Author has written 2 stories for Naruto.
Hello. As you can see I am a Naruto fan and that is the reason for me to try this ficc. Some of my favorites kinds of ficcs are the ones that have an original plot, dark Naruto, Time travel and Harem. Is for that reason that I would like to made these challenges in case that that some of you want to take them.
But Also I would like to thank dracohalo117 for be my new Beta.
The first one is to make their own version of this ficc. The reason of that is because I would to see the opinions and ideas that you could have for this plot.
The second one is an idea that I have after talking with NYCDMan. He wanted to made a Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi ficc with the plot that on the Hyuga-Kumo incident Kumo succeeds in the kidnapping of both (Fraternal twins) and after some years they become kumo shinobis but meet Naruto and he manage to convince them to return to Konoha. But the problem with that plot was that Kumo wanted babies' makings machines, no two more shinobis. So I got the idea about a new turn on the Hyuga-kumo incident.
The idea would be that on the night of the Hyuuga kidnapping, the one that stop the kumo shinobi was not Hiashi but his wife the mother of Hinata and Hanabi. It can be that she was sick and weak but when she saw her daughters on danger she did what every mother would do for her childrens and stop the kumo shinobi at the price of her life and she died as a result of the fight with Hinata and Hanabi (if you decide to make the twin plot) seeing everything. This will create many changes like.
1. The kumo ninja didnt died and was arrested by the Anbu. Even if the Hyuga clan wanted his dead, the Hokage use him to expose the plan of Kumo and when they tryed to deny what happened and claim compensation; the Hokage threat them that he will send a report about how a kumo diplomatic kill a mother and tried to kidnap her child before been arrested with a copy of all the evidence. The Raikage seeing that he will lose a lot of business choose desist and allow Konoha to punish the diplomatic. As result the father of Negi will live and he will be different.
2. After seeing how their mothers sacrifice her life to save them Hinata and Hanabi (if you decide to make the twin plot) started to believe that if they shall been stronger her mother would still be alive so they focus on their training; also they developed a great hate against Kumo. Because of their power and cool personality they are call the "iron maidens".
3. About how the fell in love with Naruto. It could be that the incident when Naruto save Hinata from a group of bullies was a couple of years sooner and also included Hanabi. It can also be that the twins were after their pet when they were attacked by the bullies and Naruto save them. Also that it was the mother of the twins the one that showed up and she helped Naruto and thanked him to protect their childs, after that she tell her daughters to be nice to Naruto, on the next weeks she and the twins spend some time with Naruto until the mother got sick and then the incident when she died. At first the twins are sad and later mad at Naruto because he didnt show up at the funeral and start to treat him coldly but one day when they were very sad they decide to visit their mother grave just to find Naruto there and hear him say "I am sorry for not pay you a visit when you were sick but the guards did not let me see you on your home, even in the funeral they didnt allow me to be close to you to say good bye and to give my condolences to Hinata-chan and Hanabi-chan, they even destroyed the flowers that I brought you; they say that the flowers from a demon are evil and they didnt want them close of you. I dont know why the people hate me but you and the twins were the only ones to be nice with me, you show me what the real smile of a mother was and even if the twins are mad with me now I will help them from the distance".
When the twins hear that they regret how they treated Naruto, but because their Hyuga pride they dont know how to apologize with him, So they start to not been so cool with him like they were with the others, and also start to follow him and by that they fell in love with him but couldnt gather the courage to tell him because they deep inside are still shy and dont want to hurt each other by admit that they love the same boy.
Both challenge are Naruto/Hinata or Naruto/Harem with Hinata been part of it. In case that you will accept the challenge please tell me you I can inform the others about your ficc each time that I update my ficc.
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