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01/16/2011- There is something wrong with some of you.
If there is something you liked about my story and you want me to know or if you have some constructive criticism for Invisibly Jaded, please feel free to leave a review on the story. I'm still working on my writing to this day, so receiving comments on old work can help. If you just want to mock someone, then there are plenty of current stories out there with plots even weaker than mine that have been written by kids who stopped learning how to write when they were six years old and don't know the difference between "you're" and "your."
I have this account set up to an e-mail address I often only check once every couple of weeks, but I see that I'm still getting some really really crappy reviews about how bad my story is. HELLO! I started writing the stupid thing five freaking years ago. I did some editing and fixing but never finished, nor did I post it to the story as it stands on my account. It's been discontinued by me. I wrote it in the summary. I wrote it at the top of the first chapter. The entire section where chapter 9 would have gone is a note from me explaining the situation.
I disabled anonymous reviews, so if you feel the need to tell me how stupid I am, I will at least be able to reply and tell you that you're an idiot.
LightningHunter is trying to straighten the awkward frame of a story I left, strengthening some weak or vague points. Maybe it's successful and maybe it isn't. I guess it depends on what you're looking for.
If you started reading Invisibly Jaded because you wanted yet another story where Harry is treated poorly and then turns into a god-like being, comes back for revenge, and does nothing but mindlessly kick the crap out of everyone for the next eighty chapters, you didn't read the correct story for you. If you think Harry was abused terribly as a child, you're confusing my story with the hundreds of other twin stories. Harry wasn't treated well, true, but he certainly wasn't abused and treated completely terribly. There was unfairness to his situation, but part of it was stress and misunderstanding on the part of both him and his parents, and part of it was caused by the unknowing public who really had no reason to care for Harry at all, as far as they knew. Harry never completely hated his own family. He was angry. He'd been abruptly separated for a long time. He wasn't eager to spend time bonding with them or to pretend they were the perfect family. There was, however, a small part of him that was willing to give his family a chance or two to figure out their situation and fix things. If I failed to portray this, sorry. If you read everything I wrote through the haze of similar stories and don't like mine because it wasn't exactly like the others, sorry. Pay attention.
5/14/08- Link to LightningHunter's continuation of Invisibly Jaded. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4255944/1/Invisibly_Jaded
4/29/08 - Invisibly Jaded is going to be continued by LightningHunter.
UPDATE: 3/21/2008- I am no longer writing "Invisibly Jaded." It has been almost a year since I have updated, but I am still getting many story alerts. I had intended to edit this story, so I have copies stored on my computer of edited chapters 1-8, but have not uploaded anything, and likely never will. I'm not even sure if I finished editing or not, since some parts took some pretty major changes. There has been a partial chapter 9 in my computer since probably about a month after my last posted chapter.
3/25/07-Invisibly Jaded chapter eight up and running.
2/10/07- IJ ch 7 up.
10/26/06 (11:16 AM)- IJ ch 6 up. I added on another 600 words to chapter six, checked through it and posted away.
10/26/06 (1:58 AM)- Wow. It's been forever. I'm still alive though! Ummm...I'm still getting a review every once-in-a-while for my story, so I'm still going to try and write. I suck. I did actually tag on a few more chunks to chapter six. Right now though, it's just shy of three thousand words, and I would probably feel stupid posting such a weeny chapter after making y'all wait six months at this point. Ehhhhh! It isn't even at a good ending point. I'm gonna do this. I am bound and determined.
And on a completely unrelated side note, I learned about penis envy in psychology today. Weird stuff, man, weeeeiiird stuff. We all laughed like five year olds.
7/30/06- IT'S COMING! I did get my super-duper great new lappy and it is wunnnerfulllll!...except that I don't have microsoft word on it--just word perfect which took me forever to get used to for some reason. I broke out my old crappy lappy yesterday, dusted it off, and pulled out the five-hundred or so words I had already written for chapter six and put it on my new laptop. I deleted a section at the end that I really hated, which means that whatever I had written in some notebook is useless. I started it up again and was getting all excited, when my sister came in to go to bed (we share a room) and repeatedly demanded that I quit typing, so I only got about a hundred words typed. Fortunately, the reason she wanted to go to bed so badly was because she was leaving today for band camp (which she did ten minutes ago from right now as I'm typing this). Now, I have nearly a whole week with just my parents, so I'll either have a lot of time to write, or my mom will try to drag me all over the place or make me do chores and crap since my brother and sister are away at band camp. Either way, this is just a notice to tell y'all that I am not giving up on my story!
By the way, I can sort of eat now. My jaw still hurts like heck and doesn't move as well as I'd like it too, but there is SOOO much less pain when I eat! Hurray!
That is all.
6/26/06-I apologize for my lack of updating. I had a lot of craziness going on at the end of school that manifested itself in the form of tons of projects, late nights, very little sleep, blah blah blah, et cetera. Then there was graduation, planning my own graduation party, blah-de blah, and some more stuff. I feel sort of stupid for having such a long break in between chapters, but I needed a stinkin' break. The sixth chapter is partially written in my old broken piece of crap laptop, partially in one of my school notebooks, and partially in my head. One of these days I'll get around to writing all my thank-you notes for graduation presents, and then I'll try and dig out the pieces of chapter six I have so far. I'm not even sure what I wrote at this point, but I don't think I liked it very much...but whatever, that's what editing is for. There will be a freaking chapter six. I have to go have some minor jaw surgery tomorrow morning, so I probably won't be out and about much. I'm so gonna miss solid food. Actually, I already do miss most solid foods. I haven't been able to eat properly in a year, and now I'm going to be forced to survive on milkshakes and 'nutritious beverages'. Feh. I want steak. Now. I kid you not. I miss steak. And carrots.
5/11/06- Someone killed crappy lappy. I went to my room and there were two keys completely shattered, two half shattered, and two more with just part of the key broken, and one key that now has a lovely 45 degree slope downwards, and the whole keyboard is screwed up, and only like, twelve keys actually work. I can't even find half the pieces, so it was definitely not an accident. Stupid siblings. No one is fessing up to it. Graduation needs to hurry up so I can get my new one.
4/21/06-IJ chapter5 up.
3/24/06-...my bad. Chapter five not ready yet. Packing for DISNEY TOMORROW right now!
3/22/06- Chapter five is now going through some rewriting. I'm hoping to have it up by Friday (the 24th) because I'm leaving on the morning of the 25th for DISNEY WORLD with the band. YAY FLORIDA! FLORIDA FLORIDA FLORIDA! Where it is hot and nice...I hope. It's freezing here in Ohio. There's like, snow and crap. I'm still wearing my winter coat everywhere. Brr...
3/9/06-Yeah, I'm still around. Still stuck on chapter 5. I think everyone is going to hate me when I get the chapter up.
2/19/06-Hmmm, it's been a while, neh? Someone just needs to save me from the wrath of English class. HELP! Nvm. Chapter five is probably about half finished now at any rate.
2/3/06-IJ chapter 4
1/22/06- IJ chapter 3
1/20/06- EXAMS ARE FREAKING OVER! hurray! whooo! random party noises!
1/17/06- IJ chapter 2
12/4/05- Invisibly Jaded chapter 1
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