Ashleg
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Joined 05-04-05, id: 807929
Author has written 3 stories for Redwall, and Star Wars.

Quote of the Week:

Bran: "Can a man still be brave if he's afraid?"

Eddard: "That's the only time he can be brave."

~George R.R. Martin, A Game of Thrones

Story Stats (listed in top priorities):

The Seeker's Path: prologue and first seven chapters edited, Eight and ninth chapter are up, and I haven't started on the tenth chapter

The Purple Lightsaber: prologue and first chapter up-HIATUS on second chapter

In the Dark: I'll post a short story up whenever I'm taking a break orI feel like it

Upcoming Stories (may come in play after a very long time):

The Quibbler: A Harry Potter humor fic. Luna inherits her father's newspaper (The Quibbler) following his retirement and she submits the wildest stories. Includes reader's reviews and her friend's reactions. Approximated Length: between 10 and 15 chapters-novellas leaning towards novel length. Rating: K(g) or K+(pg).

Too Late: An Alex Rider fic-will only get if you've read at least the first four books. as he plummets to his death, Yassen Gregovich reflects on the life he has led and implications he has created. Intended as a short story. Rating: K+(pg) or T(pg-13)

Odysseus and Sons: Greek Mythology: sequel to the published Odysseus 'trilogy'-The Trojan War The Odyssey, and Odysseus on the Rhine What if Odysseus hadn't died? What if he managed to return to his home island with his wife and sons and assist his other son and daughter-in-law against Aenes's invading army? Approximated Length: about 60,000 to 70,000 words. Rating: probably T(pg-13).

Review Outlay

I'm going to adopt a rating system for my reviews, from now (10/25/05). BUT, it will only be for stories that are either completed or are more than 20,000 words in. Here is the rating system, from 1-10 (I don't give 0's). If you have one of the lower numbers, it may seem like a flame, but if your story IS that bad, I probably won't reveiw it anyways. And just as a sidenote, I haven't read anything that achieves a 10 quite yet.

1-Is this a joke? If it isn't, you're done...

2-Really, really bad; this story has no potential...except for turning out to be the worst story ever...

3-I'd understand your lack of skill...if you were in third grade or something...

4-It is pretty bad, but with some intense revision, this could still fall over the mark of a decent story...

5-Needs some polish, but there's still hope...

6-Decent skillage used here, not bad, not bad...

7-Pretty good; still room for improvement but going along quite nicely...

8-Really good...I may add your story to my favorites...

9-Above and beyond my expectations, this is the work of a master...

10-Complete perfection...

And here are the areas I am going to rate (at the end will be an 'overall' rating):

Characters (depth):

Characters (dialogue):

Plot (ideas):

Plot (organization):

Prose (voice):

Prose (word choice):

Prose (sentence structure):

Conventions (presentation):

Conventions (mechanics):

E-mail me for this kind of review. I may still give this review to you without an e-mail, but if you wantto be sure...

Recent News ( I will delete the old news when I'm putting up the new news):

9/4/05: TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN I have been grounded off the internet, so I won't be around much, as in leaving reviews and updating my stories

Some other links:

http://fictionpress.com/toledoAs you can tell, my username is Toledo

http://redwallfanfiction.com My username is Pie-Lover

http://critiquecircle.com My usernme is also Pie-Lover

http://terrouge.com My username is ~Pie~

http://fanstory.com My usernmae is EagleEyes

I'm a member of a lot more...I'll add more later

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An Old Mistake by AnvilBlue reviews
A shadow has fallen across the lands of Mossflower County and beyond, a vast horde travels with the intention of destroying the world as it is known and only a small group can overcome the evils unleashed. Parts One & Two under severe revisions78k words
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Suspense - Chapters: 32 - Words: 84,420 - Reviews: 111 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/10/2008 - Published: 3/24/2003
Spirit Fading by pyrrhic victory reviews
Everything he had was taken from him. Everything he had ever taken for granted was ripped from his paws. Saved from death by a ship full of pirates, he only wanted to go home. The problem was that his home no longer existed.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 104,038 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 7/17/2007 - Published: 12/19/2004 - Complete
Eight Words: The Story of Veil by TaheenKiller19 reviews
What if Veil had survived? This tale of a ferret's redemption takes place about 6 seasons after The Outcast of Redwall. Please R&R.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 23 - Words: 28,172 - Reviews: 149 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 4/8/2007 - Published: 12/8/2004
Two As One by SilverRose Brighteye reviews
Good beast or no? After being kidnapped from her home and losing her family to the vicious mink Stelumos, it's up to a young squirrel to determine the fate of Redwall Abbey. Will it be taken? Or will a creature from the past be able to help stop her?
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 29 - Words: 172,547 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 12/22/2006 - Published: 11/22/2002 - Complete
Tears of Blood, Heart of Ice by Eroket reviews
Four beasts, brought together by a common threat: A fox of dark legacy, a ferret and ermine mercenary and their one time foe are pitted against madbeast's plot to hurl the world into war, Please R&R!
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 43,758 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/28/2006 - Published: 10/9/2004
Guardian Angel Romsca by Toboe LoneWolf reviews
When Romsca died in Pearls of Lutra, it looked like she had become a Reformed Vermin. Does that mean she goes to the Happy Place where only good woodlanders get to go? Well, yes, sort of...but before that, she has to become...a guardian angel first...
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,437 - Reviews: 92 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 12/9/2005 - Published: 4/28/2005 - Complete
Destiny Bearing by pyrrhic victory reviews
A sarcastic otter, a hilarious ferret, a clueless squirrel, and an exiled and sinister wildcat…they shouldn’t be in the same story, but they are anyway. Sequel
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 131,537 - Reviews: 149 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/6/2005 - Published: 2/16/2004 - Complete
The Serpents' Society and the Guild of the Eagle by Amberdulen reviews
{Complete} Lord Voldemort is rising across the land ... and the Society for Slytherin Advancement is caught in his shadow. Parallels OotP.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 32 - Words: 142,608 - Reviews: 153 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/8/2005 - Published: 2/2/2005 - Complete
Coping by Erin Reya reviews
About a young haremaid dealing with the loss of a family member as well as being a new recruit in the Long Patrol. Where anger and disobedience leads an independant haremaid.
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 13 - Words: 15,077 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 2/27/2005 - Published: 1/25/2004
Deck the Halls by maraudette-kim reviews
Voldemort and his faithful Death Eaters are really getting into the Christmas holidays...maybe a little too much. Funny holidays fic! JUST POSTED NEED REVIEWS
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 1,780 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/27/2004 - Published: 12/14/2004 - Voldemort, Severus S.
The Bitter Side of War by The Silvercat reviews
One-shot. Redwall is famous for its glorious feasts after victory...But what if-for once-there was no victory? The other side of war. R&R please.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,742 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/17/2004 - Complete
Sword Tongue by Word Bender reviews
I am a weapon. And no matter what the intentions, whether to cause a holocaust or to bring new age, I was made to kill. Told in Martin the Warriors' Sword P.O.V.
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,158 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 12/16/2004 - Published: 11/14/2004
Two Sides To Every Story by Lady Storm reviews
A Redwall parody of Mary Sues. Chapter 8 up - Shrews ain't all dat!
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 7 - Words: 9,267 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/12/2004 - Published: 3/11/2004
Vengeance Quest by Sounasha reviews
When a wolverine slays her father, Riala Goldentail sets off on a quest for vengeance that will lead her through pain and hardship, companionship won and lost, and eventually to the final confrontation... (R for mild sexual content in chapters 12, 14, 16)
Redwall - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 118,793 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 31 - Updated: 12/6/2004 - Published: 7/15/2004
Fred and George: A History by maraudette-kim reviews
Property of Fred and George Weasley WARNING: chapters ahead may contain some seriously funny stuff! NOT RECOMMENDED FOR CHILDREN, PREGNANT WOMEN, ELDERLY PEOPLE, AND ANY PERSON WITH A HEALTH PROBLEM. lol jks just R&R!
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 4,696 - Reviews: 132 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 11/20/2004 - Published: 9/18/2004 - George W., Percy W.
The Chaotic Soul by The Silvercat reviews
COMPLETE! The sword of Martin is an honorable weapon to carry when called to wield it. Creatures wear it with pride, but... Sometimes the mental burden can cause a beast to regret taking such a prized possession. Please review!
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 19,529 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 12 - Updated: 10/15/2004 - Published: 8/28/2004 - Complete
Silhouettes by AnvilBlue reviews
The true cause of the destruction of Saint Ninians. A shadow from the Dark Forest comes to haunt the lands of Mossflower, causing the eventual destruction of Ninians. complete
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 16,462 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 10/2/2004 - Published: 6/13/2004 - Complete
Ruining People's Lives by maraudette-kim reviews
Rita Skeeter hasn't been able to write a decent article sinceHermione threated to blow her cover. But what happens when Rita realizes that she never said anything about having her own talk show! Lots of fun with HP characters! R&R!
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/26/2004 - Draco M., Harry P.
Blood on Black Paws by skipper-of-otters reviews
A young vixen is framed for murdering several long patrol hares. Tracked by revenge hungry hares through a Mossflower still ripe with anti-vermin prejudice, does she stand any chance of surviving? Warning: When I say PG-13, I mean it.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,229 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/13/2004
Blood on the snow: The Nightson and the Civet by Eroket reviews
Done with permission of Quinlan of Redwall. Read his After the Rain to fully understand. An ancestor of Jald Nightson has found his archenemy among the savage civet race in the Civet Purge of the West...how much is his revenge worth to him?
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,868 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/24/2004
Shadows and Blood book 2: Hunter's Way by Eroket reviews
Three years since part 1 have passed, Jald and Eroket are hired by a mysterious employer, pitted with and against one another against their target, the mysterious and deadly Vandashira...but who is pulling their strings? Hoping for more reviews soon!
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 30 - Words: 81,292 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 7 - Updated: 8/21/2004 - Published: 3/16/2004
Stormbringer by VicPez reviews
The defenders of Redwall must decide whether to go to assist Lord Rocketh and his Long Patrol in defending Mossflower from the Stormrats - a menace that they thought vanquished seasons ago.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 84,479 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 7/31/2004 - Published: 11/6/2003
The Plains of Falenton by Dormant reviews
The moment of death can be translated into the moment of truth. A warlord confronts the truth he's been trying to avoid, destined for what they call "hellgates."
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,413 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/25/2004
Redwall Defense Guide by Toboe LoneWolf reviews
Aka, How to Save the Blinkin' Abbey...AGAIN! A guide on how to PROPERLY defend Redwall Abbey!
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,400 - Reviews: 90 - Favs: 56 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/24/2004 - Published: 3/23/2004 - Complete
Shadows and Blood by Eroket reviews
The tale of Eroket Nightblade: Mercenary, champion and warrior...facing a brutal mercenary army known as the Death watch, Eroket and his companions face deadly opposition...but from where, they are not certain
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 32 - Words: 51,936 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/10/2004 - Published: 5/20/2003
The Mindlessness of Intuition by Clarenova reviews
The reasoning of carnage behind being a hare. The reasoning of carnage behind being a human. The carnage of intuition. Salamandastron exposed. Finished. Final edited version newly uploaded.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,150 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/5/2004 - Published: 10/12/2003 - Complete
Don, Deconstructed by Ennis reviews
Rafael Don is a young fox on his own, traveling across nameless lands and falling further from himself. However, fate has different plans for him, and he's thrust into unusual circumstances.
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52,020 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 10/7/2003 - Published: 4/15/2003
Vengeance Born by pyrrhic victory reviews
Not all otters are good, and Redsplash certainly isn’t. Although considering the fact that her best friend is the son of the tyrant that ruined her life, and once finally freed Redsplash was enslaved by a wildcat, she never really had a chance, did she?
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 58,400 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 9/21/2003 - Published: 12/27/2002 - Complete
Skies of Mossflower by Mitya Shostak reviews
A secretive villain based in a fortress consisting of two towers unfolds his terrible plan to dominate Mossflower by air. Rating is due to extensive September 11 referencesmetaphors.
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 41 - Words: 28,020 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 6 - Updated: 9/21/2003 - Published: 2/3/2002 - Complete
Song of the Savage by Stargazer Corax reviews
The ongoing saga of the corsair galley the Sayladar, and its strange captain, Morgan the mouse. A story of savagery versus civilization, among other issues. Enjoy! -Darkfire Stargazer
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 19 - Words: 13,742 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 9/1/2003 - Published: 7/12/2002
First Flight by SilverRose Brighteye reviews
This is a story about a squirrel, but just not anytype of squirrel. Driven away by her family at a young age, Kamila must learn who she truly is and how to survive in the cruel world around her
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,312 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/6/2003 - Published: 5/24/2003
The Serpents' Society and the Black Skull by Amberdulen reviews
Pre-OotP - The Triwizard Tournament has come to Hogwarts ... but the Society for Slytherin Advancement may have to deal with far more sinister developments.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 23 - Words: 110,991 - Reviews: 115 - Favs: 15 - Updated: 6/20/2003 - Published: 6/1/2003 - Complete
Eagle Watch: Mirage by Dhark reviews
A continuation of my series. This one is set a while after the last one, so don't plan on repeat characters. Please R/R. It is recommended you read the first two first. Right now I only have the prolgue and part I up.
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 26,063 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 2/21/2003 - Published: 4/24/2001
Of Roses and Wine Cellars by Astariel reviews
Matthias and Cornflower struggle to find "alone-time"..
Redwall - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 934 - Reviews: 102 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/17/2002
The Serpents' Society and the Dementors' Fortress by Amberdulen reviews
Pre-OotP - Sirius Black, a mysterious haunting, O.W.L.s, and the defense of the Quidditch cup ... This year, the Society for Slytherin Advancement has its hands full.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 25 - Words: 93,706 - Reviews: 150 - Favs: 18 - Updated: 10/2/2002 - Published: 9/4/2002 - Complete
Does Song Compose Heroes? by Mitya Shostak reviews
A fox composer gives his account of his place in the struggle between Redwall and the Mtsensk District.
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 21 - Words: 37,809 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 7 - Updated: 9/25/2002 - Published: 8/25/2001
Don't Read This by skipper-of-otters reviews
One of Salamandastron's worst writes about his experiances. When the badger is away, the hares can play...
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,409 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 9/14/2002 - Published: 9/1/2002
The Serpents' Society and the Quest for the Heir by Amberdulen reviews
Pre-OotP - Fifty-two years ago, Tom Riddle created a secret organization of Slytherins. Now the Chamber of Secrets has been reopened -- will the Society for Slytherin Advancement try to fulfill the goals of their founder?
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 78,515 - Reviews: 135 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/10/2002 - Published: 2/18/2002 - Complete
The Serpents' Society by Amberdulen reviews
Pre-OotP - Battling the Weasleys, sneaking out at night, mocking the Hufflepuffs, revealing mysteries of the castle ... all in a day's work for a secret group of Slytherins desperate to find out what's hidden on the restricted third-floor.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 24 - Words: 51,398 - Reviews: 123 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/13/2002 - Published: 1/28/2002 - Complete
Heathens by Amberdulen reviews
Freedom fighters surrounding a fortress? .. or something more?
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/20/2001 - Complete
Eagle Watch: Southstream by Dhark reviews
The Sequel to my previous novel, Ghost. Action is in and around Loamhedge. (Best viewed in Times New Roman)
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 10 - Words: 49,284 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 4/20/2001 - Published: 4/18/2001
These Walls by Amberdulen reviews
I built these stone walls so that they would stand forever ... far longer than I.
Redwall - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 384 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 9 - Published: 3/18/2001 - Complete
Eagle Watch: Ghost by Dhark reviews
An original story inspired by Rewall. A struggle by one to forge a future and a team in spite all odds. Please review. (Best viewed in Times New Roman)
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 43,268 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/9/2001
Ours Is Not To Reason Why by Amberdulen reviews
After failing to capture Redwall, a rat sails home ...
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,482 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/22/2000 - Complete
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The Seeker's Path reviews
A summmary is in the preface. Please give it a shot! R&R Note: Prologue and the first seven chapters have been slightly altered and edited. Chapter Nine finally upsorry for the wait!
Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 43,174 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/20/2005 - Published: 5/31/2005
The Purple Lightsaber reviews
Tentative title. Following the life and exploits of Mace Windu from his birth to his death. If you review this I'll TRY to review your storystories.
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,222 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/16/2005 - Published: 8/22/2005
In the Dark: A Collection of Short Stories reviews
Just what the title says. The topics explored vary greatly. R&R please.
Redwall - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,040 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 8/1/2005 - Published: 5/7/2005
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