so no "weesa free" or toppling of statues has occurred). The Rebellion attempts to achieve a decisive victory over the Empire on Coruscant while Leia struggles with the Luke's revelation of her parentage and a new Sith Emperor even more vicious than the last.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 59,303 - Reviews: 193 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 12/15/2015 - Published: 3/14/2014 - Luke S., Leia O., Han S., M. Mothma - Complete
The Dedication by ProLiferChelle reviews
This story takes place many years after the beloved work which inspired it. I've deliberately placed it here, rather than in its own section. If you review this, please do not reveal the name of the book or the characters mentioned, although I daresay many readers will be able to guess!
Charles Dickens - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 324 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/18/2015 - Complete
reuniting lost love by thechosenbibliophile reviews
What if Gus had written two letters, but one wasn't meant to be given to Hazel until she was on deathbed. Hazel knowing tonight is her last night receives a letter from an unknown , and straight away she realized the writing as her true loves; Augustus Waters.
Fault in Our Stars - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 929 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/12/2014 - Hazel L. - Complete
Last Dance by iBetYouKnowWho reviews
Sometimes, someone will walk into your life and change everything. L/M. Ridiculously AU.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,911 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 2/21/2014 - Published: 8/26/2013 - Luke S., Mara Jade
Arthurs' Yule Rule by Sinthija reviews
In a move that makes Uther seem warm and fuzzy, Arthur cancels the Yule celebrations. It's up to Merlin to save Yule. This is my first attempt at fanfic. Reviews and critiques are welcome.
Merlin - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 553 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/2/2011 - Merlin, Arthur
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Dark Jedi: Episode VIII and IX reviews
This fan fiction Episode VIII and IX was written Feb. 2016. I intentionally avoided reading any fan theories as I was writing it, so I hope this is fresh and unpredictable for most readers. I hope you enjoy.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 40 - Words: 76,552 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 11/29/2017 - Published: 6/1/2016 - Leia O., Finn, Rey, Kylo Ren/Ben Solo
The Barren Tree: Meditations on Finding God in Suffering reviews
Meditations on The Practice of the Presence of God by Brother Lawrence. Where is God in our suffering? These are the devotions of a man struggling to give his life wholly to God in the midst of trials.
Bible - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 9 - Words: 7,358 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/15/2017 - Published: 2/27/2017
Dark Smuggler reviews
A fanfiction envisioning of the Han Solo Stand-alone film. A nineteen-year-old Han Solo recounts the events of his early life that shaped who he is, and hints at the type of man that he is yet to become.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,357 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 2/27/2017 - Published: 1/12/2017 - Han S.
Dark Bounty reviews
The Second Galactic Civil War is over, the FIRST ORDER has been defeated by the RESISTANCE and a new Senate has been elected to govern the galaxy. Boba Fett, having profited from the war returns home, but his exploits have not gone unnoticed in the galaxy. . .
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 38 - Words: 44,085 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/23/2016 - Published: 8/19/2016 - Boba Fett, IG-88 - Complete
The Count and the Convict reviews
The Count of Monte Cristo and Jean Valjean are two well known characters. But did you know they existed in the same time period and in the same locales? With two characters that have such similar stories and yet opposite motivations, wouldn't it be interesting if these two characters happened to meet in Paris, Oct. 1829? What would they talk about? Justice and Mercy meet.
Crossover - Les Miserables & Count of Monte Cristo - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 8 - Words: 6,493 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 12/9/2016 - Published: 8/30/2016 - Valjean - Complete