Author has written 9 stories for Xenosaga, Ugly Betty, Avatar: Last Airbender, Naruto, Invader Zim, and Dragon Age.
Hello, I am Necromancer Luna, this is my profile. I am letting my followers know that due to life and lack of a muse my Invader Zim stories are on a extended Hiatus. I love the Man Behind the Mask Fanfiction is getting a sequel. I am very late on it and I am so sorry, but Dragon Age II has stolen my life currently and won't let me go! But it will be coming some time in the near future.
My reviews, ARE NOT TO BE TAKEN PERSONAL! As a writer myself I have been subjected to constructive criticism, flames, and what I call spaz reviews (the ones that are in encouraging in the sense someone is excited about it but doesn't offer any suggestions((I do them sometimes to, when I am brain dead at 3am after reading a fanfic I enjoyed))). My reviews are simply observations on what I can see that will help your writing and vice versa, if you read one of my stories and notice something i could make better please tell me! Now, some people wonder, what's a flame and what's constructive criticism (cc, i'll call it for typing purposes). A flame is this:
Your story is stupid and predictable, I can't believe people read this! Learn how to write!
CC is this:
I noticed that your telling us too much, try to be more subtle. Show don't tell us. Show us he's angry through his words and mannerisms not telling us he's angry.
so if I review your story and point something out, please do not PM me with a list of complaints about how I don't follow my own advise. That's why I post it here, for people to review it and TELL me what I can't see. I simply want to return the favor and point things out for improvement, everyone needs to improve, myself included.
Invader Zim: ZaGr, DaTr, slightly into GaGr and TaGr. Yay bisexual Gaz!
Avatar the Last Airbender: ZukoxKatara, AangxToph, SokkaxSuki/Yume, SokkaxToph and MaixTylee
Dragon Age 2: Fenrisxfemale mage Hawke. I have this weird thing for MerrillxCarver as well, it's kinda strange.
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