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Some notes about Mare In Motion and MLP:FiM Season 3

(12/8/2012) Today is the day Scootaloo gets her own episode! I am very excited about the chance to learn more about Scootaloo. What I'm afraid of is it is also the day that so many open ends and assumptions that make my story work can be completely undone.

I have been planning this story for over a year (since season 2 was in progress, and the general idea before it involved Scootaloo started even earlier). As soon as season 2 ended, I decided that this story would take place based off of what we know up to the end of season 2. For the purposes of this story, I am locking out further canon. Even if a revelation in today's episode helps the story, don't expect to see it show up. That means no Crystal Empire, no Babs Seed, and no rumored Wonderbolts Academy.

The fact that I will not be using any season 3 continuity for my story is not a statement about whether I like the season. So far, season 3 is impressing me greatly. The problem is all it takes is one tiny clarification or new fact about Scootaloo in any of a number of categories, and the story no longer fits canon at all. That's how heavily my story works off of what is so far unknown about Scootaloo. Even though my story still works with the canon so far, I'm leaving it locked at Season 2 so I can tell the story I have been planning and becoming emotionally involved in for over a year.

The episode starts in 12 minutes now... Time for me to enjoy a first-ever episode dedicated to my favorite pony!

Edit: BEST EPISODE EVER. It does kinda fiddle with Mare In Motion, but not nearly as much as I expected. I was afraid we'd see something that would put [SPOILER] and [SPOILER] out the window, like meeting [SPOILER] or [SPOILER] learning to [SPOILER]. This episode could technically happen during my story, but like I said, canon is locked for the story and nothing from season 3 will appear in it.

An apology to fans of Shattered Rainbow
I would like to apologize to fans of Shattered Rainbow and its sequel Picking Up The Pieces. A few of you have PMed me asking if there was going to be a third installment. I replied to many of these confirming that a third story, "Never Alone" was near completion and I would likely publish it soon. This was far too long ago.

I was telling the truth about having the story near completion, at least in some interpretations. It is fully written, but I am not proud of it. I was very disappointed in the overall quality of the story, and this is why I did not release it.

I did get it pre-read by a few friends, who helped me clean up some inconsistencies in Applejack's speech, but that was about it. It wasn't until I gave the revised chapters a read that I realized there was no useful character development, and there was no real point to the story. All the story does is answer questions raised in Shattered Rainbow that I originally wanted to leave up to the reader to figure out. All the answers I provided were through characters I hadn't taken time to build properly even in my own mind.

I decided not to publish it out of embarrassment, but I have changed my mind and will begin uploading the chapters of "Never Alone". If you are satisfied with the resolutions already given in the stories you have read, you may want to ignore this one.

This will be the third and final story in the Shattered Rainbow timeline. I am no longer motivated to extend on this idea and it was done to death before I tried my spin on it. I will continue to write, but the next story you see will have no connection to the events of Shattered Rainbow and will be a completely separate continuity.

Again, I apologize for stringing many of you along with hope for this story. I hope uploading it, even after this long delay, will prove to be a good decision overall.


--Update: I have uploaded all seven chapters of "Never Alone".

My Little Pony:FiM -- Non-FFN favorites (These are stories I wish were here just so I could favorite them properly. Most are featured on Equestria Daily)

My Dream Mare by Lysis - I normally avoid shipping stories like the plague... This one is incredible though. Very tasteful, very emotional, and very well-done. Seems to have inspired at least one song, too (and I'm not surprised). If you like shipping, read it. If you don't like shipping, see my first sentence.

The Party Never Ended by ButterScotchSundae - Again, a shipping fic that defied my expectations. Very tastefully done, and with an adventure element as well. A few things struck me as off, such as a complete lack of M/F pairings, and one scene (only one) reminded me of why I don't usually like shipfics. Other than that, definitely worth reading. Warning: it drew tears in almost every chapter.

Painless by Anonthony - You can use colored fonts appropriately in a story? This is the first time I've seen it. This story offers an incredible look at the inside of a troubled mind. This one kept me up til almost 6AM on a workday (Luckily my shift starts at 1:30PM or I'd have had to call in). I'd call that a huge compliment.

My Little Dashie by ROBCakeran53 - Rainbow Dash in real life. WHY DID I WAIT so long to read this? I want to hug Dashie now. I'm tempted to squeeze the heck out of my cat right now.

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ARTICLE 2 by Muppetz540 reviews
The Princesses find an alien creature barely clinging to life at the scene of a terrifying crash. Can the Combined Power of the Elements of Harmony save it, or more importantly, should they save it?
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 21 - Words: 227,895 - Reviews: 173 - Favs: 276 - Follows: 298 - Updated: 12/16/2019 - Published: 12/2/2011 - Princess Celestia, Princess Luna/Nightmare Moon
Rain without Rainbows by Leoshi reviews
FiM "Make a wish." Rainbow Dash is granted an opportunity which seems false. But does that mean the wish was imagined? And whose wish is actually granted? "You cannot hope to beat me, dear Princess. Your Harmony lies broken!" Collab, slight AU.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 151,603 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 73 - Updated: 7/8/2014 - Published: 7/6/2011 - Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash - Complete
Rainbow After The Storm by milesprower06 reviews
Sequel to Journal of the Cupcake Killer and finale to the Cupcake Chronicles. Applejack and Rainbow confront doubts about their new relationship, and supernatural occurrences begin happening in Ponyville.
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 51,802 - Reviews: 157 - Favs: 106 - Follows: 57 - Updated: 5/13/2012 - Published: 2/26/2012 - Rainbow Dash, Applejack - Complete
Courage by bamakid reviews
Rainbow Dash has always been the bravest pegasus in Equestria, but is she brave enough to risk it all? Oneshot unless someone convinces me to make a sequel . No shipping intended.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,092 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 12/28/2011 - Published: 9/28/2011 - Rainbow Dash
The Price You Pay by Valkyra reviews
In the end, the prices we pay are worth what we receive in return - and none understand this more than a certain pegasus mare.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,665 - Reviews: 67 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 8 - Published: 12/26/2011 - Complete
A New Rainbow by rainbowflash reviews
Rainbow dash has had enough. A; her life shes been treated like trash, and now, she wants to end it. But things never turn out the way she wants them to. Still editing
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,884 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 12/15/2011 - Published: 7/27/2011 - Rainbow Dash
Harmony's Wrath by hahatimeforponies reviews
When Twilight and her friends are snowed into the library, they discover a book she doesn't recognise. It turns out, the story they find within hits much closer to home than they had expected. Diverges from canon after season 1.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 34 - Words: 84,719 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 77 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 10/23/2011 - Published: 8/15/2011 - Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Princess Celestia - Complete
Disfigured by soul punisher reviews
Why couldn't she see her beauty? Graphic.
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,774 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 10 - Published: 10/6/2011 - Rarity - Complete
Tears for the Devil by Epesi B reviews
Discord has been defeated, and all is well again. So why isn't Fluttershy as happy as her friends? Oneshot.
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,864 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 11 - Published: 9/25/2011 - Fluttershy - Complete
Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie Are Dead by MiloSaysRelax reviews
A tragic accident has claimed the lives of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie, but Twilight Sparkle thinks there is more to it. Will she find the answer to a question nopony asked, or is she just trying to distract herself from her own grief?
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,136 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 15 - Published: 9/5/2011
Rainbow Leap by hahatimeforponies reviews
Twilight has a speed test for Rainbow Dash, and she jumps at the call, but afterwards, something seems slightly off... Warnings: Weird plot, minor grimdark and shipping elements, heavy Cupcakes references.
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 12 - Words: 13,993 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 70 - Follows: 12 - Published: 8/13/2011 - Rainbow Dash - Complete
The Cupcake Killer by milesprower06 reviews
Sequel to "A Precious Rainbow." Several weeks into her recovery, Rainbow Dash begins experiencing pangs of guilt over the atrocities Pinkie committed. She spends a day in Ponyville, trying to ultimately accept that you can't change the past.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,649 - Reviews: 67 - Favs: 126 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 8/7/2011 - Published: 7/23/2011 - Rainbow Dash - Complete
Living the Dream by Ace2401 reviews
After a horrific, life-altering experience 3 weeks ago, Rainbow Dash has been left without her wings. Today, however, she receives a special visit from two prominent pegasi. What is it they could want with a wingless Rainbow Dash?
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,163 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 17 - Published: 7/31/2011 - Rainbow Dash, The Wonderbolts
A Precious Rainbow by milesprower06 reviews
Alternate ending to Cupcakes. A last-minute rescue saves Rainbow Dash from certain death. But now the scarred and broken Pegasus must accept how her life has changed, and find out how she can possibly move on.
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 17,853 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 357 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 7/13/2011 - Published: 6/30/2011 - Rainbow Dash, Applejack - Complete
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Consumed reviews
After stumbling upon references to Starswirl the Bearded's brief foray into the research of dreams, Twilight begins having frightening, morbid nightmares. What begins with skeptical curiosity about what Starswirl's research would have to say turns into a desperate plea for help as Twilight begins to doubt she is really dreaming.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,535 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/4/2013 - Twilight Sparkle
Mare In Motion reviews
Life was beginning to feel like everything an eager young pegasus could ask for when Scootaloo's idol, Rainbow Dash, offered her flying lessons. She learned the basics of flight and got to spend time with her favorite pony. It all seemed like a wish coming true until fate forced her back to the ground. Scootaloo must now decide whether her dreams are still within reach.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,375 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 3/4/2013 - Published: 12/7/2012 - Scootaloo
Never Alone reviews
Third and final story in the Shattered Rainbow series. Rainbow Dash takes a chance to audition for the Wonderbolts again, but her friends still worry about her.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 7 - Words: 10,670 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/2/2012 - Rainbow Dash - Complete
No Party Today reviews
Pinkie never showed up to the spa day Rarity invited all her friends to, and Rainbow Dash goes to find out why. Can Rainbow still be friends with Pinkie after learning why? T for implied violent scenes
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,846 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 24 - Published: 11/4/2011 - Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash - Complete
Picking Up The Pieces reviews
Sequel to Shattered Rainbow. After Rainbow Dash is released from the hospital, she discovers that her friends haven't recovered as well as she has.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,604 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 7 - Published: 9/28/2011 - Rainbow Dash - Complete
Shattered Rainbow reviews
Rainbow is devastated to learn that despite her best performance yet, she didn't pass the Wonderbolt tryouts. Incredibly distraught, she makes the worst decision any pony could. She survives, and learns more about friendship than she ever expected.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,678 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 71 - Follows: 8 - Published: 8/27/2011 - Rainbow Dash - Complete