Alice I
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Joined 05-09-05, id: 810752, Profile Updated: 03-26-13
Author has written 22 stories for Numb3rs, Without a Trace, Supernatural, Merlin, Hawaii Five-0, Emergency, Sherlock, and Primeval.

About me:

40something year old mother of three. (Got tired of changing that number. As far as I'm concerned I will never hit 50 so I'll be 40something for the rest of my life!)

Live in currently very chilly Upstate NY!!!!

I have been a radiologic technologist for 20something years (see above note) and have a love of writing. For more on me - I guess read my stories.

Flames vs constructive criticism. I have updated my profile here so that there is no mistaking where I stand on these issues.

3-19-12

I have three open stories that I am working on simultaneously. Square Peg Round Hole (Merlin fandom), Between a Rock and a Hard Wave (H50 fandom) and Checks and Balances (Emergency! fandom). A friend of mine was going to finish Methods of Intolerance (Numb3rs fandom) but I guess she has decided not to after all. I do not see that story being finished. Sorry. The muse has no interest in Numb3rs anymore. Trying to finish it at this point would be ... well... pointless.


Don't forget to review the stories that you read because it really is what makes the authors want to keep writing. These stories are shared freely and without any sort of financial obligation on the part of the reader. If a story is not to your liking all you need do is stop reading. If you enjoyed a story, however, please take a minute of your time and let the author know what you thought. Most authors appreciate constructive comments as much as praise for their work. Besides it's cheaper than going to Barnes and Noble! LOL

Please do not leave meaningless flames on someone's story even if it is some of the worst writing that you have ever seen. No one forced you to read it. Some of these young writers have no idea what they are doing. If you feel you must say something; rather than leaving pointless disparaging remarks that have nothing to do with the story, point them in the right direction. Tell them they need help with their writing, point out ways for them to improve, give examples heck send them to the writer's forum Calling All Authors, but don't flame. It shows a lack of intelligence and couth on the part of the reader and robs your opinion of credibility.

Added - April 2012
That being said - I will reiterate something. I recently was accused of flaming a story. This is, of course, untrue. I have stated very clearly what a flame is both here and on the forum Calling All Authors. If I come across a story that has potential but is poorly executed with multiple obvious problems I will tell the author. When I leave a constructive criticism it will be directed at the story and the problems within the story, not at the author themselves. Flame Rising used to call authors nasty names and tell them to jump off cliffs rather than to keep writing. That is a flame. To tell an author that they are a talentless hack with no imagination is a flame. To insult the author directly or to make disparaging remarks about the author or their intelligence is a flame.

I do not ever attack an author personally. I also do not gush over stories. I do not write reviews that say things like "OMG this story is soooooo good, please continue!" If I like a story I will tell the author what I like about the story. I will point out the strengths I see in the writing. Conversely, if I see a story that needs serious help I will point out what the story's weaknesses are and offer advice on what to do to improve.

If you ask for reviews and feedback then don't get upset when you get what you asked for. If you are the kind of author that only wants glowing reviews then please state that up front. State clearly that you do not want negative feedback, constructive criticism, or flames. If I give an honest opinion I will argue the point that it is NOT a flame. I did with the woman who was upset by a review I left on her story. She blew right past the fact that I told her that the story has potential, but she needed to go back to the drawing board on it. She ignored the points I made about grammar and typos, about unrealistic antagonists and poorly executed plot. She didn't ready herself when I stated up front that she was probably not going to like the review. I even said that I could get past the grammar and typos but there were other problems with the story as well, compelling me to leave the review. She has since blocked me. Frankly it is no skin off my nose. Her reaction was childish as were her PM's sent to me.

I have and will stand up against flamers. I took on Flame Rising directly and guess what? I'm still here and he is gone. I stood toe to toe with the nastiest members of the LU and guess what? I'm still here and will continue to speak out against flamers and internet bullies. I will give any author an honest reply. I am not a fan of being politically correct. I will work with anyone who asks for assistance or advice. I will send them to people who can best answer their questions if I don't have the right answers. I will never personally attack them, but I will be truthful in what I write in a review and the review will always be about the story never about the author.

DEFINITION: A flame is generally a series of insults directed at the author themselves rather than the story. There are some cases where it is impossible to tell that a flamer has even read a piece of writing because nothing about the story is mentioned anywhere in the flame. Some flamers seem to think that their mission in life is to save the rest of us from bad literature. What I say to all flamers is this: Put your over-inflated dime store egos away. I don't need saving. If I think that something is a pile of rubbish I have the option to stop reading or at least give constructive criticism, emphasis on CONSTRUCTIVE.

Have a great day
Thanks,
Alice I

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Plane Talk by REIDFANATIC reviews
A series of one shots and drabbles of conversations between the members of the BAU team while on the plane. Mostly Reidcentric
Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 64 - Words: 41,095 - Reviews: 1028 - Favs: 588 - Follows: 545 - Updated: 11/7/2014 - Published: 10/29/2009 - S. Reid
La Ho'omaika'i by Jelsemium reviews
Danny Williams is clearly not happy about something, but Steve McGarrett can't figure out what. PS La Ho'omaika'i is Hawaiian for "Thanksgiving"
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,020 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/26/2010 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
It hurts to be near, yet so far by dreamland4 reviews
Gwen reflects as she watches Arthur dancing with another Princess, feelings are spoken. I own nothing, but I hope you like it.
Merlin - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,364 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 4/12/2010 - Published: 4/1/2010 - Arthur, Gwen/Guinevere - Complete
Arthur's Silent Guardian by Sydelle Rein reviews
A powerful sorcerer named Emrys resides in Camelot, a silent guardian to Prince Arthur. But why would any sorcerer protect a Pendragon? Candun intends to find out, even if it means kidnapping the prince of Camelot as bait. No Slash! Sequel now posted!
Merlin - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,196 - Reviews: 261 - Favs: 1,212 - Follows: 224 - Updated: 1/31/2010 - Published: 1/26/2010 - Arthur, Merlin - Complete
Pearly Whites by FraidyCat reviews
Sam and Dean lead very abnormal lives; and yet have normal desires. How do they bridge the gap? Sounds slightly slashy, but it is not. At all.
Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,136 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 16 - Published: 12/8/2008 - Sam W., Dean W. - Complete
Yesterday To Tomorrow by DreamBrother reviews
Written for apreludetoanend in the Supernatural Summer Gen Fic Exchange 2008 over on LJ. Sam acquires a camera. This is the story of his last year before Stanford through the pictures he took.
Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,084 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/8/2008 - Sam W., Dean W. - Complete
Brightest Crayon by OughtaKnowBetter reviews
Why was Charlie's business card found in a murdered man's hand? Complete story.
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Crime - Chapters: 24 - Words: 68,613 - Reviews: 161 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 5/22/2008 - Published: 4/29/2008 - Complete
Flaming for Trolls by OughtaKnowBetter reviews
Thousands of readers. Three fanfic writers. Two Eppes brothers. One little spoof.
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,091 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/11/2008 - Complete
Set the Fire by Lisa Paris reviews
First of all, he was conscious of the quiet. Of the cold, and the unearthly silence . . .
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 20 - Words: 69,152 - Reviews: 248 - Favs: 59 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 12/30/2007 - Published: 8/18/2007 - Don E., Charlie E. - Complete
Silence the Voices by DreamBrother reviews
Short oneshot. Charlie learns something new about his brother
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,301 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 4 - Published: 9/23/2007 - Don E., Charlie E. - Complete
Twas a Dark and Stormy Night by OughtaKnowBetter reviews
The title says it all. Set in season three, before Janus List. Waaaay before Janus List. Got a little bit of humor, and a few Fleinhardtisms in it. Complete story.
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 12 - Words: 41,312 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 6/22/2007 - Published: 6/1/2007 - Complete
Fantasy Football by Serialgal reviews
A really silly oneshot in honor of Superbowl Sunday. The brothers play football. It's stupidity really.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,139 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 57 - Follows: 4 - Published: 1/31/2007 - Complete
Standoff by Serialgal reviews
Don, Charlie and the team are held hostage by a radical antigovernment group. Rated T for some violence and bad language. Episodic fic.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 71,190 - Reviews: 332 - Favs: 179 - Follows: 46 - Updated: 1/23/2007 - Published: 12/24/2006 - Complete
Stockholm Charlie by FraidyCat reviews
Charlie is lost...found...and still lost.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 18 - Words: 32,509 - Reviews: 227 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 11/18/2006 - Published: 11/4/2006 - Charlie E., Don E. - Complete
When it rains: Well, you know by dHALL reviews
A record breaking rainfall.A vicious vehicular assault.Two cars in the water.A terrifying situation for our favorite federal agent & his genius brother.But who was the real target? In the aftermath of the accident,can the team find out in time? COMPLETE
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 38,215 - Reviews: 372 - Favs: 145 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 10/5/2006 - Published: 9/12/2006 - Complete
No Common Allegiance: An Elegy for Justice by dHALL reviews
Part Three of Three. Charlie keeps his promise,but during a botched escape attempt the courthouse becomes a warzone for the gangs of LA and Don finds himself on a quest for revenge that could tear him apart. Warning:Character Death SERIES COMPLETED!
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 21 - Words: 51,654 - Reviews: 246 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 8/29/2006 - Published: 8/4/2006 - Complete
Intervention by FraidyCat reviews
I dare you to read this AU decompression Oneshot. Really. I dare you.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,518 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/17/2006 - Charlie E., Don E. - Complete
No Common Allegiance: Death in the Key of G by dHALL reviews
Part Two of Three. The backpack turns up, the truth comes out and a confrontation with unexpected visitors lands Don and Charlie in a situation that could cost them both their lives. SERIES COMPLETED
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 14 - Words: 22,481 - Reviews: 181 - Favs: 76 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 8/5/2006 - Published: 7/14/2006 - Complete
No Common Allegiance: The Red Line Blues by dHALL reviews
Part one of three. An earthquake.A derailed subway car.Six young gang members,a gun and a claustrophobic math professor.Looks like he picked the wrong day to conquer an irrational fear. SERIES COMPLETED!
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 13,841 - Reviews: 97 - Favs: 87 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 7/15/2006 - Published: 6/25/2006 - Charlie E. - Complete
Blood Relations by dHALL reviews
Charlie learns all about Kevlar first hand. Don uses anger to mask his fears while Charlie faces his. And a quest for retribution may end Charlie's life before they get the chance to make amends. Completed.Revised slighly and errors corrected Sept'06
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 19 - Words: 32,386 - Reviews: 239 - Favs: 129 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 6/15/2006 - Published: 5/29/2006 - Complete
Plague by OughtaKnowBetter reviews
Ten million bacteria. One FBI Headquarters. One bioterrorism plot. Two CalSci professors. 'Nuff said? Complete story.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 30,974 - Reviews: 131 - Favs: 85 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 3/29/2006 - Published: 3/15/2006 - Complete
Yield by OughtaKnowBetter reviews
Don and his team are called out to investigate a murder of a not so prominent researcher. Who's the real target? Story complete.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 35,190 - Reviews: 91 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 3/8/2006 - Published: 2/22/2006 - Complete
The Unquantifiable Variable by BeckyS reviews
Can Don Eppes do his job when one of the hostages he has to rescue is his brother? A case story in 8 chapters plus an epilogue, with multiple posts per chapter.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 18 - Words: 30,274 - Reviews: 110 - Favs: 205 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 8/29/2005 - Published: 8/22/2005 - Complete
Interlude by BeckyS reviews
How Charlie Eppes got over stage fright for his first big lecture.
Numb3rs - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,029 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/30/2005 - Complete
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Checks and Balances reviews
The fire Department and the hospital have a system of checks and balances to prevent mistakes, but sometimes they happen anyway.
Emergency - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 46,764 - Reviews: 206 - Favs: 68 - Follows: 111 - Updated: 2/19 - Published: 2/2/2012 - R. DeSoto, J. Gage - Complete
The Anomaly Within reviews
New Dawn is over, or is it? Connor has gone from the lowest point in his personal & professional life to the highest point, but something just isn't sitting right with him. Every time he looks at Matt, his stomach churns uncomfortably. He knows he is missing something; something huge, something important, something so obvious that he simply can't see it, but it changes everything.
Primeval - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 22,741 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 6/30/2013 - Published: 6/22/2013 - Connor T., Abby M., J. Lester, Matt A. - Complete
Square Peg Round Hole reviews
Something has been bothering Merlin, and Arthur wants to know what it is. On a trip meant to discover what is ailing Merlin, Arthur learns more than he bargained for. Note that all of my stories are Friendship only - NO SLASH!
Merlin - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 23 - Words: 89,814 - Reviews: 563 - Favs: 496 - Follows: 660 - Updated: 2/24/2013 - Published: 11/26/2009 - Arthur, Merlin
The Science of Deduction's 1st Student reviews
Series 2 left us with a puzzle to figure out. This is my solution. So obviously spoilers for everything. Characters John, Lestrade, Mycroft, Mrs. Hudson & of course Sherlock Holmes. Now complete. 3-1-13 typos fixed and story tweaked to read better.
Sherlock - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,844 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 2/11/2013 - Published: 2/5/2013 - John W., Mycroft H. - Complete
To Buy or Not To Buy Tag reviews
Dropping from the bridge support while attached to a lifeline and flopping around like a rag doll while holding a seizing teenager had unforeseen consequences for John Gage. Story is now completely posted. TKX for reading.
Emergency - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,302 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 1/6/2012 - Published: 1/3/2012 - J. Gage, R. DeSoto - Complete
Valor Rests Between a Rock and a Hard Wave reviews
People he loves have been killed, kidnapped, or strapped with explosives, but it is his partner's sightless eyes staring at him accusingly that will haunt him forever - Not a death fic
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 8 - Words: 35,590 - Reviews: 156 - Favs: 78 - Follows: 178 - Updated: 6/13/2011 - Published: 3/12/2011 - Steve M., Danny W.
Pu'uwai Puhi reviews
One-Shot : Danny suffers repercussions from his day. Tag to E Malama
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,040 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 4 - Published: 2/15/2011 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
Moral Measure reviews
Episode Tag for The Last Dragon Lord. Canon characterizations only. This fic answers questions begging to be asked and ties up loose ends left hanging after the last episode of season 2. Now Complete
Merlin - Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 31,911 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 353 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 2/2/2010 - Published: 1/18/2010 - Merlin, Arthur - Complete
The Heart of Magic reviews
Something sinister has happened in Camelot and by all appearances, Merlin is at the heart of it. The young warlock must battle through a mysterious ailment and profound malaise to find an answer that lies beyond magic. No slash.
Merlin - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 14 - Words: 68,926 - Reviews: 290 - Favs: 341 - Follows: 113 - Updated: 12/8/2009 - Published: 10/3/2009 - Merlin, Arthur - Complete
The Methods of Intolerance reviews
Charlie, Amita and their families get a closer look at what intolerance really means. They each find out what preconceptions they harbor in their own hearts and how to come to terms with them.
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 33 - Words: 103,518 - Reviews: 305 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 117 - Updated: 11/24/2009 - Published: 2/27/2008 - Charlie E., Amita R.
For the Love of Camelot reviews
Episode tag for Le Morte d'Arthur. Arthur finally realizes what Merlin was trying to say to him the previous evening. Characters: Arthur, Gwen, Hunith
Merlin - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,430 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 97 - Follows: 13 - Published: 8/27/2009 - Arthur - Complete
One More Lie reviews
The end of the episode Sex and Violence needed another scene. This is my tag for that episode. Per reader request; Sam's POV added as a second chapter.
Supernatural - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,786 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 2/25/2009 - Published: 2/17/2009 - Dean W., Sam W. - Complete
Dear Diary, What's Wrong With Me? reviews
Preseries oneshot. Margaret writes in her diary about the Memorial Day weekend that she almost lost her son. Based on a true event. Updated for errors: Thanks 'mikiss'
Numb3rs - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,292 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/27/2009 - Published: 5/31/2007 - Complete
I'm Your Brother reviews
The brothers must deal with the psychological repercussions related to a severe trauma that Don endures. Fic challenge for Calling All Authors forum.
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,351 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 2 - Published: 2/7/2008 - Don E., Charlie E. - Complete
Memento Vivere Remember to Live reviews
Sometimes one needs to lead by example. Charlie wants David and Colby to remember what is important in life because it can be taken away in an instant. Remember to Live before it's too late. Part two in a series of three stories.
Numb3rs - Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 32,807 - Reviews: 172 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 11/15/2007 - Published: 10/29/2007 - Complete
Faith in your Partner reviews
David struggles with his feelings after the team rescues Colby. Updated to reflect new cannon. December 3rd 2007Part one in a series of three stories.
Numb3rs - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,532 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 10/9/2007 - Published: 10/3/2007 - David S., Colby G. - Complete
A Promise to Keep reviews
REVISED March 4th 2007 Oneshot: Missing scene from Take Out. Charlie shares a secret from his past hoping to help Don save his future. Rating for subject matter.
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,856 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 3 - Published: 3/1/2007 - Don E., Charlie E. - Complete
Friendship Isn't Charity reviews
This OneShot is in response to Elysium's Fan fic challenge.
Numb3rs - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,119 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Published: 8/24/2006 - Charlie E., Alan E. - Complete
Anxiety reviews
Can Charlie, with the help of David and Larry, master his fears in time to save his brother from a killer that has targeted the FBI? Can he now save both of them from a mob hit? COMPLETE
Numb3rs - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 51 - Words: 194,570 - Reviews: 604 - Favs: 90 - Follows: 59 - Updated: 7/14/2006 - Published: 10/16/2005 - Complete
Run the Numbers reviews
After an accident that leaves him with no memory of who he is, Charlie is kidnapped by two ruthless men who force him to decode encrypted data that was stolen from a biogenetics laboratory. REVISED July 06
Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 13 - Words: 24,470 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 7/13/2006 - Published: 5/23/2005 - Complete
Absolution reviews
Can Don help Charlie find some peace after a child porn case turns his life upside down and dredges up a secret from his past? ONE SHOT In Plain Sight Spoilers COMPLETE
Numb3rs - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,163 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 5 - Published: 11/20/2005 - Complete
The Enemy Within reviews
When Charlie turns up missing Don and the team, with the help of Jack Malone and Danny Taylor from NY start to search for him. As they unravel the last few days of Charlie's life, their search for him becomes a race to save his life. COMPLETE
Crossover - Without a Trace & Numb3rs - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 11 - Words: 50,856 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 85 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 7/18/2005 - Published: 6/25/2005 - Jack M., Don E. - Complete