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Joined 05-28-05, id: 822393, Profile Updated: 05-20-10
Author has written 10 stories for Star Wars, .hack/SIGN, Vampire Hunter D, and Naruto.

Type of FanFiction I like-

Good NaruHina - Those who write good NaruHina fics, thank you for your stories.

Stories that are very original - To the authors of such stories as Team Eight, keep up the good work. To those who keep on repeating the same thing over, please try to be original in some way.

Stories that have a proper flow of narration - What I mean by this is that stories should have a proper flow to them without interruptions. In other words, leave the 'color commentaries' for the Author's Note at either the beginning or end of the chapter. Also translations should also be at the beginning of the story or at the end. Examples-

Hinata picked up the white rabbit. (Ah, isn't that cute?)

Hinata picked up the white rabbit.

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! (Shadow Clone Technique!) Wrong!

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! Right!

Stories that have decent proofreading - I don't think I have to explain.

Stories that I despise -

Naruto (or Whoever) Godliness-Can't Do Anything Wrong/Everyone Else Incompetent - These two overused ideas go hand in hand like a really bad relationship. Just because Naruto(or whoever) is 'godlike' doesn't mean the rest of the cast should be portrayed as incompetent idiots. It's an insult to their fans and to the characters.

Harem Trap - Not a fan of Harem in general but Harem Trap stories piss me off. What is a Harem Trap? Well basically its a story where reader thinks they are reading a story about their favorite pairing. Then the 'pairing' turns 'harem' at some point with zero warning at all from the author. While Harem Traps are rare and authors are kind enough to give a warning having a harem in their story, Harem Trap stories still exist.

On a side note about NaruHina and Harems - While Hinata is the most unselfish character in the series, I don't think she is that unselfish. If a harem situation pops up in a NaruHina fic, Hinata would either fight off 'competition' or give up on Naruto all together. Naruto influence on Hinata in canon has made her a bit of an 'all or nothing' type person. In other words, Hinata will either get 'Naruto all to herself' or Naruto will get 'nothing from Hinata'.

Excessive Character Bashing - Not exactly a fan of Sakura and Sasuke but there is such a thing as taking things too far. The same thing applies for stories that bash Naruto and Hinata or whoever. If people are going to bash a character then make up a plausible reason for doing so and not something that's been done before.

Perpetual Douche Bag Hiashi - Yeah, it makes great drama for some reason why Hiashi doesn't care for Hanabi, Hinata, or Neji along with the resulting verbal abuse toward them. However, if a fanfic has Neji vs. Hinata and Naruto vs. Neji with the same results as they do in canon then Hiashi should also be given the same end results in that he knows he royally screwed up his relationships with his daughters and nephew and is fix things instead of continuing the Hyuga Soap Opera.

Misplaced/Mixing Priorities Sasuke - It's supposed to Revenge First, Repopulating Clan Second. Not Revenge First Get Laid[Usually Through Attempted Rape] Whenever The Chance Arises. As stated before, not a Sasuke fan but making him rapist is not only OOC, it's also insulting to his fans. . .yeah, it's strange he still does have fans.

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Like Me by KonohasBlackReaper reviews
During a run in with Orochimaru, Sakura and her friends find themselves outmatched. He discusses Team seven and the Sannin team, looking for who matches who. Orochimaru's observations shock everyone. A short one shot.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,074 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 1,378 - Follows: 338 - Updated: 7/13 - Published: 3/12/2013 - Naruto U., Orochimaru - Complete
War of the Biju: Fourth Shinobi World War by Son Kenshin reviews
Madara has declared War on the nations of the World as Naruto becomes Hokage in the wake of Pain's invasion of Konoha. Naruto has to master the Kyubi to prepare to face him and Akatsuki, which includes his former friend Sasuke Uchiha. Naru/Hina
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 26 - Words: 200,666 - Reviews: 491 - Favs: 961 - Follows: 883 - Updated: 5/27 - Published: 10/3/2010 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Twelve Shattered Mirrors by Solvdrage reviews
Uzumaki Naruto never abandons his promises, even in defiance of time. Fleeing a terrible future betrayal after Pain's invasion, Naruto seeks to restore the dream of Konoha by destroying the reality of Konoha.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 64,474 - Reviews: 302 - Favs: 799 - Follows: 880 - Updated: 2/24 - Published: 3/10/2011 - [Naruto U., Hinata H.]
Ripples by Caike reviews
The effects of a single ripple can change the waves of a pond forever. See how a single change to the beginning of the story can have major consequences. What if Hinata had been placed on Team 7? Read to find out. NaruHina, rated T for now, M later.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 75,330 - Reviews: 433 - Favs: 563 - Follows: 664 - Updated: 10/22/2014 - Published: 3/31/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Hakumei by Pryotra reviews
Danzo's plan for the assassination of the Hokage was almost flawless. To bad he didn't take six neglected children who ran away the night of the murder into account.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 270,839 - Reviews: 2662 - Favs: 5,291 - Follows: 3,998 - Updated: 12/15/2013 - Published: 3/8/2008 - Naruto U. - Complete
Team Seven by Kyuubi16 reviews
Inspired by Team 8. Though without all the character bashing, more character complaint, and AU in certain parts. What if Kakashi decided to be serious and train his three students, bringing out their true potential? Team Seven is transformed into a force to be recoken with as a result. Naruto x ?. Kakashix? Image done by Yryahuln.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,868 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 145 - Follows: 195 - Updated: 5/2/2013 - Published: 3/17/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H., Team Seven, Kakashi H.
Summoner Nin by the point reviews
Her mother gave her a scroll to sign in blood. A scroll she kept hidden. Years flew by and she found herself signing more and more scrolls in blood. She soon became something even demons feared. Hinata Hyuga, the summoner nin.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 35 - Words: 146,883 - Reviews: 1831 - Favs: 1,659 - Follows: 1,487 - Updated: 12/9/2012 - Published: 12/10/2006 - Hinata H.
Cracked Mask by Denim88 reviews
Hueco Mundo; home of vicious and horrendous souls called Hollows. Then HE became one of them. Naruto will prove that even as a Hollow, life is determined by one's own beliefs, and shake the foundation of the spiritual world as a result. Naruto/Bleach fic
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 19 - Words: 208,332 - Reviews: 2255 - Favs: 4,662 - Follows: 3,901 - Updated: 7/12/2011 - Published: 2/15/2009 - Naruto U.
Stuck In A Loop by Inuyonas reviews
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha, My likes are NOT you, and my dislikes ARE you..." NOT YAOI!
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 25 - Words: 20,844 - Reviews: 254 - Favs: 163 - Follows: 80 - Updated: 5/23/2011 - Published: 4/1/2010 - Naruto U., Sasuke U. - Complete
Legend of the Blond Aburame by Sonson-Sensei reviews
Naruto had been taken in by the Aburame clan now see what effects this will have on his life major one's I can say that now NaruHina AU
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 44 - Words: 302,465 - Reviews: 1716 - Favs: 1,880 - Follows: 1,536 - Updated: 4/4/2011 - Published: 2/21/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
One Change can Affect Everything by Scormio reviews
One small change in Naruto's life can have ripple effects changing not only his life, but those around him. NaruHina.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 43,037 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 159 - Follows: 189 - Updated: 1/9/2011 - Published: 3/17/2010 - Hinata H., Naruto U.
It's For a Good Cause, I Swear! by Sarah1281 reviews
After receiving a time travel jutsu as payment for a mission, the original four members of Team 7 each get a chance to go back to one event in their life and change it. Surely they will use such an awesome power responsibly...right? Don't count on it.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 36 - Words: 114,594 - Reviews: 5929 - Favs: 9,323 - Follows: 3,529 - Updated: 3/5/2010 - Published: 9/28/2009 - Team Seven - Complete
It's an Odd Coincidence by Telcontar Rulz reviews
AU. Logan 'Wolverine' Howlett finds himself in a very strange place. He tries to figure everything out, but he seems cause more problems than solve them. Will he be able to deal with it, and will he ever get home? A crossover between X-Men and LotR.
Crossover - Lord of the Rings & X-Men: The Movie - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 57 - Words: 325,415 - Reviews: 1457 - Favs: 1,152 - Follows: 551 - Updated: 2/26/2010 - Published: 1/30/2009 - Aragorn, Logan/Wolverine - Complete
Blind: Extended Edition by Tazaki4 reviews
A new twist on the classic Naruto. Two changes occur in the first three years of the story. Hiashi is Naruto's caretaker and Hinata's kidnapping attempt is partially... successful. New additional content, deleted scenes, less typos, and overall improved.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 38 - Words: 224,777 - Reviews: 1762 - Favs: 1,693 - Follows: 787 - Updated: 2/22/2010 - Published: 9/9/2007 - Hinata H., Naruto U. - Complete
Four Man Squads by 109th Star reviews
What if in the Naruto universe, the powers that be decided that Four Man Teams were to be the norm instead of Three Man Teams, how would things change? Rating upped from T to M for language also lemons may be appearing in later chapters
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 204,345 - Reviews: 204 - Favs: 321 - Follows: 296 - Updated: 1/8/2010 - Published: 9/3/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
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Hyuuga Hokage reviews
In an unexpected twist Tsunade chooses Hinata to be her successor if anything happens to her when Pein/Nagato attacks Kohona. How will Hinata handle her new duties, the truth of Tsuande's decision, and why is Hinata hearing a voice?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 9,667 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 19 - Published: 11/11/2011 - Hinata H.
Stolen Bonds reviews
The dust has settled after Pain's invasion and Hinata goes to speak to Naruto about her confession. Too bad Naruto's reaction is the worst thing possible. A NaruHina story where Ino plays a major part in uncovering a crime against Naruto. Some AU stuff.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,427 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 12/7/2009 - Published: 11/19/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Insight into the Heart reviews
With all the issues that's been dumped on Naruto in just a short time, he has been depressed. Hinata visits him to get him open up on why he does the thing he does and what it is he truly desires.
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,915 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/12/2009 - Hinata H., Naruto U. - Complete
Worst Enemy reviews
Naruto and Hinata were supposed to be happily married for a long time until one day Hinata is brutally murdered in front of Naruto. Now Naruto seeks out his worst enemy to exact his revenge. . .and nothing as it seems!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,573 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/21/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Meanwhile In The Real World reviews
An AU story. What if Chigusa AKA Atoli confronts Toru AKA Sakaki in the real world about he and AIDA did to her at the end of GU Vol. 1? Let's just say its not a pretty picture at all. Story is rated M for graphic violence and strong language.
.hack/SIGN - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,124 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Published: 6/24/2007 - Complete
Dhampire No More reviews
D looses his vampire side and becomes completely human. Will he try to regain his lost powers or will he dare to live the impossible dream and 'have a life' Some chapters might be 'M' rated. I will indicate which ones are at the beginning of each chapter.
Vampire Hunter D - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 12,470 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/13/2006 - Published: 3/6/2006
The Rabbit Hole reviews
Alice Warren is the newest victim of The World's habit of trapping people in the game. In her case being trapped is not a matter of being in a coma but something worse. If she does not find a way to escape The World she will die for sure!
.hack/SIGN - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,388 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 6/12/2006 - Published: 10/31/2005
D is for ? reviews
Everyone assumes D is the halfbreed son of Dracula. Is this the truth or is there more to the enigmatic vampire hunter called D?
Vampire Hunter D - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,834 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/1/2006 - Complete
HackPolarized reviews
Update Story is 100 Percent Complete! Chase is the new successor of the character Kite and Shugo. Before Chase can solve the threat to The World he must first solve the mystery concerning himself.
.hack/SIGN - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 46,648 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/7/2005 - Published: 6/15/2005 - Complete
Staring at the Apex of the Dark Side reviews
Its Obi-Wan versus Darth Vader round two. This time with one major difference. Obi-Wan has fallen to the Dark Side of the Force! Takes place just after EP III. Please review after reading.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Angst/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,355 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/1/2005
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