Author has written 5 stories for Harry Potter, and Criminal Minds.
My two pet peeves in the Fan Fiction world are as follows: #1: unfinished and abandoned stories, especially without a reason given by the author. #2 people inaccurately representing a typically developing child's speech and language capabilities considering the age of said child. Examples include a 12 month old who has dozens of clear words and an understanding of abstract concepts and a five year old who cannot properly pronounce and string words together. The first example is not possible because of brain development and cognition and the second example would indicate a severe delay and the need for a speech language pathologist to be giving speech therapy.
Note: as I have said other places, my story "the final battle" needs editing, i am aware and appreciate all the comments and reviews that include mistakes that you see. I am not a writer by trade though I do have a college degree from a nationally known university, so please do not insult me with comments about my education level.
On a personal note I have a lengthy list of learning disorders including spelling and reading comprehension so please know that I am doing my best and that I have probably never been so proud of any piece of writing in my life. The piece is currently being edited so I have acknowledged my mistakes and I am trying to correct them.
Well, i don't have much to say but i promised that i would post some links to the wedding stuff i spoke of in my book Harry Potter and The Final Battle. the two sets of bridesmaid's dresses are loosely based on my own bridesmaids dresses from my wedding and the one i wore for my sisters. unfortunately, as time goes by, the dresses do not exist anymore and i can't show them...sorry!