Author has written 10 stories for Phantom of the Opera, Lord of the Rings, Silmarillion, Batman Begins/Dark Knight, and Hobbit.
I'm a university student. So if you see a mistake please point it out. I'm constantly learning, so I would welcome your critiques.
I've been a fan of the LotR movies since '01, and the books since '03. I read the Hobbit around '03 as well, but I haven't refreshed myself on the subject matter. I do remember the ending though, so I'm internally cursing Tolkien over it.
I have a new fan fiction that should be a step up from all my other works. Check it out, and critique me. I would appreciate it.
Note for people checking my bio after I "criticize" your work.
I critique so you can understand what went wrong, and so you can become the better writer for it. I'm not asking you to become Mark Twain over night. You're not perfect, I'm not perfect, but I am asking you to embrace my critiques with a bit of grace. I want to read your work, but if I have to bust some balls to get people to grow as a writer, then balls shall be busted.
There could be a worst wake up call, your work could've been tagged in a community such as The Worst [insert-fandom-here] Fiction Ever. I once was, and it was terrible.
Diamonds are Forever officially has been abandoned, but it may be adopted. Please PM me if you want it.
I wish to rant, therefore I shall.
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