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Joined 12-22-05, id: 955342, Profile Updated: 06-27-11
Author has written 11 stories for Ben 10, and Pokémon.


I've decided to be a Beta Reader for pokemon readers. Right now, my Beta Reading Profile is shot and I have no idea why and it's frustrating me. But I'll give you a run down what I prefer and what I don't want.


A story with a central theme, unique style or a interesting message.

Dynamic characters where we have a faulty protagonist and antagonists who later become allies to the protagonist.

A homosexual character or a character that transcends gender roles.

A feminist character (male or female)

A non-white character (or a story about racism in the Pokemon world)

A war story between two nations/lands where real battles are fought

A historical story (more than 100 years old, you can do a lot of interesting things here)

A mystery detective story. Kind of like Hercule Poirot. I would be willing to read and help out in this!


A story that takes place ONLY in OUR world! No fantastical things like a portal that takes the protagonist to the Pokemon world.


A story who's grammar points to an author who didn't bother to double check grammar.

Horribly flat characters including antagonists who's main purpose is just to be mean to the protagonist.

The incredibly hackneyed concept of stories revolving around the traditional adventure story or Pokemon Academies. If you feel that you have twisted one of these two concepts enough to create a new and original idea then I'll read it. Don't expect that I'll like it though...

And please for the love of Lugia no Eevee stories...


At the moment I have zero fans but it just got started so hopefully it will grow in popularity. If I like what I see then I'll post it on here.!/LibraSnake13

To see what a typical review of mine looks like, click the links below (This one was particularly bad...)

If I REALLY like what I see then my review can go something like this...

I don't know how long the Johto Kanto War story will be, nor do I know if I'll be able to finish it. What I will be able to say, that I wanted to write this story for a long time. The idea of a pokemon war seems exciting and interesting, as there are many interesting possibilities one could do with that.
Thank you if you are interested in reading the story, I'll do my best in it.
The list below will grow as the story progresses on and meets new characters.

List of Characters in The Johto Kanto War


Alastar IV: Emperor of Johto
Amos: Blacksmith in Cianwood Island
Boris: Miner in Cianwood Island
Charlie: Miner in Cianwood Island
Jerry Wilson: Soldier situated on Boon Island of the Sevii Islands, friend of Nathan Hekman
Korosi: Captain, situated in Blackthorn
Maggie: Barmaid in Mary Jane's pub
Mary Jane: Pub owner in Cianwood Island
Nathan Hekman: Soldier situated on Boon Island of the Sevii Islands, friend of Jerry Wilson
Vance Falkner: Skarmory Scout for Blackthorn

Katisha: a sneasel, captured in a traveling circus, friend of Setet
Setet: a scyther, captured in a traveling circus, friend of Katisha


Fint: General, Commander of the Army of Pewter of Kanto
Jurgen: Colonel of the 3rd Onix Division
Tungsten: Brigadier General of the Army of Pewter of Kanto

Magellan: A magmortar, artillery for the Kantoan Ship Seaking

Angel Of Mercy by Abare Tosanami reviews
Being a Nurse isn't all smiles and polite conversation. This particular Nurse Joy just wants to escape.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,028 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/26/2011 - Nurse Joy - Complete
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The Seven Deadly Sins reviews
7 stories. Each centered on one of the virulent Gatekeepers of Hell and their unholy sin. The end of the world is nigh. Gluttony: Canto III is up.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 7 - Words: 27,340 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/6/2011 - Published: 6/21/2011
The Autographed Gold Cartridge reviews
Obsessed with 2nd generation of Pokemon, Brian Dragonfly yearns to be Pokemon Master of Johto. However, he must fully realize how much strategy it takes to win at this "children's game" and fulfill his life long dream.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,008 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 8/6/2010 - Published: 7/12/2010
The Johto Kanto War reviews
More than a century ago, the peaceful nations of Johto and Kanto were once bitter enemies. Kanto, once a meek kingdom, has risen up against Johto to challenge its might and to battle it in a war to decide who shall rule the Pokemon world.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,610 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/14/2010 - Published: 12/23/2009
The Kind Froslass reviews
On a cold, snowy night, Hesten decides to go sledding to get away from the world and to enjoy life without problems. However, on that night, he met a Froslass that will forever change him.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,832 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Published: 12/10/2009 - Complete
How the Omnitrix came to be reviews
How did the Omnitrix came to be? Why were those particular aliens selected and how were they selected? Read to find the life of these aliens! Plus, I'm beginning to edit my grammar and story telling from the first chapters of 2006!
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 77 - Words: 130,102 - Reviews: 392 - Favs: 77 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 7/18/2009 - Published: 2/22/2006
Pokemon! Team America version! reviews
I'll warn you now, the only reason why this is T is only because it's language, that's it. This is basically a song that parody's the famous song from Team America. You know the one *wink wink*. Read this and you'll feel macho about pokemon!
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/21/2009 - Complete
Pikachu! Use Brain Eating Attack!
A zombie apocalypse is sweeping across the nation of Kanto! Who will survived this rotting, brain-eating fight to the finish? Follow six characters, each unique and different from each other, and see if they have what it takes to survive WORLD WAR Z!
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Horror/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,381 - Published: 6/13/2009
How the Omnitrix came to be: Alien Force reviews
How did the Omnitrix came to be and how were the aliens selected in the first place? Read on to find the life and adventures with the Alien Force aliens! Next chapter is up again!
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,627 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 3/20/2009 - Published: 4/19/2008
Ben vs Godzilla reviews
It is the clash of the titans! Who will win in this awesome battle? It's Chapter 1 of the new amazing series!
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 310 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1/15/2007
The Colourful Bounty Hunter reviews
Ben faces off against a bounty hunter that can paint extrodinary well. Ben thinks this bounty hunter is just another opponent. But don't be too sure, those colors he paints are so powerful, they can make you go insane. Day 3 has arrived!
Ben 10 - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,910 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 7/28/2006 - Published: 4/23/2006
The Twelve Days of Christmas in Ben 10 style reviews
Happy late...uh...Christmas Everyone! YAY!
Ben 10 - Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 531 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 4 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
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