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Joined 02-24-06, id: 997070
Author has written 2 stories for CSI.


I've been an integral part of a large on-line writers' guild for 12 years. I've used that venue to improve my writing, but along the way I also became very good friends with the majority of the participants. Unfortunately because of those friendships, I felt I wasn't getting unbiased critiques of my work. I decided to make the switch to a fresh venue that would/could make candid comments on the full work, not just the characters I wrote about.

Not here for debates or drama, just want to get some feedback on my work and hopefully provide some reading enjoyment for those that want to read my stuff.

A friend suggested my work looked like I wrote in scenes. So, I'm trying my hand at screen plays and episode work with my favorite shows.

Specifically, I'm working on dialogue flow and characterization.

Let me know how I'm doing!

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Infrared reviews
Sequel to Desdemona. Every action has consequences, even heroic ones. Does evil deserve justice? Who lives, who dies, final chapters! I have no affiliation with CBS or CSI, Please review! Thankies!
CSI - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 50,635 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/4/2007 - Published: 4/10/2006
Desdemona reviews
An investigation into the murder of a senator turns into a fight for their lives. The mysterious charm of a battered wife triggers Gil, Nick and Sara's sympathy into dangerous involvement beyond the case. I have no affiliation with CBS or CSI, Please R&R
CSI - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 29,102 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 4/6/2006 - Published: 3/1/2006 - Complete