Author has written 7 stories for Avatar: Last Airbender, Naruto, Invader Zim, Dragon Age, and Pokémon.
Hello, I am Necromancer Luna, this is my profile. Life has a funny way of dragging me in and out of here, I wanted you all to know I do plan on revising and giving a sequel to I love the Man Behind the mask- as for Bending Fate- I am closing it. I might even take it down at this point. My Invader Zim Fic may be taken down as well, they have no muse left and are also closed. As for my Dragon Age fanfiction, it's also probably going to be taken down as well. I have other ideas but who knows if they'll get to paper or not. I am not on here often enough anymore, I am married trying to graduate college, work a very demanding full time job and am trying to start a career.
My reviews, ARE NOT TO BE TAKEN PERSONAL! As a writer myself I have been subjected to constructive criticism, flames, and what I call spaz reviews (the ones that are in encouraging in the sense someone is excited about it but doesn't offer any suggestions((I do them sometimes to, when I am brain dead at 3am after reading a fanfic I enjoyed))). My reviews are simply observations on what I can see that will help your writing and vice versa, if you read one of my stories and notice something i could make better please tell me! Now, some people wonder, what's a flame and what's constructive criticism (cc, i'll call it for typing purposes). A flame is this:
Your story is stupid and predictable, I can't believe people read this! Learn how to write!
CC is this:
I noticed that your telling us too much, try to be more subtle. Show don't tell us. Show us he's angry through his words and mannerisms not telling us he's angry.
so if I review your story and point something out, please do not PM me with a list of complaints about how I don't follow my own advise. That's why I post it here, for people to review it and TELL me what I can't see. I simply want to return the favor and point things out for improvement, everyone needs to improve, myself included.
Avatar the Last Airbender: ZukoxKatara, AangxToph, SokkaxSuki/Yume, SokkaxToph and MaixTylee
Dragon Age 2: Fenrisxfemale mage Hawke. I have this weird thing for MerrillxCarver as well, it's kinda strange.
Pokemon Go: SparkxChloe, SparkxBalanche, OT3 Team Leaders.