Author has written 8 stories for Xenosaga, Ugly Betty, Avatar: Last Airbender, Naruto, and Invader Zim.
Uh, well Hi I guess, welcome to my profile, I am Necromancer Luna, I was once chaosxshion if that's who you're looking for, she's dead. LOL symbolically. I want to say it's been a good 6 years since I published my first story and since then have deleted most of them. I have grown dramatically as a writer and a person in those six years so a few month ago I decided to change my name to my original character's name from the novel I am working on as a way to show the internet world I have been reborn so to speak.
Basic info about myself is simple for those of you not willing to get to know me. I am a 21 year old Libra located somewhere in the United States of America. I am fun loving and pretty laid back. I work and go to Uni so it can be hard for me to update or respond.
My reviews, ARE NOT TO BE TAKEN PERSONAL! As a writer myself I have been subjected to constructive criticism, flames, and what I call spaz reviews (the ones that are in encouraging in the sense someone is excited about it but doesn't offer any suggestions((I do them sometimes to, when I am brain dead at 3am after reading a fanfic I enjoyed))). My reviews are simply observations on what I can see that will help your writing and visa versa, if you read on of my stories and notice something i could make better please tell me! Now, some people wonder, what's a flame and what's constructive criticism (cc, i'll call it for typing purposes). A flame is this:
Your story is stupid and predictable, I can't believe people read this! Learn how to write!
CC is this:
I noticed that your telling us too much, try to be more subtle. Show don't tell us. Show us he's angry through his words and mannerisms not telling us he's angry.
so if I review your story and point something out, please do not PM me with a list of complaints about how I don't follow my own advise. That's why I post it here, for people to review it and TELL me what I can't see. I simply want to return the favor and point things out for improvement, everyone needs to improve, myself included.
Now enough about that, as for my stories
I am an Invader Zim fan, I've just been in the closet about it for the longest time but I came out so to speak (XD) and will be shortly posting an update and posting more soon.
All other stories have either been deleted or discontinued and will stay that way.
Invader Zim: ZaGr, DaTr, slightly into GaGr and TaGr. Yay bisexual Gaz!
Avatar the Last Airbender: ZukoxKatara, AangxToph, SokkaxSuki/Yume, SokkaxToph and MaixTylee
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